高中英语高分作文的特点.ppt

- By Yin linaYou are welcome!Teaching aim 高考作文高考作文25分，占全卷分分，占全卷分数的数的1/6。我们平时的作文训。我们平时的作文训练比较少，尤其难做到全批全练比较少，尤其难做到全批全改。所以试用一节作文课，以改。所以试用一节作文课，以抛砖引玉，让大家讨论高中如抛砖引玉，让大家讨论高中如何培养学生的写作能力。何培养学生的写作能力。作文讲评Steps：1.Rewrite the 2 Only sentences .2.Speak out the 6 points for your composition.3. Correct some passages of theirs .4.Advantages and disadvantages of the passages.5.Show a good example .6.Show the best handwriting and the worst handwriting .Requires Title：A great person I admired most Requires： 1.The outline 2.Using 1-2 Noun-clause 3.using Attributive-clause and V-ed or V-ing as attributive 4.Using Only-Drill Writing1.条理性：审题，列提纲，分段条理性：审题，列提纲，分段2.准确性：字、词、句、法使用无误准确性：字、词、句、法使用无误3.连贯性：用连词、副词、常见短语等连贯性：用连词、副词、常见短语等4.多样性：不同词汇、句式表达相同内容多样性：不同词汇、句式表达相同内容5.高级性：高级词汇和句型、思想性高级性：高级词汇和句型、思想性6.优美性：书写整洁漂亮优美性：书写整洁漂亮 With the success of economic reform, there is more freedom for people to choose their employment, and there are more chances for a person to transfer from one occupation to another if he likes. As we all know, some state-run enterprises meet with a lot of difficulties and have to cut down the number of their workers and staff; and some factories have closed down and their workers have lost their jobs. Some of these jobless individuals find new work quickly, but quite a few only want to accept light and well-paid jobs, so they have failed time and again to get new employment. And there are also some graduates from colleges and universities who persist in getting a “good” job. We all serve each other directly and indirectly in society, so no proper occupations are unworthy. One who looks for a job must take the following into account; his capability, the possibility and opportunity. Once he gets a job, he must try his best to do it well to prove his talent and ability. 不分段，缺乏条理性不分段，缺乏条理性 As we all know, Madam Curie was one of the greatest womenin the world. I consider her to be my idol. Born in a teachers family in 1867, Madam Curie led a hard lifein her childhood. She cant get the same education as boys，soshe had to leave her homeland. In 1895, she married PierreCurie, another French Physicist, and then they discovered Ra-a radioactive substance. Unfortunately, in 1906 her husband died from an accident.However, she didnt give up her research for the giant sorrow.Later, she found another radioactive element - Po, which wasnamed in honor of her motherland-Poland. A Great person I admire most She was given the Noble Prize in 1903 and1911 for her great contribution to science,becoming the only one who won the Noble Prizetwice. On July 14th 1934, she passed away. It wasthe radioactive substance that destroyed her life. Only when we know her difficulties andproblems, can we better understand her achievements. Madam Curie devoted her all life tothe science research, and cared little for money. What she cared of most was her research ofradioactivity. She was spoken highly of because she had seta good example to the world. That was why I admire her most.连贯性连贯性连词连词: 各种复合句的连接词，已经学过的有定语从各种复合句的连接词，已经学过的有定语从句、名词性从句，状语从句等等。句、名词性从句，状语从句等等。BookII：Page20 时间的连接词时间的连接词副词、常见短语副词、常见短语: P 10: Since then, As a young man , In a recent harvest, However, In deed, Later, In fact,多样性多样性I am Tom.I was named Tom. They all call me Tom.I am glad to tell you my name is Tom.不同句式的使用：主谓宾、主系表、主谓宾补、主谓宾宾等主谓宾、主系表、主谓宾补、主谓宾宾等同义词的使用： 本单元里 plant grow produce* At that time, hunger was a disturbing problem in many parts of the countryside.During his early years, much of thecountryside was troubled by hunger.* Spending money on himself or leading a comfortable life also means very little to him.He is not interested in buying things forhimself or in having a comfortable life. In those years，many people are hungry in the countryside.He doesnt care about some new things for himself or cares little about leading a comfortable life. There be There are lots of people in the street. There is a famous mountain in our county. There stands a temple on the top of the mountain. There lived an old monk in it . There lies a snake on the road. There exist a lot of problems in our society .高级性高级性生动，形象生动，形象书写展示书写展示优美性优美性准确性准确性一起来欣赏同学的作文：一起来欣赏同学的作文： 说出它的优劣来说出它的优劣来真诚希望大真诚希望大家提出宝贵家提出宝贵意见！意见！