投诉类雅思小作文要点分析与实例点评.docx

投诉类雅思小作文要点分析与实例点评投诉类雅思小作文要点分析与实例点评腾宇5G类书信和A类议论文最大的区别在于，书信是允许考生在主体段对情节进行合理联想的。换句话讲，A类的图表题是看学生有没有能力读大学，而G类的书信是看学生有没有能力在英语国家顺利地生活。下面是我给大家带来的投诉类雅思小作文要点分析与实例点评，希望能帮到大家!投诉类雅思小作文要点分析与实例点评投诉信内容分析内容要点：1.所要投诉或抱怨的事情是什么2.将时间，地点及事情的经过及问题所在讲清楚3.你对解决问题的建议4.告知你的联络方法，如，通讯地址等注意事项：1.言语要安然平静，不要用太过激的词语2.对解决问题的建议要合理3.一封信只写一件事4.事情的来龙去脉要写清楚投诉信-范例答案DearSirorMadam,Iamwritingyoutocomplainaboutstereo,whichIboughtinJanuary.Afteronlytwodaysthingsstartedtogowrong.ThefirstproblemwastheCDdrawer,whichopenedandclosedtooquickly.Inearlytrappedmyfingersinit.ThenextdayIrecordedaDontoacassette.Everythingworked,butthesoundqualitywaseverypoor.Onthefollowingday,theCDPausebuttonstoppedworking.Naturally,Ireturnedthestereotoyouforrepair.YourassistantsaidIwouldhavetowaitonlyaweek.Aftertwoweeks,thenecessarysparepartshadstillnotarrived.Eventually,nineweekslater,Icollectedthestereo.TheCDplayerworkedproperly,buttherewasnoimprovementintherecordingquality.IamnotsatisfiedwiththeequipmentnorwiththeserviceIhavereceived.Iamthereforewritingtoaskforafullrefund.IwillreturnthestereotoyourshoponMondayandIexpecttoreceiveachequefor$250.Yoursfaithfully,5分作文DearSirorMadam,Iamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionwithmyroom-mate.Asyouknowweshareoneroom,IcannotstudyintheroomatallanymoreifIstillstaythere.Shealwayshasfriendvisitingandhaspartiesintheroom.Theymakelotsofnoiseandswitchontheradioveryloudly,formethisenvironmentisverydifficulttostudyandIneedaquietroom.Evenborrowsmythingswithoutasking,itisveryimpolite.IrequestyoucangivemeanewroomnexttermbecauseIhavebeenaskedherhaspartiesinotherplacemanytimestheystillhavepartiesintheroom.Ireallycannotstayinthesameroomwithher.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldchangemeasingleroom.Yoursincerely,7分作文DearSirorMadam，Iamwritingyoutoexpressmydissatisfactionwithmyroommateandrequestforanotheraccommodationnextterm.MymainproblemisthatIcannotstudyinmyroombecausemyroommatealwayshasfriendsvisiting.Healsohasparties,whichusuallyendsearlyinthemorning,severaltimesaweek.Furthermoreheoftenborrowsmythingswithoutaskingme.Icannotacceptthissituationanylater,especiallybecauseIhaveveryimportantexamnexttermandIreallymuststudyhard.ThisiswhyIwouldbeverygratefulifIcouldhaveanotherroomnextterm.Itwouldbemostconvenientformenothavingtosharemyroomwithsomebodyelse.Iamlookingforwardtohearfromyousoon.Yoursfaithfully,投诉信-常见用句*Iamwritingwithregard/referenceto/inconnectionwith*Iamwritingtoexpressmyconcern/dissatisfactionabout*Iwouldliketodrawyourattentionto*Iamwritingtoyoutocomplainabouttheservice:*Iamwritingtoyouwithreferencetotheabovetrip,whichyouorganized.*IhavereceivedyourinvoiceNo1234-BAfor$3456butnoticedthatanumberoferrorshavebeenmade.*Unfortunately,therealitywasverydifferent.*Iregrettoinformyouthat:*Weregrettoinformyouthatwewerenoatallsatisfiedwithyourservice.*YoucanimaginemydisappointmentwhenIdiscovered:*Youcanimagineourfeelingswhenwerealizedthatthiswouldmean:*IcansupposethattheyourpartnerinSantoPaulo*Ihavetriedtocontactyoubyphonebutcouldgetanyonewhoknewanythingaboutthismatter.*Weencloseareportonthedamageform:*IcontactedyouraccountrepresentativeinBank,butunfortunatelywithoutanysuccess.*Wemustinsistonreceivingourpriorpayment:*Ishouldthereforeliketohavemymoneyrefunded.*ThereforeIlookforwardtohearingyourcomments.雅思书信作文的写作思路分析G类的小作文绝大多数都是以书信形式展开的，这一形式本身决定了它与A类小作文有着很大的区别。但仔细分析一下题目，基本万变不离其宗，下面以剑9的一道题目为例来进行题目分析。Youareworkingforacompany.Youneedtotakesometimeoffworkandwanttoaskyourmanageraboutthis.Writealettertoyourmanager.InyourletterExplainwhyyouwanttotaketimeoffworkGivedetailsoftheamountoftimeyouneedSuggesthowyourworkcouldbecoveredwhileyouareaway首先，作文题目会给出一个情境，也就是要写这封信的事由和目的。紧接着，题目用小标题的形式给出了三个要求，也就是书信必需要讲清楚的三件事情，告诉大家要写什么。这样明晰的题目提出的方法，给审题降低了很大的难度，也为评分标准之一的人物完成减轻了很大的负担，由于大家只要就着这样的要求逐一回应就能够，而非像A类图表题一样还要动很大脑筋去想该写什么内容才能最好地回应任务。一段答一条，就这么简单!条理明晰的问题提出方法，也为文章的构造指出了一条明路。大家只需要为题目中的目的介绍和三个条目分别安排一段即可。在顺序上，假如有进行自己介绍的要求(假如有，一般出如今三个条目的第一条)，就将自己介绍和写信目的写在第一段，将剩下两个条目分别写一段。信件构造轻松搞定，如今来关心一下格式问题。首先，地址是不需要写。开始称谓顶格写，有时试卷会给出完好的称谓，有时只给出Dear。假如没有给出称谓，我们采取的方案就是下面两种中的一种：根据情境的要求，假如完全不认识收信人，写上DearSir/Madam假如认识收信人，就来给收信人编一个名字吧，例如DearJackDearMrGreen等。注意称谓结束用一个逗号。主体段的各段都顶格写，每段之间空一行。落款的祝福有很多种写法，通用的方法是Sincerelyyours顶格写，后面接逗号。而后空一行留下名字，同样，名字也给本人编一个，不要用真名，写个Mary啊Tom啊都能够。附一篇高分范文：Writingtask1Aspartofastudentsocialsurveyproject,youareorganizingagrouptovisitahistoricalexhibitioninasmalltown.Writealetteraskingforinformationregardingsuchthingsasthecontentsoftheexhibition,andthedatesofitsopeningandclosing,andifthereareanydiscountsavailable.DearSir,Iamorganizingagroupofstudentstopayavisittothehistoricalexhibitioninyourtown.Thisvisitwillbepartofourschoolsactivitiestoencouragethestudentstotakepartinsocialsurveys.Therefore,Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldsupplymewiththefollowinginformation.Firstofall,whatarethedatesbetweenwhichtheexhibitionwillbeheld,andwhatarethedailyopeninghours?Secondly,whatisthesizeoftheexhibition,whatisitsthemeandwhatobjectsareondisplay?Thirdly,arethereanyotheractivitiesbeingheldinconnectionwiththeexhibition?ImustpointoutthatIhopetobringoverstudentstotheexhibition.SoIwouldliketoinquireifthereisanydiscountavailableonentranceticketsforstudents.Ifso,howmuchisthediscountandwhatistheminimumnumberofstudentsnecessarytoqualifyforit?Ilookforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,GeorgeMoore投诉类雅思小作文要点分析与实例点评G类书信和A类议论文最大的区别在于，书信是允许考生在主体段对情节进行合理联想的。换句话讲，A类的图表题是看学生有没有能力读大学，而G类的书信是看学生有没有能力在英语国家顺利地生活。下面是我给大家带来的投诉类雅思小作文要点推荐度：