2022年江苏高考英语作文常考题型模板.docx

精品学习资源江苏高考英语作文常考题型模板我省高考书面表达阅卷方式网上阅卷，采纳两人判分取其平均值的方法，这样更能 客观地反映出考生的实际英语写作水平；但是阅卷速度很快，一般50 秒至 65 秒即可阅读完一篇文章；对于特别好而且字迹又特别美丽的作文；阅卷老师会给高分；一、答题应试技巧牢记“一式、两头、三写、四关”的应试要诀；一式，是关注文章体裁，写对格式；两头，即写好文章的开头和结尾；三写，是大小写、拼写和书写无误；四关，也就是过好内容要点关、行文规律关、语法规章关和习惯表达关；详细如下：1. 留意审题，对写的内容做到心中有数；第一，应通过审题明确文章的体裁；其次，应留意时态及语态，仔细琢磨其内容的英语表达方式，防止汉式英语；最终着手写时要留意分段；2. 内容要点是否齐全；句子语法包括：时态、语态、用词、句法和结构格式等是否正确；词汇是否精确多样；句式结构是否丰富多彩；规律关系词使用是否到位；是否合理使用连接词和过渡性词语；标点符号、英语字母大小写是否标准；3. 在表达清楚明白的前提下适当使用有把握的复杂结构和高级词汇；4. 留意英语习惯，使所写句子精确地道，留意表达时的切换，防止汉式英语；5. 留意开头和结尾的技巧；6. 新标准对写作的要求增加了情感因素，所以发挥自己的观点时留意思想性，力图提高文章思想内涵；7. 留意书写，追求卷面美观；书面表达属于主观性试题，阅卷老师的主观印象直接关系到考生的得分高低；8. 通读全文，检查疏漏；忌：书写潦草、 单词模糊不清、 左右明显不齐、 随便涂改、 缺乏分段、 字数太多或太少；二、考生要想“取悦”于阅卷老师应留意以下几个要点1. 外在美：字字迹、字数、字体、字距；版面干净，忌超格、污迹、涂黑；2. 结构美：分段最好三段一篇好的文章应有合理的段落层次，让人感觉条理清楚；每一段应有一个主题句和几个支撑句；写好首段是关键开头写得好是获得高分的基础；深化充实中间拓展段要紧紧环绕主题绽开，不能涉及无关内容；把好结尾关好的结尾能起画龙点睛作用；结尾段写法许多：可以对前文观点发表看法，明确说明自己的立场和态度；也可以回到文章的开头段提出的中心论点上，到达再次确定和强调的成效；应从多个角度谈 ；3. 词汇美：亮点使用美丽语句，但不是偏词、怪词，而是生动、集体形象的词语，并且要运用得正确、 得当； 如：“ The job is verydifficult”假如表达成：“ The job is very challenging”更能显示出考生的功底4. 句式美：每段使用一至两个较高级句型来表达可使全文增色，但不宜过多，以免出错；常用的句式： what 从句；同位语从句；倒装句；with结构；插入语等；句子长短相间，出色句式的合理使用会使文章可读性更强；忌低级错误主谓、时态不一样、单词拼写错误等5. 连接美：“有效地使用语句的链接成分，使全文结构紧凑” 是高考书面表达重要的评分依据；段落之间要使用适当的过渡句；句子间要使用规律性合理的连接词，这样文章结构紧凑、自然流畅，给人以上下贯穿、一气呵成的感觉；三、概括写作类2021 年江苏英语高考首次采纳新题型，读写任务型；该写作分为两部分：第一部分要求用约30 个词概括所给短文的要点，文体主要以记叙文， 谈论文或说明文为主；欢迎下载精品学习资源其次部分以约120 个词就短文某一主题谈论自己的经受并发表看法；第一， 概括部分考查了同学的概括才能，同学在概括的时候要留意语言的精炼，要点要齐全；其次，阐述的理由或论据要简洁明白，层次分明；最终，对自己的观点要作出总结；写作时要留意尽量使用自己熟识的单词句式，同时也要留意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次；【常规模版】第一段：概括文章要点，语言要精炼，概括要全面，行文连贯，表达精确；概括经常用的句式有 ：1、记叙文类常用模版：The author tells us a story about athat/who.The passage is a story about athat/who.e.g. The author tells us a story about akind man who cut a cocoon open in order to lessen the pain of a butterfly when he saw it struggling out of the cocoon, only to find that it could never fly because of his help.2、谈论文类常用模版：The passage highlights the importance of sth.The essay/passage/author outlines.The article gives the view thatshould/shouldnt主题补充论据 .e.g. The passage highlights the importance of encouragement for students. The essay/passage/author outlines the harmful effects of smoking.3、说明文类常用模板：This article shows/tells us that.This article not only describesbut also suggests.This article points out the common phenomenon主题， which补充说明 .e.g. The article tells us that habits are formed when we are young and we should try to develop good habits, for they benefit us in our daily life and help us shape our character.其次段：写完概括后，用恰当的过渡语引出下文；并依据要求进行分析或举例或说明自己的看法；一 过渡语1、记叙文的过渡语(1) I have a similar experience.(2) I also went through such an experience.(3) This story reminds me of another story that happened to. 4This story reminds me of a similar experience of.2、谈论文的过渡语表示赞同1I agree with the statement that. 2I do/quite agree with the author.(3) I m for the writer s idea that.(4) I fully support the statement. 5I can t agree more w.i.t.h 表示不赞同(1) I don t agree with what the writer said/thewriter.欢迎下载精品学习资源(2) I m strongly against the writer s idea. 3This opinion sounds right/reasonable, but is hardly practical. 3、说明文的过渡语1After reading the passage, I had a better understanding of.二依据要求进行分析或举例This is common in/among. Lets take. for example.As for me, I benefit a lot from.The story sets me thinking. I can t agree more withthe author.三说明自己的观点：As far as I am concerned, .From my point of view, . In my opinion, .第三段：依据要求或启示，提出看法或如何解决该问题；常用的结论性词语有：1. In conclusion, .2. To sum up, .3. In a word, .附范文：1请阅读下面短文，并依据要求用英语写一篇150 词左右的文章；Once upon a time in a land far away， there was a wonderful old man who loved every thing. Animals, spiders, insects. One day while walking through the woods the nice old man found a cocoon 茧 of a butterfly. He took it home.A few days later, a small opening appeared; he sat and watched the butterfly for several hours as it struggled to force its body through that little hole. Then it seemed to stop making any progress. It appeared as if it had gotten as far as it could andit could go no farther.Then the man decided to help the butterfly, so he took a pair of scissors and cut off the remaining bit of the cocoon. The butterfly then came out easily.But it had a swollen body and small, shriveled 萎缩的 wings. The man continued to watch the butterfly because he expected that, atany moment, the wings would enlarge and expand to be able to support the body. Neither happened. In fact, the butterfly spent the rest of its life crawling around with a swollen body and shriveled wings. It never was able to fly.What the man in his kindness and haste did not understand was that the restricting cocoon and the struggle required for the butterflyto get through the tiny opening were Nature's way of forcing fluid from the body of the butterfly into its wings so that it would be ready for flight once it achieved its freedom from the cocoon.Sometimes struggles are exactly what we need in our life. If we were allowed to go through our life without any obstacles, it would cripple us. We would not be as strong as what we could have been. And we could never fly.【写作内容】1. 以约 30 词概括短文内容要点；2. 以约 120 词就 “个人成长需要艰巨生活的磨砺 ”这一话题发表你的看法，并包含以下要点：(1) 你读了这个故事后的感受；(2) 表达当前父母溺爱子女的现象和由此造成的后果； 3假设你是父母一方，你会如何磨砺自己的孩子？【写作要求】欢迎下载精品学习资源1. 可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中句子；2. 文中不能显现考生真实和学校名称；The author tells us a story about a kind man who cut a cocoon open in order to lessen the pain of a butterfly when he saw it struggling out of the cocoon, only to find that it could never fly because of his help.The story sets me thinking.Our lifeis more orless likethis.Sometimes, struggles or obstacles in our life are a must for our growth. It is these struggles or obstacles that increase our willpower and contribute to our success. Without these trials, we could never achieve our life goal just as the butterfly did in the story.Nowadays, with only one child in most families， parents do whatever they can to satisfy thechild sneeds and even do for him what should be done by himself. Consequently, the child isunable to look after himself without his parents' presence. Too much care from parents deprives children of chances to grow strong by conquering obstacles.Just as a saying goes, “Flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm”If I were a parent, I would first keep him well informed that life is never easy and that heshould be ready to face any difficulties. Besides, I would expose him to the hardships in life instead of protecting him from difficulties, providing them with chances to fight for his bright future by conquering challenges.2“ When should I begin to acquire good habits.” a young boy asked his teacher.“ How old are you.” asked the teacher.“ Eight years old, sir. answere”d the boy.“ Then you have just lost eight years, the teacher ”replied.There is no doubt that habits are formed at a very early age. When one is young, it is easy to acquire good habits.Good habits are practices that help us in our daily life. The habit of brushing one s teeth in thepmsorning, for instance, kee onetseeth clean and prevents a bad smell which is unpleasant to others. Bad habits such as sticking one stongue out, biting one sfingernails and picking one s nose, are undesirable ways of behaving in front of others. If we want people to enjoy beiinthguws, we should try to develop habits that are pleasant.It is said,“ We sow an act; we reap a habit. We sow a habit and we reap a character.” The habitsawpe formed at an early age sh our character. Habits are like tributaries 支流 which flow int o a river. The river is made up of all its tributaries; a person s character is made up of all the habits that he or she has acquired over the years.【写作内容】1. 以约 30 个词概括本文内容；2. 以约 120 个词谈谈你对好习惯养成的看法，并包括以下要点：1你认为好习惯重要吗，为什么？2你身上有哪些好习惯，它们对你的学习或生活有什么影响？3怎样才能养成良好的习惯？【写作要求】1. 作文中可以使用亲身经受或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子；2. 作文中不得显现真实和学校名称；The author tells us that habits are formed when we are young and we should try to develop good habits, for they benefit us in our daily life and help us shape our character.I can t agree more with the author. Cultivating a good habit can not only shape our character,欢迎下载精品学习资源increase our inner beauty but also influence those people around us. Therefore, I think it is of great significance to form a good habit.As for me, I benefit a lot from my good habits like getting up early to speak Englishaloud, reviewing and previewing lessons before going to bed every day. In the past, I didnto speak English before others because of my poor pronunciation and I also did badly in my English tests. Thanks to my good habits, however, I have been making progress in my English study. Now I am proud of my speaking and writing in English.Then how can we form a good habit. First of all, you should be determined to fight against your laziness. Once you make up your mind to do something, never give up easily. Then, you have to be confident, believing that you can become a better person. Last but not least, keep pushing yourself.It may take a long period for you to form a good habit but remember it is perseverance that makes you successful.3欢迎下载精品学习资源To make it easier for her parents to get to America, a young woman has drawn three pictures. These pictures contain almost all the necessary information the old couple may need on their way to America. With vivid drawings and clear instructions, they are impressive and easy to understand. 31wordsSeeing the pictures, I m deeply moved like many others. The young woman is very sweet andconsiderate. She loves her parents so much. Also, she must have taken a lot of pains to come up with such a wonderful idea, which will be of great help to her parents.As for me, my parents are faced with much pressure from work and life. I should try my best to help them. For example, In addition,4Time to give thanksWhen it comes to Thanksgiving, turkey may be the first thing that comes to mind. Its the right picture, beu.t its not complet Celebrated on the fourth Thursday in November every year, Thanksgiving Day is a time for thanksgiving and feasts. It asboutexpressing your gratitude to the important people and all the good things in your life.欢迎下载精品学习资源Americans celebrate Thanksgiving with much warmth and keep many traditional customs. Here we introduce two of the rules Americans typically follow on this day.1. Time for prayers and paying backThanksgiving Day has been associated with prayers in church and in homes for centuries. Attending church prayer services in the morning is the first step of many celebrators on Thanksgiving Day. The churches provide worship 礼拜 services and organize special events for the occasion.Before Thanksgiving meals, some families gather together and read prayers to thank God for his kindness and the gifts he has bestowed upon 赐予 them in the form of friends and family.Some people also do voluntary community work on this day, as a way of paying back.2. Family reunions and showing gratitudeLike China Sspring Festival, preparing a big meal and bringing the famil y together at home is a long-standing tradition of Thanksgiving. Distances don t really matter as relatives return home to be with their family, no matter how far away.【写作内容】1. 用约 30 个单词写出上文概要；2. 用约 120 个单词谈谈你对感恩的想法，内容包括：(1) 你认为我们中国人有没有必要过“感恩节 ”？为什么？(2) 以你自己的经受或者身边的人为例，阐述重视感恩的必要性；(3) 总结你的观点；【写作要求】1. 可以支持文中任一观点，但必需供应理由或论据；2. 阐述观点或供应论据时，不能直接引用原文语句；3. 作文中不能显现真实和学校名称；4. 不必写标题；【评分标准】内容完整，语言标准，语篇连贯，词数适当；This passage is mainly about the custom of a western traditional festival, Thanksgiving Day, which mainly includes the two rules that Americans usually abide by during the festival.Afterreading the passage, I had a better understanding of Thanksgiving Day. In my opinion, since the festival has a lovely and healthy theme, why not do as the Americans do.Don tyou think giving thanks to things and people around us is very necessary. We can t deny it isgood chance to spread kindness and consideration.Take myself for example. Because I am busy in studying on weekdays, I have little time to lo ok after my parents, which makes me guilty. In order to reward them and make them relaxed on the weekend, I get up early in the morning and prepare breakfast for them willingly, which makes them delighted.So it is vital for us to have a grateful heart and show our thanks to anything good and any person that is nice.5It s show time. China s TV channels have ever been full of various shows esincrcaeztehfor Super Girl in 2004. Regarding voice as the only ruler, The Voice of China quickly became popular around Chinese mainland and topped a league of all shows broadcast by thecountry s local TV statio. nItss popularity also drew record advertising, the final episode集 attracting an ad spend of 500,000 yuan per second. Plus, the episodes of If You Are the One 非诚勿扰, both hot and controversial, became an instant hit, proving that dating shows can be entertaining and mainstream at the same time. Another TV show Where Are We Going, Dad. produced by Hunan SatelliteTelevision, has been wowing 使 叫好 audiences across the nation, filling the Internet with heated discussions about the father'sfigure 欢迎下载精品学习资源【写作内容】1. 用约 30 个英语单词写出上文概要；2. 用约 120 个英语单词就各类 “秀”节目谈谈你的看法，内容包括：1探究节目受到追捧的缘由；2分析节目存在的潜在问题；3请你对改良节目提出至少两点建议；【写作要求】1. 作文应涵盖写作内容全部要点，可以适度发挥；2. 可以参考阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；3. 不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等；【参考词汇】1. 选秀节目 talent show2. 真人秀 reality showNowadays numerous TV shows have become extremely popular among Chinese audiences.Those programs, rangingfromtalent ordating shows to realityshows, have received both commercial success and public concern.Theirmassive popularityis mainlybased on simple facts. First, they care about social concerns. Second, they promote pursuit of dreams at grassroots level. Third, without exception,they explore a perfect balance between international form and Chinese expression.Despite apparent highlights,much room is left forimprovement.Above all, commercial interest oftenoverweighseducationalpurposes, causing much complaintsaboutunbearable advertisements. In addition, some sharp remarks, though eye-catching and overwhelming,may have misleading effect on the youth.Inmyopinion,suchshowsshouldshouldermoreresponsibilityinstead