江苏省南京市2018-2019学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题(共2页).doc

精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上【题文】You return from work on a hot August evening. Your unwashed son is on the sofa playing Honor of Kings, as he has been doing for the past eight hours. Not for the first time, you ask yourself: why are school summer holidays so insufferably long?This is a more serious question than it sounds. Many children will return from the long break having forgotten much of what they were taught the previous year. One study from the American South found that this “summer learning loss” could be as high as a quarter of the years education.Students will hate the idea of a longer school year. But plenty of children could usefully spend a bit longer at their books. More time in school need not mean repeating the same old lessons. Some extra drilling would be beneficial, particularly for those falling behind. But the summer could also be a time for different kinds of learning. Schools should be free to experiment.【写作内容】1.用约30个单词写出上文概要；2.用约120个单词阐述你对暑假长度的看法，并提出至少两条合理利用暑被时间的建议。【写作要求】1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。_【答案】The long summer break has always been a matter of concern. Barents and researchers are worried about summer learning loss while children don't want to shorten it.I don't have any problem with the current two-month holiday as long as children are supervised by adults. It would be unwise to keep all the students in school, memorizing text books and doing exercises. The summer could be a time for different kinds of learning: critical thinking, practical skills, financial literacy, work placements with local firms, etc., most of which can be acquired outside a classroom.After months hard work, we deserve a break to relax. Staying at home does not mean wasting time. We can read the books we are interested in and work out regularly, which is beneficial to the building of character.I do believe a long summer holiday may be advantageous if it is made good use of.【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，要求写一篇议论文； 要求为：1.用约30个单词写出上文概要；2.用约120个单词阐述你对暑假长度的看法，并提出至少两条合理利用暑被时间的建议。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如： a matter of concern关心的问题；as long as只要；supervise监督；be unwise不明智的；critical thinking批判性思维；practical skills 实用技能；be acquired 被获得；deserve a break to relax 应该休息放松；is beneficial to 对有益的；the building of character性格的塑造等等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Barents and researchers are -worried about summer learning loss while children don't want to shorten it.使用了while引导的从句，表父母与孩子的对比；定语从句 most of which can be acquired outside a classroom.和 which is beneficial to the building of character. It would be unwise to keep all the students in school, memorizing text books and doing exercises. 运用It做形式主语的名词性从句，全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。【标题】江苏省南京市2018-2019学年高二上学期期末考试英语试题【结束】专心-专注-专业