初三书面表达练习.ppt
Writing Practice 踏水中学踏水中学 葛丽葛丽DiscussionHow to write an English composition ?抄抄组组集集连连抓抓审审作文作文集句成段集句成段组段成篇组段成篇审清题意审清题意连词成句连词成句抓住要点抓住要点抄写规范抄写规范 Writing skillssix steps自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室“校校园英语之声园英语之声”栏目就栏目就“如何更好地利用课余时间如何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：内容要点包括：注意注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数参考词汇参考词汇: make good use of, net bar ,be crazy about ,interest groups , social activities 不良现象和行为不良现象和行为 1. 花太多时间在兴趣爱好上花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2. 经常进网吧，迷恋打游戏经常进网吧，迷恋打游戏3. 看法看法我认为我认为 建议（至少建议（至少3条）条）1.合理计划时间合理计划时间,集中注意力学习集中注意力学习2.参加各种兴趣小组和社会活动参加各种兴趣小组和社会活动3. 第一步第一步:审清题意审清题意认真审题认真审题，明确写作，明确写作主题主题、体裁体裁、人称人称、字数字数、结构结构、时态时态、提示、提示要点要点和和补充信息补充信息具体做法：具体做法：用笔勾画用笔勾画自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时自从实施教育新政，中学生有了更多自主支配的时间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这间，但有些同学不知如何利用好这些时间，针对这种现象，你校广播室种现象，你校广播室“校园英语之声校园英语之声”栏目就栏目就“如如何更好地利用课余时间何更好地利用课余时间”进行征文。请你用英语给进行征文。请你用英语给该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括：该栏目写一篇广播稿。内容要点包括： 不良现象和行为不良现象和行为 1. 花太多时间在兴趣爱好上花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2.经常进网吧，迷恋打游戏经常进网吧，迷恋打游戏3. 看法看法我认为我认为 建议（至少建议（至少3条）条）1.合理计划时间，集中注意力学习合理计划时间，集中注意力学习2.参加各种兴趣小组和社会活动参加各种兴趣小组和社会活动3. 注意注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数主题主题体裁体裁人称人称结构结构时态时态字数字数已知信息已知信息未知信息未知信息以一般现以一般现在时为主在时为主第二步：第二步：列出写作提纲（列出写作提纲（Outline）。）。具体做法：具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点根据段落整理写作要点不要遗漏不要遗漏要点！要点！Introduction Main body ConclusionproblemsopinionssuggestionsWrite an outline1. 花太多时间在兴趣爱好上花太多时间在兴趣爱好上2. 经常进网吧，迷恋打游戏经常进网吧，迷恋打游戏3. 1. 合理安排时间，集中注意力学习合理安排时间，集中注意力学习2. 参加各种兴趣小组和社会活动参加各种兴趣小组和社会活动3. 1. List some keywords about problems. Phrases: _ _2. List some keywords about opinions. Phrases: _ _ 3. List some keywords about suggestions. Phrases: _ _ _ 第三步：抓住要点，列关键词第三步：抓住要点，列关键词be good for study, health,spend on , time , hobbies, often , be crazy about computer gamesplan , pay attention to ,join interest groups ,take part in social activities,1. Make sentences with the keywords about problems. Sentences: _ _2. Make sentences with the keywords about opinions. Sentences: _ _3. Make sentences with the keywords about suggestions. Sentences: _ _第四步：连词成句第四步：连词成句Some students spend too much time on their hobbies.Its not good for our study and health. We should plan our time carefully .We should join some interest groups.第五步：集句成段，组段成篇第五步：集句成段，组段成篇 There are many things we can do. we can_and_ our study. We can _ different kinds of interest groups and _ some good social activities. We can _. If we have time, we should help parents _.However, how can we make better use of our spare time? For exampleBesides,And also plan our time carefully pay attention to jointake part indo some sportsdo some houseworkLets enjoy our own compositions!范文展示范文展示 Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But many students dont know how to make good use of their free time. They spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time. Also some students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games. I dont think its good for their study and health. However, how can we make better use of our spare time? There are many things we can do. For example, we can plan our time carefully and pay attention to our study. And also we can join different kinds of interest groups and take part in some good social activities. Besides, we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework. Lets make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful !Homework1.复习写作技巧笔记。复习写作技巧笔记。2.背诵精彩范文。背诵精彩范文。
