建议信-作文-PPT课件(共25张).ppt

Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try writing to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes, Li HuaHow to write a letter for advice如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点覆盖了所有的要点应用了较多的语法结构和词汇应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。全卷整洁美观，书写端正全卷整洁美观，书写端正要要点点全全词汇词汇,句型句型 （高级）和语法（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道多样化（较复杂）语言地道连连接接词词写作攻略写作攻略1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。常用句式常用句式A建议信开头常用句式建议信开头常用句式(照应材料照应材料,表明写作意图表明写作意图)1After I read your letter, I am sorry to know that 2I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter3.I am writing to you for the purpose of -4. You have asked me for my advice with onand Ill try to make some suggestions.5.I am writing to express my views concerning.B. 表达建议（表达建议（body）1 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could 2. I would like to suggest/recommend that3. If I were you, I would4. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action.5.I suggest that 6. You would better do/ not do 7. You may consider doing first，firstly，secondlythen，after that，in the endfinallyMeanwhile, whats moreC.建议信结尾常用句式建议信结尾常用句式 1. I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.2. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.3. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.篇章结构及内容：首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。结尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意有礼貌使读者容易接受。注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。Dear Bob,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句此三句不同不同的句式提出建议的句式提出建议)As to , I suggest (有时根据需要有时根据需要具体到某一反面具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建其他建议议). Im sure (预测可能的结果，给对预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心方以行动的信心和决心).Im looking forward to (表达愿望表达愿望).Sincerely yours,Li HuaDear_, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _, and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(以我拙见以我拙见), you would be wise to take the following actions: _. I hope youll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you.Yours,XXX 假如你朋友假如你朋友JimJim是多年的烟民，现身是多年的烟民，现身体不适，所以你想写一封给他建议他体不适，所以你想写一封给他建议他戒烟。戒烟。Task 11.首段：写信的目的Afterreadingyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowyouarenotwellthesedaysandthatyoustillhavetroubleingivingupsmoking.SoIamwritingtoexpressmyviewsonhowtoquitsmoking.2.主体：关于如何戒烟的建议主题句+建议：意志；参与有益活动,远离烟友2.关于如何戒烟的建议主题句：Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_.Abouthowtostopsmoking,hereareafewsuggestions.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.Ihavereadmanybooksandalsohavesearchedsomeinformationabouthowtoquitsmoking.HerearesomeadviceIfoundforyou,hopingtheymaybehelpful.Firstly,togiveupsmoking,youmusthavestrongwill.youhavetoinformyourselfagainandagainthatsmokingnotonlydoesharmtoyourhealth,butalsodoesharmtoyourfamilies.Secondly,Ithinkyoucantakepartinsomehealthyactivitiessuchasswiming,readingnewspapersandmagzines,listeningtothemusic.Onlyifyouhavemuchtodo,willyouforgettosmoke.Thirdly,Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucouldstayawayfromothersmokersbecausetheymayhaveabadinfluenceonyou.3.结尾IhopeyoullfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwishyouleadahealthylifeandbehappyeveryday.DearJim，Afterreadingyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowyouarenotwellthesedaysandthatyoustillhavetroubleingivingupsmoking.SoIamwritingtoexpressmyviewsonhowtoquitsmoking.Ihavereadmanybooksandalsohavesearchedsomeinformationabouthowtoquitsmoking.HerearesomeadviceIfoundforyou,hopingtheymaybehelpful.Firstly,togiveupsmoking,youmusthavestrongwill.youhavetoinformyourselfagainandagainthatsmokingnotonlydoesharmtoyourhealth,butalsodoesharmtoyourfamilies.Secondly,Ithinkyoucantakepartinsomehealthyactivitiessuchasswiming,readingnewspapersandmagzines,listeningtothemusic.Onlyifyouhavemuchtodo,willyouforgettosmoke.Thirdly,Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucouldstayawayfromothersmokersbecausetheymayhaveabadinfluenceonyou.IhopeyoullfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwishyouleadahealthylifeandbehappyeveryday.yourssincerely,XXX假如你是营养师假如你是营养师Mr. LiMr. Li, ,李华向你写信咨询有李华向你写信咨询有关如何保持健康的建议：关如何保持健康的建议：1.健康的重要性健康的重要性2.如何保持健康如何保持健康Task 2 Dear Li hua, How nice to hear from you ! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice. As the proverb says, “No one knows the value of health until he loses it”. In other words, nothing is more important than health. Good health is beneficial to your work and study. But how to keep healthy? Here I want to give you some advice. First, you should have a regular life: go to bed and get up early. Second, keep a healthy and balanced diet: eat more vegetables and fruits and other food full of energy and fiber; eat as little sugar and oily food as possible. Dont eat food which has gone bad. Third, get rid of the bad habits such as smoking, drinking or staying up too late. Physical exercise can make your body strong, so we should exercise every day. In a word, health is more valuable than anything else. We should do everything we can to keep us healthy.yours,Dear Li hua, How nice to hear from you ! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice. As we all know, health is very important for everyone . Without health, its more difficult for us to enjoy a happy life. However, in our life, not everyone can have a healthy lifestyle.To be healthy, we should take proper exercise and have a balanced diet. Besides, having a scientific timetable is also very necessary. In addition, wed better develop some good habits in our daily life and keep away from alcohol and drugs. Whats more, as students, we should not be addicted to addictive computer games, which will distract us from study. In a word, its a good idea for us to keep fit. Only in this way can we live a positive life. yours, Dear Li hua, How nice to hear from you ! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice. As we know, we teenagers grow very fast, so we need plenty of nutritious foods,such as fish fruit and vegetables. You should not eat too much meat or too many sweets. Also, you should take physical exercise regularly instead of studying all the time. For example, you can play basketball or swim after school .Whats more , having enough sleep is very important. So I advise you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not to stay up too late Only in this way, can you keep fit . yours,Homework 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友假定你是李华，你的英国朋友PeterPeter来信向你咨询来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：要点： 参加中文学习班；参加中文学习班； 看中文书刊、电视；看中文书刊、电视； 学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲； 交中国朋友。交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；开头语已给出。给出。Dear Peter,Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice no how to learn Chinese for my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ well._ _ _Best wishes,Best wishes,Li HuaLi Hua2.抽烟的危害主题句+危害1234.Asweallknow,smokingdoesgreatharmtohumanbeings.Firstly,smokingcausesmanyillnessessuchascough,heartdiseaseandthemostseriousillness-lungcancer.Meanwhilesmokingisawasteofmoney.Besides,carelesssmokersmaycausedangerousfires.v激励学生学习的名言警句激励学生学习的名言警句 vv1、聪明的人有长的耳朵和短的舌头。弗莱格v2、重复是学习之母。狄慈根v3、当你还不能对自己说今天学到了什么东西时，你就不要去睡觉。利希顿堡v4、人天天都学到一点东西，而往往所学到的是发现昨日学到的是错的。B.Vv5、学到很多东西的诀窍，就是一下子不要学很多。洛克v6、学问是异常珍贵的东西，从任何源泉吸收都不可耻。阿卜日法拉兹v7、学习是劳动，是充满思想的劳动。乌申斯基v8、聪明出于勤奋，天才在于积累华罗庚v9、好学而不勤问非真好学者。v10、书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟。v11、人的大脑和肢体一样，多用则灵，不用则废茅以升v12、你想成为幸福的人吗？但愿你首先学会吃得起苦屠格涅夫v13、成功艰苦劳动正确方法少说空话爱因斯坦v14、不经历风雨，怎能见彩虹真心英雄v15、只有登上山顶，才能看到那边的风光。v16只会幻想而不行动的人，永远也体会不到收获果实时的喜悦。v17、勤奋是你生命的密码，能译出你一部壮丽的史诗。18暗自伤心，不如立即行动19挫折时，要像大树一样，被砍了，还能再长；也要像杂草一样，虽让人践踏，但还能勇敢地活下去20随随便便浪费的时间，再也不能赢回来21成功是优点的发挥，失败，是缺点的积累