高中英语议论文写作课件.ppt

高中英语写作高中英语写作-How to write -How to write an argumentationan argumentation（议论文）（议论文）1词汇词汇,句型句型 , 语法多样化语法多样化 1.覆盖了所有的覆盖了所有的要点要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构应用了较多的语法结构和词汇和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要要点点全全连连接接词词2三种不同要求 1只介绍自己观点 给出观点，陈述理由，重申观点给出观点，陈述理由，重申观点介绍 2两种不同观点并给出自己观点 3只介绍两种不同观点 3 只陈述只陈述自己观点自己观点的议论文的议论文4_ is the most suitable animal to be brought back to life. Here are the reasons.Firstly, _Secondly, _Finally, _ So I think _ would be the best choice to be brought back to life.5Sample report 1The great auk is the most suitable animal to be brought back to life. Here are the reasons：Firstly, its feathers dont absorb water, so its useful for protecting clothes from water.6Secondly, farmers can keep it as chicken to earn money.Finally, it became extinct recently, therefore its DNA is still in good condition.So I think the great auk would be the best choice to be brought back to life.7The dodo is the most suitable animal to be brought back to life. Here are the benefits：Firstly, its friendly and not harmful, so we can keep it as pet for children.Secondly, its large eggs and tasty meat could be developed for food.Sample report 28Finally, farmers can sell its feathers as decoration. So I think the dodo would be the best choice to be brought back to life.9假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为Lets Ride Bicycles的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbon life）；节能（energy saving）注意：1词数：120词左右；2演讲稿开头和结尾已给出，请将其抄写在答题卡上且该部分不计入总词数。Good morning, everyone,I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School The topic of my speech is Lets Ride Bicycles_Thank you!10参考例文：参考例文：Good morning, everyone,I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School The topic of my speech is Lets Ride BicyclesAs is known to all, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.11How can we solve the problems then? As far as Im concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles dont need any petrol and they are energy saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they wont give off waste gas. Whats more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.Therefore, lets take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!Thank you!122006高考浙江卷高考浙江卷 当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以 “Film or book, which do you prefer？” 为题，按照下为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：列要点写一篇英语短文：1.看电影：省时、有趣、易懂看电影：省时、有趣、易懂2.读原著：细节更多、语言优美读原著：细节更多、语言优美3.我的看法及理由我的看法及理由注意：注意：1. 词数词数100-120，文章题目和开头已给出，文章题目和开头已给出（不计词数）（不计词数） 2. 参考词汇：参考词汇： original work 或或 book in the original（原著）（原著）13 Film or book, which do you prefer？ Recently ,our class had a heated discussion over “which do you prefer, film or book?” Opinions vary from person to person. Some are in favor of the film, saying that it takes them less time to see a film. Besides, the film is more lively and interesting. However, others hold the opposite opinion. For one thing , reading the original book can get more detailed information. For another thing, the language in the original book is more varied and beautiful. I hold the opinion that reading the original book is a better way to understand the real meaning of the author, with a coffee , I will enjoy much in my quiet and comfortable reading room.14Recently ,our class had a heated discussion over “which do you prefer, film or book?” Opinions vary from person to person.Film or book, which do you prefer？ 15Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.16Others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original book. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.17Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading in my quiet and peaceful room, and whats more, I am able to better understand the authors ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.18Recently, our class had a heated discussion over /made a survey about)Opinions vary on this topic. Some are in favor of -.( For one thing -;for another -)However, others hold the opposite opinion. (Here are the reasons. First,Second, ) Part 1: (beginning)Part 2: (body) Part3: (conclusion)I hold the opinion that-191.(因为因为)_ his help, I finished the work at last.Thanks toAs a result ofOwing to Due to 因为因为Because of /with202.More roads will have to be built with more cars, _（所以）（所以）well have less field to grow rice. thereforeSo as a result/consequence thus 结果结果213.The rent is reasonable, _, the location is perfect. 房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。whats moremoreover/furthermorein addition besides 另外另外(递进）递进）224. The young man didnt enjoy his old job. _(相反相反 ) he finds the new job very interesting. On the contrary,However,转折转折But/yet/while235. _(总之总之), we should make good use of computer.In generalIn a word/all in all总结总结In short/briefGenerally speaking246._( (我认为我认为) ) students had better not buy a cellphone. We should spend time and money on other more important things.As far as Im concerned,In my opinion,/its my opinion that个人个人观点观点I think/believe25当前越来越多的人们关注住房问题。有人喜当前越来越多的人们关注住房问题。有人喜欢住在传统的房子里，有人喜欢住在公寓里，欢住在传统的房子里，有人喜欢住在公寓里，请你以请你以“Live in a traditional house or live in an apartment”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文。语短文。1.住在传统的房子里：可以在院子里种花，住在传统的房子里：可以在院子里种花，树，可以养宠物，可以在院子里锻炼身体。树，可以养宠物，可以在院子里锻炼身体。2.住在公寓里：干净，安全，离工作地方近住在公寓里：干净，安全，离工作地方近3.我的看法及理由。我的看法及理由。注意：词数注意：词数100-120，文章题目和开头已给，文章题目和开头已给出（不计词数）出（不计词数） 26 Live in a traditional house or live in an apartmentNowadays, more and more people / a growing number of people pay more attention to their lives. But people differ in their opinions on the matter. 27Some people prefer to live in a traditional house. Here are the reasons. In the first place, you can grow flowers and trees in the yard if you live in a traditional house. Besides, you can keep pets if you like . Finally, people can take exercise/do some work-out in the yard. 28However, some people prefer to live in an apartment. On one hand, it is clean and safe. On the other hand, it is close to their work. 29As far as Im concerned, I prefer living in a traditional house. My reason is that I like enjoying sunlight, especially in winter. Moreover, my grandparents wouldnt be happy if they live in an apartment. As they argue that it is not convenient for them to have outdoor activities. So I think living in a traditional house is a good and healthy lifestyle . 30 经过调查，人们对于学生上网交友持不同意见（见下表）。经过调查，人们对于学生上网交友持不同意见（见下表）。请你以请你以“Should students make friends on line?”为题，用英为题，用英语写一篇关于学生上网交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，语写一篇关于学生上网交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。并表达自己的看法。 词数：词数：100左右左右 参考词汇：参考词汇： 网络朋友网络朋友 on-line friend（s）；）； 上当受骗上当受骗 to be cheated赞成的理由赞成的理由反对的理由反对的理由你的看法？你的看法？1广交朋友广交朋友1浪费时间浪费时间 2可自由表达思想可自由表达思想2影响学习影响学习3利于外语学习利于外语学习3可能上当受骗可能上当受骗31 Different people have different opinions on whether students should make friends on line. Some people say yesThe reason is that the Internet helps make many new friendsWhats more, while Chatting on line, students can freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. Others, however, just have the opposite opinionThey say making friends on line is a waste of time that should be spent more meaningfully on studyBesides, some students get cheated on line. Its my opinion that students should put their study, health and safety at firstAs for friendship, we can readily find it among our classmates and other people around us.32书面表达书面表达(满分满分30分分)1.暑假即将来临，你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了暑假即将来临，你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇关于讨论的英语短文，不同看法，请根据提示写一篇关于讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。并谈谈你的看法。(2006年陕西卷）年陕西卷）优点优点缺点缺点待在家中待在家中花费少，舒适方便花费少，舒适方便 不能亲身了解外界不能亲身了解外界外出旅游外出旅游增长知识，开阔眼增长知识，开阔眼界（界（horizon/view）花费多，旅途不便花费多，旅途不便注意：注意：1.词数词数100-120 2.短文必须包括表中所列要点。短文必须包括表中所列要点。 3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.33The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Students react to this problem in different ways. Some are in favor of staying at home. They say its both convenient and comfortable. Whats more, they can set aside money for other purposes. But They will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out traveling as it can enrich their knowledge and broaden their views. But they will spend more money and go through some trouble while traveling.34In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home. Actually I have more reasons for it. When staying at home, I get to do what I like, such as reading books,watching TV,and helping my parents with the housework. In a word, to stay at home is better than to travel.35只介绍两个观点的36 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍介绍讨论情况。讨论情况。注意：注意：1、信的开头已为你写好。、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数：、词数：100左右。左右。 3、参考词汇：门票：、参考词汇：门票：entrance feeDear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.60%的同学认为的同学认为40%的同学认为的同学认为1、不应收门票、不应收门票2、公园是公众休闲的地方、公园是公众休闲的地方3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，、如收票，需建大门、围墙， 会影响城市形象会影响城市形象1、应收门票，但票价不宜高、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资、支付园林工人工资3、购新花木、购新花木2002年高考题范文年高考题范文37Dear Editor, Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks(提出问题提出问题). Opinions are divided on the question. 60of the students are against the idea of entrance fee. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Changing entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.过渡句过渡句观点一观点一论据一论据一论据二论据二38On the other hand, 40 think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. Yours truly Li Hua 可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题，可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题，即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出观点一，并用一系即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出观点一，并用一系列论据进行阐明。说明完观点一之后，再提出观点列论据进行阐明。说明完观点一之后，再提出观点二，继续用论据进行说明。如果需要说明自己的观二，继续用论据进行说明。如果需要说明自己的观点，可接下来说明自己的观点。点，可接下来说明自己的观点。观点二观点二论据一论据一论据二论据二39 假设你是林明。你班最近就假设你是林明。你班最近就“大学生是否应该经济独立大学生是否应该经济独立”的话题展开了的话题展开了讨讨论，大家发表了不同看法。论，大家发表了不同看法。 请你根据以下所给内容，写一封信给请你根据以下所给内容，写一封信给21世纪世纪英语英语报高中生版反映讨论情况。讨论情况如下：报高中生版反映讨论情况。讨论情况如下： 135的同学认为：通过打工可以获得工作经验，了解社会；同时还可的同学认为：通过打工可以获得工作经验，了解社会；同时还可以体会到父母挣钱的不易，避免乱花钱的不良习气。以体会到父母挣钱的不易，避免乱花钱的不良习气。 250的同学认为：通过打工来付学费会影响自己的学习，自己可以通的同学认为：通过打工来付学费会影响自己的学习，自己可以通过好好学习来报答爹娘，回报社会。过好好学习来报答爹娘，回报社会。 315的同学的同学(包括你在内包括你在内)觉得双方的观点都有一定道理，但又不完全觉得双方的观点都有一定道理，但又不完全赞同，请简述你自己的看法。赞同，请简述你自己的看法。 注意：注意：1文章开头已经给出，不计入总分；文章开头已经给出，不计入总分； 2词数词数120个个(不包括起始句不包括起始句)； 3参考词汇：学费参考词汇：学费tuition fee 报答报答repay 经济独立经济独立financially independent Dear editor， I am writing to tell you about a recent discussion we had on whether or notuniversity students should be40Dear editor, I am writing to tell you about a recentdiscussion we have had on whether or notuniversity students should be financially independent. 35% of my classmates think thatuniversity students doing part-time jobs will help one to gain working experienceand learn more of society. Besides, whenstudents find it hard for their parents toearn money, they wont form the habit of41wasting their money. 50% of the students hold the view that university students neednt be financiallyindependent, because trying to make moneyin their spare time will affect their studies. They also think that they can repay their parents and society by studying harder. 15% of my fellow students, myself included, partly agree with them. 42 We think that as grown-ups, we shouldntdepend on our parents any more. Personally,I thought if our parents can afford to pay thetuition fee for us, we should devote ourselvesto our studies and try to do better. Thank you for reading my letter. Yours, Lin Ming43