南京中考英语作文训练(答案)(共11页).doc

精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上南京中考英语作文训练：My mother书面表达是中考英语的重要考查内容之一，下面，老师结合刚刚为大家分析的2014南京中考英语五大命题趋势 以及 六大写作策略引爆2014南京中考英语 ，为大家提供南京中考英语作文训练：My mother。【题目】母爱悄深，母爱无价;学会感恩，学会回报。某英语网站举办以“My mother”为题的英语征文活动。请你根据下列思维导图提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍自己的母亲和你们的真情故事。提示:1.短文应包括导图中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明;2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。3.词数不少于80，开头已给出:不计人总词数。21世纪教育网 - 中国最大型、最专业的中小学教育资源门户网站 【参考范文】My motherWe need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair. Shi is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though she didnt have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me.When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. Ill save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. Ill take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. Thats what she wants most, I think.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，短文的开头已经给出.本作文中给出的要点比较简略,动笔前先要围绕这些要点阻止材料，确定写作内容，注意将这些要点全部表达出来，不要偏离文章中心.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合文章要表达的主题,不能出现文章脱节问题.尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。南京中考英语作文训练：my holiday【题目】根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。介绍一下你在某假期中的一次活动。内容包括：什么活动？活动中做了什么？感觉如何？提示词语：holiday, camp, take classes, learn a lot, have fun【参考范文】This summer ,I went to camp with a lot of other students.It is a summer camp with many classes .Students can take the classes they like .For example ,if students want to be doctors ,they can take the class about working in a hospital .I took the boancy class .I learned new mames of flowers .The teacher also taught me to plant a tree.I learned a lot and had fun at the camp .I want to go again next year .【解析】试题分析；这是一篇给材料作文，介绍假期中的一次活动。动笔前先要解答材料中的三个问题，然后根据问题的内容进行叙述。结合所给材料，可知本文主要记述的是过去发生的事情，故时态主要是一般过去时态。人称为第三人称。句子结构主要为系表结构，主谓宾结构。写作中注意叙述顺序，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。文中适当使用代词，注意避免句式的单调重复，避免单词及语法错误。【考点】记述文写作点评：此类作文考查的是学生基础的写作能力，主要是一些基础句型的应用。平时学习中应注意对于一些常见句型句式的记忆，联系默写此类句型。对于一些比较经典的段落，有目的的进行背诵，考试作为参照。这尤其对于叙述的逻辑问题有很大的帮助。南京中考英语作文训练：My Hobby【题目】以“My Hobby”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文。内容提示：1.你的爱好是什么？2.你为什么喜欢它？3.你平时是怎么做的？【参考范文】My hobbyDifferent people have different hobbies .For example ,someone likes reading, someone likes swimming and someone likes collecting and so on. My hobby is to listen to music. When I was a child I enjoyed listening to music .Now I often listen to music. When I am in trouble, music can make me happy. When I am very tired , it can make me comfortable . Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health.Do you like listening to music? If not, I hope you can have a try.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。本文只给出写作要点，动笔前先要围绕主题确定写作内容，注意从三个方面进行叙述。根据内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态，人称主要是第一人称。写作中，应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。【考点】命题作文的写作点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。南京中考英语作文训练：A Talk to Myself【题目】A Talk to Myself提示：在初三的学习和生活中，你有许多快乐，也有许多遗憾。在即将毕业之际，你想对自己说点什么呢？请根据所给的题目用英语写一篇短文。要求：1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；3. 将短文写在答题卡（答题卷）上。写在本试题卷上无效。【参考范文】A Talk to MyselfHow time flies!Im leaving school soon.I really have a lot to talk to myself.Luckily,my teachers are very friendly.Thy not only give me knowledge but also tell me how to be a man.And my classmates are helpful.We sharer happiness and sadness in our school life.However,Im also upset sometimes.I dont take part in outdoor activities quite often because of too much homework.I know its not good for me.Ill try my best to join in more.I believe the my life in the future will be more and more beautiful.【解析】这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要围绕要点组织材料，确定时态主要词汇等问题，根据内容可知本文主要是过去时态和将来时态，注意时态和时间状语的搭配，注意条件从句的应用。写作中，应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。南京中考英语作文训练：My English Study【题目】亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，谈一下三年来学习英语的心得体会。1、要点包括：你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的办法以及学习感悟；2、字数要求：不少于80字。【参考范文】My English StudyHow time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back I have many memories of my English study.When I entered the middle school,I had so many difficulties with my English.1 was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn't master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates,I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke English as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learnit well.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇介绍自己学习英语的心得体会,写作中注意从三个方面进行叙述。通过材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，注意时态及主谓一致问题。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词,句式短语等。适当使用连接词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系.南京中考英语作文训练：My favourite school life【题目】请以“My favourite school life ”为题写一篇英语短文。要求：1. 条理清楚、语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范。2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。3. 所提供词汇仅供参考，考生可自由发挥 。4.词数：70词左右。参考词汇: subjects, take part in , school activities , get on well with, meaningful , colorful .【参考范文】My favourite school lifeMy school life has changed a lot since this term. We dont need to get to school early. We begin our lessons at eight oclock. We can get enough sleep.At school we have at least one hour for sports to relax ourselves every day. After the second class we do morning exercises. After that we usually kick jianzi or skip rope. In the afternoon, we can do different kinds of sports. Some play basketball, some play football, others run on the playground.After school, we dont have too much homework to do. We have lots of free time. We can do what we like . We can take part in many after-school activities.In a word, we are happier and healthier than before.【解析】这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要先认真阅读材料，然后围绕材料适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。结合所写内容，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述，人称为单数第一人称，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将所给短语单词用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。另外，在描述时，应该注意人称的变化。南京中考英语作文训练：Should teenagers go out?【题目】假如你叫李明,最近你和你父母就”周末学生该不该与同学外出活动”进行了讨论。现在请你以 Should teenagers go out with their friends on weekends? 为题,参照表内所提供的信息,写一篇英语短文。  Your parents ideas Your ideas 1.go over lessons 1.- 2.have a good sleep 2.- 3.help parents do housework 3.-注意: 1.开头部分已写好,你只需接着写.2.所写内容必须包括表格中他们的想法和你的至少三个想法.3.词数:70个左右.Should teenagers go out with their friends on weekends?Recently Ive had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with their friends on weekends._【参考范文】Recently I've had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with their friends on weekends.My parents think that teenagers should stay at home to go over their lessons.And they should have enough time to have a good sleep.In the meanwhile, they should help their parents do some housework.In my opinion, we teenagers should go out with our friends for fun so that we can relax more.And we can also share ideas with each other.What's more ,we can also take some exercise together to keep fit.【解析】本题要求写一篇有关学生是否应该外出活动的议论文。要求中已经给出了父母们的观点，要求我们给出自己的观点。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料，确定写作内容；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后反复读几遍，适当修改。南京中考英语作文训练：the 2014 Youth Olympic Games【题目】为了迎接2014南京青奥会，你校在筹备一个丹麦文化角。假如你是南京青奥示范学校阳光中学的李明，请你用英语给丹麦的姊妹学校写一封电子邮件，内容必须包括：表达你对南京举办青奥会的喜悦心情；说明创办丹麦文化角的目的：介绍丹麦文化，增进友谊；请对方提供有关丹麦文化的信息并邀请他们来宁交流。参考词汇：2014 青奥会 the 2014 Youth Olympic Games ; 丹麦Denmark文化角culture corner; 增进友谊build up friendships注意：文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；词数80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sir/ MadamI am Li Ming from Sunshine Secondary School, a YOG demo school of Nanjing.Yours sincerelyLi Ming【参考范文】Dear Sir/MadamI am Li Ming from Sunshine Secondary School, a YOG demo school of Nanjing. I am writing to ask for some information about your culture, as our school is preparing a Denmark culture corner to build up friendships between teens.Im very proud that our city will be the host of the 2014 Youth Olympic Games. We are planning to introduce your culture and your life. Would you please send some to us? We would be grateful for your help if you do.At the same time, we are really happy to invite you and your students to come to Nanjing in the summer of 2014. Welcome to Nanjing!Yours sincerelyLi Ming【解析】这是一篇应用文写作，写一封电子邮件。结合材料内容,写作中首先要表达你对南京举办青奥会的喜悦心情,然后说明创办丹麦文化角的目的：介绍丹麦文化，增进友谊；最后请对方提供有关丹麦文化的信息并邀请他们来宁交流。结合语境可知本文主要是一般现在及将来时态,人称是单数第一人称,注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题.写作中注意适当使用连词,序数词,做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。南京中考英语作文训练：roses given, fragrance in hand【题目】俗话说：“予人玫瑰，手留余香”。在我们的日常生活中，我们会遇到各种困难，因此，我们会需要他人的帮助；但同时，我们也要学会帮助他人。其实，帮助他人就是在帮助自己。请你结合身边的事例，以“帮助”为话题，用英语写一篇短文。注意：无需写标题，开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；文中要结合你帮助别人或别人帮助你的一件事例；文中不得透露任何个人和学校的真实信息；词数为80左右。As the saying goes, roses given, fragrance in hand. In our daily life, we will meet with a lot of trouble.So it is necessary for us to help those who are in trouble.【参考范文】I still remember I helped one of my classmates with his English when we were in the first term of Junior Eight. Li Hua, one of my classmates, was not good at English while I did well. One day, he asked me to help him. So from then on, whenever he had problems, he would ask me, and I was patient to explain them to him. Slowly, his English improved with my help. At the same time, I found my English improved too.Actually, helping others is helping ourselves.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇命题作文，写一篇关于互相帮助的短文。本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式.结合所谈话题,可知本文写成记述文比较容易下手.写作中注意应用具体事例来说明相互帮助的意思.写作中，应注意描述的全面性，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。南京中考英语作文训练：What makes me a good friend?【题目】每个人都是独一无二的，都有与众不同之处，人们喜欢你一定会有很多原因。请以“What makes me a good friend?”为题写一篇英语短文。要求：1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 80词左右。What makes me a good friend?【参考范文】What makes me a good friend?I am a boy easy to get along with. I never get angry easily. Thats the most important reason that makes me so popular.Im always ready to help others. Whenever my friends meet with troubles, I will give them a hand without even a moments thought.Besides, Im quite humorous. I can always tell some jokes or funny stories to make my friends laugh. They say time spent with me is full of fun.Im honest. I never tell lies. So Im a friend worth trusting.【解析】这是一篇命题作文，写一篇短文介绍了人们之所以喜欢自己的原因。由于只给出了大致写作方向，故动笔前先要围绕主题确定写作内容。然后确定时态，句式，词汇等主要内容。根据内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述，人称主要是第一人称。写作中注意使用连接词，注意表达的多样化，做到语意连贯符合逻辑。南京中考英语作文训练：My Ways of learning【题目】每个同学都有自己喜欢的学科和学习方法，请以“My Ways of learning”为题，为English Learner写一篇征文，介绍你的学习方法。要点如下：1.你最喜欢什么学科；2.就你喜欢的这门学科，谈谈你的学习方法（列举3条）；3.在学习过程中遇到问题时你是怎样解决的。要求：1.征文不少于80词；2.文中不得出现正式的学校和姓名；【参考范文一】My Way of Learning EnglishIt has been seven years since I first got in touch with English and ever since then, these cute little letters have brought joy and wonder to my life. How did I learn English? Now let me show you my way of English learning which is interesting and colorful. There are four key points to study English: listening, speaking, reading and writing.Firstly, we should be brave to talk with others in English. By doing this, we can improve our talking and listening skill. Secondly, we should try to listen to all kinds of English programmes as much as possible. In this way, we can gradually improve our pronunciation. Thirdly, we should often read English books. When we come across a new word. We should guess its meaning through the contest first. Then look it up in the dictionary to have a check. I thin, it is a good way of reading. Fourthly, we should practice our writing skills. Whenever we have any idea, we should get the pen and write it down at once. It is very important to avoid writing in Chinese way and using the Chinese grammar. As long as we listen, speak, read and write more, we are sure to make remarkable progress!I suggest that words be memorized in phrases, in sentences and in passages. In a context, words are much easier to understand. Also, in this way, you can master the usage of each word. If a word appears frequently in an article, you may memorize it after you finish reading the article. If it doesnt, you can read the article over and over again so as to memorize it. Its far more interesting to enlarge your vocabulary in this way, isnt it?【参考范文二】My Ways of Learning EnglishMy favorite subject is English. I was interested in learning English when I was a little child.How to do it well? The most important thing is that when you are learning English, you must listen to the teacher carefully. I listen to the English news on the radio from VOA, BBC, CRI, too. While listening to the news, I write down everything I hear so that I can learn some expressions and also practice my dictation. When I find my reading is not poor, I begin to read China Daily, China Today, Readers Digest, and some other English materials.These are my ways of learning English. I'll try my best to learn English well.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，所给材料比较简略，动笔前先要围绕提纲组织材料，确定写作内容，注意从三个方面进行叙述。在写作时要注意时态，人称和固定词组的搭配，要注意语言的规范性。结合材料可知本文主要是一般现在时态，单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，、条理清楚，符合逻辑关系。南京中考英语作文训练：How to protect myself【题目】同学们，在你们成长的过程中，想到过母亲的付出吗？请写一篇6080词左右的小短文，描述母亲为你做的事和你的感受。以下提示词仅供参考。cook meals, wash clothes, read books to, go hiking with, happy, exciting【参考范文】My mother is always the busiest in my family. She does a lot for me and my whole family. She does most of the housework, such as cooking meals, washing clothes and so on. When I was still a little child, she read stories to me every night before I went to sleep. And she often took me to parks, zoos and other places to have fun. I am thankful to her for everything she did. I love my mother. （80 words）【解析】试题分析：这是一篇命题作文。在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要围绕要点组织材料，确定时态主要词汇等问题，由于是描述自己经历过的事情，故时态主要是一般过去时态和现在完成时态，人称是第一人称。写作中，应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。【考点】命题作文的写作点评：本题给出的材料较为简略，可发挥的空间较大，所以自己可以选择自己比较熟悉的内容发挥，利用自己熟悉的单词句式等。南京中考英语作文训练：An Unforgettable Day【题目】某英文报以An Unforgettable Day (难忘的一天) 为题，面向中学生开展征文活动，请你写一篇短文参加此次活动。内容包括：1、哪一天让你感到难忘；2、什么事（开心的、伤心的或是有特别意义的，）让你感到那天难忘；3、那一天你经历了什么；4、那天的经历对你有什么影响或者你有什么感受。要求：1、80-100 词；2、文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。【参考范文】An Unforgettable DayIll never forget June 11th, 2012.It was a sunny day. On the way