英语作文这么写(共4页).docx

精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上英语作文这么写一.考情分析书面表达旨在考查学生是否具备较强的语言操作能力，它是英语知识的高度综合运用，是一种创新思维的体现，灵活性强，必须以扎实的英语基础为前提。题材以应用文、记叙文和议论文为主，取材主要来源于学生熟悉的日常生活，以应用文、图表式作文和话题作文为主要命题形式。话题涉及学生日常学习与生活的各个方面，类别涉及以下四种：应用类(招聘、感谢信、邀请函、通知、寻物启事、留言、失物招领、倡议书等);介绍类(个人学习生活情况、人物介绍等);建议类(保护环境、班级聚会、校规班规等);做法类(绿色生活、创建文明城市等)。二.命题形式在中考试卷中，书面表达分两部分：第一部分为5分的小作文。小作文词数一般在30词左右，要求学生能够根据题目要求确定文体和格式，语言言简意赅，力求减少错误。第二部分为15分的大作文，词数在80左右，要求考生能够根据要点，运用自己所掌握的词汇和句型，写出行文连贯、表达清晰的短文。三.写作过程1. 审题： 格式;时态;人称;内容典例剖析假如你是Linda，你收到了同学Cindy送给你的一本书作为生日礼物。请你写封30字左右的电子邮件表示感谢，并祝她每天过得愉快。开头和结尾已给出，不计入作文总词数。Dear Cindy,Yours,Linda审题指导1.确定格式。 这是一篇补充信的应用文。 应用文的格式比较固定，如书信、留言条及电子邮件一般情况下开始Dear xxx,接下来是正文，最后署名Yours, xxx2.确定内容：一是感谢;二是祝愿。注意词数不要太多，简练而准确，条理要清晰。3.确定人称和时态。本文是一篇回信，所以人称用第一人称，时态为一般现在时。4.这是一篇5分的小作文，语言一定要简练。Dear Cindy,Thank you for sending me the book as my birthday gift. Its very interesting. I like it very much. Its the best gift that I have ever got. I hope you can have a good time every day.Yours,Linda2.译列点根据题目要求列出规定的要点，选择恰当的短语及句型进行准确的翻译，注意语言表达的规范性，尽量使用最熟悉的、最有把握的词汇和基本句型，符合英美人士的表达习惯，避免中国式英语。如果在写作中遇到不会的单词、词组和句子，可以找同义词和同义句型来代替。典例剖析中考之后，同学们可能会去旅行。那么如何文明出行，请你根据以下要点，以“Be a good tourist”为题，写一篇短文，提出你的建议，呼吁人们文明出行。提示：1.不乱扔垃圾，不乱涂乱画;2.不高声喧哗;排队等候;3.遵守交通规则，主动给老人、小孩让座;4.尊重当地的风俗文化要求：1.词数在80左右2.条理清晰，语言连贯，可适当发挥。审题指导：本题要求就如何文明出行写一篇短文，题材为议论文;要点中给出了四条提示，表达清楚要点的同时，强调“文明”二字;根据内容确定时态为第一人称，并用一般现在时先简单而准确的翻译1. throw rubbish away; draw anywhere2. talk loudly; wait in line3. obey the traffic rules; offer our seats to children and old people4. respect the local culture and custom3.合理成句然后选用句型使其成句1. We mustnt throw rubbish away or draw anywhere.2. We should wait in line . We mustnt talk loudly.3. We should obey the traffic rules .We should offer our seats to children and old people.4. We should respect the local culture and custom.大多数学生都会将其简单成句，连成短文直接写作卷子上，在众多考生中如此千篇一律、没有特色的短文是不会得高分的。句子是你逻辑思维能力和造句子能力的体现，句型最好灵活多样。1.No matter where we go ,we mustnt throw rubbish away or draw anywhere.2.In public places, we should wait in line and mustnt talk loudly.3.When we go across the street , we should obey the traffic rules .We are supposed to be friendly to others. When we take a bus ,we should offer our seats to children and old people.4.Wherever we go, we should respect the local culture and custom.4.巧用连词使行文连贯为了使句子或段落意义连贯，表达合理准确，要适当加入连接词。连接词犹如桥梁，亦如粘合剂。恰当地使用可避免结构松散，表意不清， 使文字连贯流畅。常见的如表达转折：but, however, otherwise等; 表达顺序：first of all; to begin with; also; in addition; finally等;表达递进：also, besides, whats more等;表达因果：so, therefore, as a result ,so that等; 表达对比：at the same time, meanwhile, while 等; 表达让步： though，although，even if等;表达总结：all in all ， in a word ,in conclusion, from the information above, we can conclude that等First of all, it is our duty to protect the environment. No matter where we go ,we mustnt throw rubbish away or draw anywhere. Besides, in public places, we should wait in line and mustnt talk loudly. Also,when we go across the street , we should obey the traffic rules .Whats more, we are supposed to be friendly to others. When we take a bus ,we should offer our seats to children and old people. Finally , wherever we go, we should respect the local culture and custom.5.利用三段式结构，使其成文三段式结构,层次分明，条理清楚。第一段开门见山，提出问题或观点。第二段侧重写提示内容。第三段得出结论，再次扣题。After the senior high school entrance examination, many students will go on vacation. How can we be a good tourist? Here are some tips for you.First of all, it is our duty to protect the environment. We mustnt throw rubbish away or draw anywhere. First of all, it is our duty to protect the environment. No matter where we go ,we mustnt throw rubbish away or draw anywhere. Besides, in public places, we should wait in line and mustnt talk loudly. Also,when we go across the street , we should obey the traffic rules .Whats more, we are supposed to be friendly to others. When we take a bus ,we should offer our seats to children and old people. Finally , wherever we go, we should respect the local culture and custom.To be a good tourist will help build a better society. Lets be a good tourist.6.检查对于考生来说，考场上，时间是保障，书写是根本，表达是关键。书面表达通常是试卷最后一道题，有时考生时间计划不到位，写到书面表达时时间已经不够用了，潦草的书写，中国式英语、单词拼写错误、语法结构错误都将影响得分。所以，写作后要通读全文，检查复核。这是做好书面表达的一个不可或缺的步奏。在写好短文后，从题目要求上要对全文进行检查和修改。要注意字数是否符合;体裁格式是否正确;内容要点是否全面;语言表达是否有误;大到主谓一致、时态呼应、习惯用法，小至单词拼写、大小写及标点符号，都不可以放过。专心-专注-专业