高考英语写作指导---求职信.pptx

会计学1高考英语写作高考英语写作(xizu)指导指导-求职信求职信第一页，共40页。 求职信是写信人就某一职位向收信人提出请求求职信是写信人就某一职位向收信人提出请求的信件。求职信的语言属于正式用语，要用词简洁的信件。求职信的语言属于正式用语，要用词简洁准确，语气礼貌自信，所给信息要具有可信度。通准确，语气礼貌自信，所给信息要具有可信度。通常包括三部分内容常包括三部分内容(nirng)：1. 要阐述清楚招聘信息的来源与所申请的职位。要阐述清楚招聘信息的来源与所申请的职位。2. 简述个人信息。简述个人信息。3. 强调自己的能力并请求给予机会。强调自己的能力并请求给予机会。文体文体(wn t)概述概述:第1页/共40页第二页，共40页。第一段：说明信息来源及本人第一段：说明信息来源及本人(bnrn)的愿望的愿望;第二段：本人第二段：本人(bnrn)基本信息、学历、工作经历及基本信息、学历、工作经历及特长特长;第三段：表明想得到这份工作的迫切愿望。第三段：表明想得到这份工作的迫切愿望。求职信的结构求职信的结构(jigu):第2页/共40页第三页，共40页。从从2012-2016全国全国(qun u)各省市高考作各省市高考作文看，没有出现直接的向某公司或者单位求文看，没有出现直接的向某公司或者单位求职的英语作文，但是却有和此话题相关的擦职的英语作文，但是却有和此话题相关的擦边球作文。边球作文。 例如：例如：年份年份主题主题2015年陕西 写信申请成为自愿者2015年重庆 申请参加网站活动2015四川 写信成为留学生中文老师2012全国2卷 申请参与夏令营备考备考(biko)分析分析:第3页/共40页第四页，共40页。 综上所诉，求职信不能单纯理解为一综上所诉，求职信不能单纯理解为一定定(ydng)是向公司求职，也可以理解为是向公司求职，也可以理解为是求得某个活动的参与权，或者做某事的是求得某个活动的参与权，或者做某事的机会。机会。 因此此类作文比较灵活，写作过程中因此此类作文比较灵活，写作过程中应：应：内容上：所给信息(xnx)全部包含，礼貌，自信。结构上：词汇高级，句式多变，前后(qinhu)衔接自然。此外，平时应多积累有用句子，厚积薄发。结论结论:第4页/共40页第五页，共40页。表示信心，能力(nngl)或兴趣的方式：1. I feel that similar contributions might be made to your firm as well.2. I feel that, with my overall qualifications(综合素质) and desire, I could contribute significantly to your company.3. I I feel that I can make a strong contribution to your company.4. I I feel confident that I can provide the kind of leadership that you are seeking for.5. I am convinced that, with my interest together with academic background and working expriences, no one would be more qualified than me for this position.第5页/共40页第六页，共40页。常用语块常用语块主修主修专业专业 _2. (可可)胜任胜任(shngrn) _3. 精通精通/对对掌握熟练掌握熟练 _4. 申请申请 _5. 与与相处融洽相处融洽_get along well withmajor inbe qualified forhave a good command/knowledge ofapply for第6页/共40页第七页，共40页。6. 获得一等奖获得一等奖 _7. 对对乐观乐观 _8. 良好的人际关系良好的人际关系 _9. 富有合作精神富有合作精神 _ _10. 用电话用电话(dinhu)或电子邮件联系我或电子邮件联系我_ _cooperative/a good teamwork player/with teamwork spiritwin the first prizebe optimistic aboutgood interpersonal relationshipI can be reached by telephone/email第7页/共40页第八页，共40页。11. 满足你们的资历要求满足你们的资历要求 _12. 在在方面有丰富方面有丰富(fngf)的经验的经验 _13. 在你方便的时候进行面谈在你方便的时候进行面谈 _14. 开阔眼界开阔眼界/开阔视野开阔视野 _15. 责任感责任感/成就感成就感 _sense of responsibility/sense of achievementmeet your qualificationshave rich experience in/be experienced inhave a personal interview at your conveniencebroaden ones vision/horizons第8页/共40页第九页，共40页。求职信的开头求职信的开头(ki tu):1. I have just learned from todays newspaper that some are needed in your . I am interested in it. 2.My name is . I am a senior/ junior student of school/ in this university. Im writing you the letter about the, which.3. I am writing to apply for.4. I wish to apply for the post mentioned in your advertisement in.5.I am writing to express my interest in.第9页/共40页第十页，共40页。 6. I am writing in response to your advertisement for the position of.7. I would like to apply for the job advertised in yesterdays newspaper.8. Your advertisement for a sale manager in. has impressed me. I feel I am fit for it.9. the requirements outlined(所述的要所述的要) in your advertisement makes me confident that I am qualified for the position.第10页/共40页第十一页，共40页。graduate frombe good / skilled atbe expert inhave rich working experiencebe in good healthenjoy doing sth in ones spare timeget on well with求职信介绍求职信介绍(jisho)自己的自己的词组词组:第11页/共40页第十二页，共40页。求职信介绍求职信介绍(jisho)自己的自己的句式句式:Now Id like to introduce myself to you.My name is.Im.years old. Im.cm tall.I graduated from.University in 2003.I like . ，. and . in my spare time.I work hard and I can get along well with others.Im good at English and especially my spoken English is very good.I am capable of understanding Japanese and I can talk to foreigners in Japanese freely.第12页/共40页第十三页，共40页。：1. I would be grateful if you could consider employing me in your / giving me a chance to work for you.2. Thank you for your time and kind consideration.3. Please inform me when you have come to a decision. I am looking forward to 求职信的结尾求职信的结尾(jiwi):第13页/共40页第十四页，共40页。套用句式套用句式 1. 从你们的广告中得知你们正在招聘一名从你们的广告中得知你们正在招聘一名 2. 如果你们能够给我提供如果你们能够给我提供(tgng)这样的机会，我这样的机会，我将十分感激。将十分感激。1. I learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a2. I would really appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.第14页/共40页第十五页，共40页。3. 我相信我相信(xingxn)我是这个职位的最佳人选。我是这个职位的最佳人选。4. 一旦被录用，我将竭尽所能把工作做好。一旦被录用，我将竭尽所能把工作做好。5. 我盼望着你的尽快回复。我盼望着你的尽快回复。3. I am convinced that I will be the right person for the job/position.5. I am looking forward to your earliest reply.4. Once hired, I will devote myself to the post.第15页/共40页第十六页，共40页。假如你叫李华，从报纸上了解到一家广告公司要招聘假如你叫李华，从报纸上了解到一家广告公司要招聘一名打字员一名打字员(typist)(typist)。请根据以下提示写一封求职信。请根据以下提示写一封求职信。个人情况：九中高三年级学生，个人情况：九中高三年级学生， 曾经利用曾经利用(lyng)(lyng)暑期做过打字员工作，暑期做过打字员工作， 平时在学校做兼职打字员，平时在学校做兼职打字员， 每分钟可打每分钟可打120120字左右字左右 。求职优势：做事有耐心、求职优势：做事有耐心、 对广告业有一定的了解、对广告业有一定的了解、 友善、乐于助人友善、乐于助人例题例题(lt)第16页/共40页第十七页，共40页。Dear Sir, I have learned from your advertisement in the newspapers that your company is in need of a typist this summer vacation. I would like to apply for the position because I believe I am a suitable person for the job. I am a senior student in No.9 Middle School in grade 3. I enjoy typing very much and my speed is about 120 words per minute. I once worked as a typist in holidays, and now I am a typist in my school as a part time job . Besides,I am a person with great patience. Whats more, I have some knowledge of advertising. I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration.I am looking forward to receiving your reply. Yours faithfully， Li Hua求职信的结构求职信的结构(jigu)?第17页/共40页第十八页，共40页。第一段：说明信息来源及本人的愿望第一段：说明信息来源及本人的愿望;第二段：本人基本信息、学历第二段：本人基本信息、学历(xul)、工作经历及特、工作经历及特长长;第三段：表明想得到这份工作的迫切愿望。第三段：表明想得到这份工作的迫切愿望。求职信的结构求职信的结构(jigu):第18页/共40页第十九页，共40页。小试牛刀(xio sh ni do)：第19页/共40页第二十页，共40页。 I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. Im interested in the position, hoping that I can work for you.提纲提纲(tgng)：第20页/共40页第二十一页，共40页。第21页/共40页第二十二页，共40页。 Im 24 years old and will graduate from college this July. Im an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class. I have a good command knowledge of English so I can communicate with foreigners easily. Also Im experienced in computer operation. As for hobbies, reading is my favourite. In my spare time, I read a lot, which broadens my horizons. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. Besides, Im easy to get along with and like to make friends. So Im convinced that Im equal to the job.第22页/共40页第二十三页，共40页。 Id appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your reply.第23页/共40页第二十四页，共40页。第24页/共40页第二十五页，共40页。【2015年陕西】假定你是李华。在校报英语(yn y)专栏看到了学校“英语(yn y)文化节”的一则招募启事，请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。 Volunteers WantedOur annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms.Chen at .写作要点：1.表示写信意图；2.陈述应征目的；3.说明应征条件（性格、能力等）。写作要求：1.邮件词数不少于100； 2.开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；3.可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯； 4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Dear MS Chen,Im Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. _ Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Hua第25页/共40页第二十六页，共40页。试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示可知试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示可知需要结合需要结合(jih)“英语文化节英语文化节”的一则招募启事写一封的一则招募启事写一封应征邮件。写作时注意以下几点：应征邮件。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读招募启事，弄清招募职位所有信息和要求；、仔细阅读招募启事，弄清招募职位所有信息和要求；2、根据写作要点从三个方面（、根据写作要点从三个方面（a.表示写信意图；表示写信意图；b.陈述应征目的；陈述应征目的；c.说明应征条件）写应征邮件。写作时说明应征条件）写应征邮件。写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。言应该用一般现在时态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。第26页/共40页第二十七页，共40页。Dear MS Chen ,（意图）Im Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. Im writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.（应征(yngzhng)目的）I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.精选精选(jn xun)范文范文:第27页/共40页第二十八页，共40页。 （应征条件(tiojin)）As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.（期望）I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Hua第28页/共40页第二十九页，共40页。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用(shyng)了多种句式和结构。比如I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.运用了sothat句型，以及定语从句I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.。此外，文章还使用(shyng)了大量短语，如apply for the position, as well as, in public, get along well with,have such a good command of, lent a helping hand to, live up to等。插入语Besides，以及副词Successfully的使用(shyng)使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。第29页/共40页第三十页，共40页。【2015年重庆】Bookcrossing. Com 是一个面向全球(qunqi)的图书分享网站。该网站组织的分享活动有两种参与方式：一是自由分享（wild release），即把书放在指定地点，由其他参与者自由获取；二是定向分享（controlled release），即直接传递给另一位参与者。假设你是李华，请用英文写信申请参加。内容应包括：表明写信目的选择一种分享方式简述作出该选择的理由希望了解更多信息注意： （1）词数不少于80； （2）在答题卡上做答 （3）书信格式及开头已给出（不计入总词数）第30页/共40页第三十一页，共40页。作文精选： (目的)Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.(自己的选择(xunz) Youve introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled release. Of the two, the latter wins my favor. （选择(xunz)理由）By the means of controlled release, I only need to deliver books to other participants, not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.精选精选(jn xun)范范文文:第31页/共40页第三十二页，共40页。 （期望(qwng)和感激）If you could provide more specific information, I would be well grateful. Looking forward to your reply.第32页/共40页第三十三页，共40页。【2015四川】假如你是李夏。你看到关国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平，她可以教英语作为回报(hubo)。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿;2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由;3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议;4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。注意：1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好;2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称。第33页/共40页第三十四页，共40页。Hi Sharon,(信息来源，意愿和胜任理由(lyu)This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am willing to help you with your Mandarin. I think Im fit for it. As a native Chinese speaker, I can speak Chinese clearly and fluently, and my teachers think highly of my spoken Chinese. I have taught some foreigners Mandarin,which makes me have adequate experience in teaching. （建议） When it comes to how to speak fluent Mandarin, I suggest that you learn a bunch of pronunciation rules first, which are quite different from the English ones. Another suggestion is to 精选精选(jn xun)范文范文:第34页/共40页第三十五页，共40页。practice speaking. As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect”. （具体(jt)需求）However, my English is just OK and I have many problems with my study. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to study English well. I believe we both can make much progress with each others help. Thank you!Li Xia第35页/共40页第三十六页，共40页。【2012全国新课标卷】假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际(guj)中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括：1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力)2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家)3. 希望获准。注意： 1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。第36页/共40页第三十七页，共40页。Dear Sir or Madam, (信息(xnx)来源与愿望） Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I have learnt the news on the Internet that you are going to hold a summer camp in Singapore, which I am fond of for a long time. （意图） I have been looking forward to being able to not only tell the students from different countries something about China, but learn about some other foreign countries as well. Additionally, I am good at English in school, especially spoken English. Last year, I won the first prize in an English speech contest. I also hope to make some contributions to the friendship between countries. 精选精选(jn xun)范文范文:第37页/共40页第三十八页，共40页。（希望(xwng)获准 ） So I am eager to be accepted as a member of your summer camp. looking for forward to your reply!Regards, Li Hua第38页/共40页第三十九页，共40页。Thanks for your attention!第39页/共40页第四十页，共40页。