高中英语作文讲解.pptx

会计学1高中英语作文高中英语作文(zu wn)讲解讲解第一页，共17页。经典经典(jngdin)累积累积我知道你很忙，但如果你能拿出些时间来浏览一下他们我知道你很忙，但如果你能拿出些时间来浏览一下他们(t men)并并作出必要的改变我会很感激。作出必要的改变我会很感激。然而，并且，但是然而，并且，但是ask for your help; apply for; make changesI know you have a very busy schedule , but I d be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes.however- and-; but;第1页/共17页第二页，共17页。Writing 写出优质句子写出优质句子(j zi)，突破作文高分突破作文高分第2页/共17页第三页，共17页。 学习目标 1. 能够鉴赏范文，掌握文中有用 的句型和好的表达形式。 2. 通过合作讲解： 能够写出正确的简单句 能够创作出精彩高档句3. 掌握如何评价一份(y fn)作文。第3页/共17页第四页，共17页。 第二步：找出修饰成分第二步：找出修饰成分(chng fn)(chng fn)， 添加修饰成分添加修饰成分(chng fn)(chng fn)。 第一步：找出句子主干第一步：找出句子主干(zhgn)(zhgn)， 翻译句子主干翻译句子主干(zhgn)(zhgn)。第4页/共17页第五页，共17页。例句：例句：为了逃避挨骂为了逃避挨骂(i m)，那个淘气的男孩没关水，那个淘气的男孩没关水龙头就跑了。龙头就跑了。 第一步：找出句子第一步：找出句子(j zi)(j zi)主干主干， 翻译句子翻译句子(j zi)(j zi)主干主干。 男男孩孩(nn hi) 跑了跑了 注意：时态和语态注意：时态和语态The boy ran away.第5页/共17页第六页，共17页。=That naughty boy ran away.=That naughty boy ran away without turning off the water.=In order to escape being scolded, the naughty boy ran away without turning off the water.为了逃避挨骂为了逃避挨骂(i m)，那个淘气的，那个淘气的男孩男孩 没关水龙头就跑了。没关水龙头就跑了。 第二步：找出修饰第二步：找出修饰(xish)(xish)成成分，分， 添加修饰添加修饰(xish)(xish)成成分分第6页/共17页第七页，共17页。 技技 巧巧1. 使用较高级的词汇使用较高级的词汇3. 使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词词汇词汇(chu)可以衡量英语水可以衡量英语水平平丰富丰富(fngf)(fngf)的句式可以使的句式可以使文章增色生辉文章增色生辉 。恰当恰当(qidng)的连接词，的连接词， 使文使文章有章有“英语味英语味” ，上下衔接自，上下衔接自然。然。2. 使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式第7页/共17页第八页，共17页。1. 短语短语(duny)优先优先：我们想要我们想要(xin yo)和平。和平。她决定好好学习。她决定好好学习。We look forward to /call on peace.一、怎样使用较高级词汇一、怎样使用较高级词汇We want peace.She decided to study hard.She was determined to devote herself to studying.第8页/共17页第九页，共17页。2. 弃旧弃旧(q ji)取新取新: There is a temple on top of the mountain. There is a clean river in the city一、怎样使用较高级词汇一、怎样使用较高级词汇A clean river winds through the city.On top of the mountain stands a temple.第9页/共17页第十页，共17页。1. Suddenly I thought of a good idea. 2. You can find my house easily.3. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. 4. What we can do is to study hard. 5. The teacher suggested that we should pay attention to grammar. 一、怎样一、怎样(znyng)使用较高级的词使用较高级的词汇汇A good idea suddenly occurred to me. Youll have no trouble finding my house. The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.What we can do is to devote ourselves to study. The teacher gave us a suggestion that we should attach great importance to grammar. 第10页/共17页第十一页，共17页。1. 感叹句感叹句 How happy I was when I received your letter!2. 倒装句倒装句 Not only can it help you to form the good habit of studying English but also it can improve your writing ability and skills.3. 省略句省略句 While walking the dog, I witnessed a car accident. 二二. .如何使用较丰富的句式如何使用较丰富的句式 第11页/共17页第十二页，共17页。4. it做形式主语做形式主语(zhy)或宾语或宾语 It is of great benefit to keep diaries every day.5. 定语从句定语从句In my spare time, I regularly take part in the English corner, where I can express myself freely. 6. 名词性从句名词性从句What is the most important is that I often surf onan English website -Enjoy Reading. 第12页/共17页第十三页，共17页。6. To his surprise, the little girl knows so much. （使用名词性从句（使用名词性从句(cn j)）7. He didnt realize the truth until he came back. (使用强调句型使用强调句型) 8. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词使用过去分词)9. When you realize the importance of foreign languages, you can learn them well. (使用倒装句使用倒装句)10. He lay on the ground and his eyes were fixed on the ceiling. （使用（使用with复合结构）复合结构） What surprises him is that the little girl knows so much.二、怎样使用二、怎样使用(shyng)较丰富的句式较丰富的句式 It was not until he came back that he realized the truth.She walked out of the lab, followed by many students.Only when you realize the importance of foreign languages can you learn them well.He lay on the ground with his eyes fixed on the ceiling.第13页/共17页第十四页，共17页。 11. His mother lost work and his father was put into prison. 三、怎样三、怎样(znyng)巧妙使用关联词巧妙使用关联词His mother lost work, and to make things worse, his father was put into prison.第14页/共17页第十五页，共17页。 可以使文章衔接紧凑，有可以使文章衔接紧凑，有“英语味英语味”的一些关联词的一些关联词(1) 表示表示(biosh)对比的连接词对比的连接词 : on the contrary(2) 表示表示(biosh)时间的连接词时间的连接词: in the meanwhile，afterwards, eventually，in the end， (3) 表示表示(biosh)顺序的连接词顺序的连接词: first of all， to begin with， last but not the least (4) 表示表示(biosh)递进的连接词递进的连接词 : what is more， in addition(5) 表示表示(biosh)原因的连接词原因的连接词: due to， thanks to， owing to(6) 用于总结的连接词用于总结的连接词 : on the whole， in a word， in brief， (7) 表达个人观点的短语表达个人观点的短语: As far as Im concerned, in ones opinion/ view三、怎样巧妙使用关联词三、怎样巧妙使用关联词第15页/共17页第十六页，共17页。on the contraryin the meanwhile afterwards first of all， to begin withwhat is more， in additiondue to， thanks to， owing toon the whole，As far as Im concerned, in ones opinion/ view第16页/共17页第十七页，共17页。