高考英语书面表达之赢取高分的方法与策略.ppt

书面表达书面表达之之 赢取高分技巧与策略赢取高分技巧与策略 书面表达书面表达之之 赢取高分技巧与策略赢取高分技巧与策略 Welcome to our classWelcome to our class 35% of us think that do some sports is 35% of us think that do some sports is a good way to release our stress, such a good way to release our stress, such as play football. But 45% of us think as play football. But 45% of us think music is the best way, it is good for us. music is the best way, it is good for us. At last, 20% think we would like turn to At last, 20% think we would like turn to teachers for help if we are convenient.teachers for help if we are convenient. doingdoingplayingplayingwhichwhichtotoit isit isandand常见语法错误分析常见语法错误分析1. 1. 句子谓语句子谓语The building like a match box.The building like a match box.Help them when they are need help.Help them when they are need help. Some students like the books that was Some students like the books that was written by Lu written by Lu XunXun. . It is the businessmans deed that It is the businessmans deed that really make people angry.really make people angry.2.2.主谓不一致主谓不一致is / looksweremakes3.3.时态错误时态错误 A girl is rescued by A girl is rescued by the soldiers from the the soldiers from the earthquake in Si- earthquake in Si- chuan.chuan.4.4.短语误用短语误用 To my disappoint, Liu To my disappoint, Liu Xiang dropped out.Xiang dropped out.But all Chinese could But all Chinese could understand him and understand him and would still support would still support him.him.wasdiappointment5.5.冠词误用冠词误用 At Lantern Festival, a very funny thing At Lantern Festival, a very funny thing happened in Lian-yuan. A man asked for happened in Lian-yuan. A man asked for marriage in the street.marriage in the street.the2008,5,12, Sichuan happened an earthquake.2008,5,12, Sichuan happened an earthquake.There are many people complain that food There are many people complain that food prices are so high.prices are so high.To students, own a cellphon is fashionable.To students, own a cellphon is fashionable.6.6.中式英语中式英语 An earthquake happened in Sichuan on May An earthquake happened in Sichuan on May 12th, 2008.12th, plainingowningowningManyManywhoTip One:Tip One: likelikelove / enjoy / be interested inlove / enjoy / be interested inbe into / be fond of /be into / be fond of /prefer to / would like toprefer to / would like toIn order to release the stress, 35% In order to release the stress, 35% of us of us likelike playing football. 45% playing football. 45% likelike listening to music, while the listening to music, while the rest rest likelike turning to teachers. turning to teachers.Tip TwoTip Two词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少, ,也是也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。从衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。从评分标准可知评分标准可知, ,运用运用高级的词汇高级的词汇对提对提高书面表达的分数至关重要。高书面表达的分数至关重要。明显的明显的clear clear / / obvious obvious / / evident evident / / apparentapparent有才能的有才能的gifted gifted / / talentedtalented导致导致causecause/ /lead to lead to / / result inresult in/ /bring about bring about contribute tocontribute to意志坚强的意志坚强的strong-willed strong-willed / / strong-determinedstrong-determinedPractice: Practice: 使用不同单词表达下面词语的意思使用不同单词表达下面词语的意思 1.In our school, there are seventy-three 1.In our school, there are seventy-three classes.classes.Our school _ seventy-three Our school _ seventy-three classes.classes. 2. As a result the plan was a failure.2. As a result the plan was a failure.The plan _ a failure.The plan _ a failure.3.The students neednt pay for their 3.The students neednt pay for their books.books.Books _ the students.Books _ the students.4.Suddenly I had a good idea.4.Suddenly I had a good idea.A good idea suddenly _me.A good idea suddenly _me.Practice: Practice: 使用高级词汇替换划线部分的内容使用高级词汇替换划线部分的内容1.In our school, 1.In our school, there are seventy-threethere are seventy-three classesclasses. .2. As a result the plan 2. As a result the plan was a failurewas a failure. .Practice:Practice:Our school _ seventy-Our school _ seventy-three classes.three classes.is made up ofis made up ofconsists ofThe plan _ a failure.The plan _ a failure.ended up withended up withturned out to / proved to beturned out to / proved to be3.The students 3.The students neednt pay for theirneednt pay for their booksbooks. .4.4.Suddenly I had a good ideaSuddenly I had a good idea. .Practice:Practice:Books _ the students .Books _ the students .are free forare free forA good idea suddenly _me.A good idea suddenly _me.occurred occurred totostrucstruck k35% of us think that35% of us think that sports is a good sports is a good way to release our stress. But way to release our stress. But 45%45% believe thatbelieve that music is a good way, which music is a good way, which is good for us. At last, is good for us. At last, 20% suppose20% suppose thatthat wed like to turn to our teachers if wed like to turn to our teachers if convenient.convenient.Sb. have/hold the idea/point/view thatWhat sb. think/believe/suppose is thatTip ThreeTip Three在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句型，要灵活运用各种语法结构。句型，要灵活运用各种语法结构。运用运用得当的句子结构得当的句子结构可以给文章增可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章而因此生色不少，从而使整篇文章而因此生辉并最终获得高分辉并最终获得高分 。Task :Task : 使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式 小沈阳出生于辽宁省一小沈阳出生于辽宁省一个农民家庭，是一个很有天个农民家庭，是一个很有天赋的演员。虽然他很贫穷，赋的演员。虽然他很贫穷，他却意志坚强。小学毕业后，他却意志坚强。小学毕业后，他不得不放弃学业。他不得不放弃学业。 从那以后，他开始学习从那以后，他开始学习表演。他的天赋和努力以及表演。他的天赋和努力以及老师的帮助，尤其赵本山的老师的帮助，尤其赵本山的指导，使他获得了成功。他指导，使他获得了成功。他以幽默的表演赢得了大家的以幽默的表演赢得了大家的喜爱。喜爱。方法一方法一. . 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁使用非谓语动词使句子简洁 小沈阳出生于辽宁省一个农民家庭，是小沈阳出生于辽宁省一个农民家庭，是一个很有天赋的演员。一个很有天赋的演员。 Xiao Shenyang, who was born in a farmer family of Liaoning, is a gifted actor. Xiao Shenyang, bornborn inin a farmer familyof Liaoning, is a gifted actor. Born in a farmer family of Liaoning, Xiao Shenyang is a gifted actor. 非谓语动词非谓语动词虽然他很贫穷，他却意志坚强。虽然他很贫穷，他却意志坚强。 Poor though/ asthough/ as he was, he is strong-willed/strong-determined.方法二方法二. . 使用省略和倒装使句子生动使用省略和倒装使句子生动 Although/Though he was poor, he was strong-willed/strong-determined. Although/Though poor, he was strong-willed/strong-determined.省略省略倒装倒装 是他的天赋和努力以及老师的帮助是他的天赋和努力以及老师的帮助, 尤其尤其赵本山的指导赵本山的指导, 使他获得了成功。使他获得了成功。It is his talent , diligence and teachershelp, especially Zhao Benshans, that make him successful.方法三方法三. . 使用强调句型使句子明朗使用强调句型使句子明朗（强调句型）（强调句型） 是是他的天赋和努力以及老师的帮助他的天赋和努力以及老师的帮助, 尤其尤其赵本山的指导赵本山的指导, 使使他获得了成功。他获得了成功。高考大纲中常用的高考大纲中常用的连接词连接词1. 表示递进表示递进；在同一话题上补充内容在同一话题上补充内容 另外，还有：whats more; besides; also; moreover; in addition2. 表示转折关系表示转折关系 但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.3. 表示因果关系表示因果关系 因为，因此，所以因为，因此，所以: since; now that; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result; 4. 表示条件关系表示条件关系 如果，只要如果，只要: if ; on condition ( that ); as long as 除非除非: unless=if not 否则: or else5. 表示时间关系表示时间关系 当当 的时候的时候 : when ; while 在在之后之后: after 在在之前之前: before 直到直到: until 一一就就 : as soon as 后来，后来， 然后然后: later; afterwards 不久不久: soon 近来近来: lately; recently 自从自从 :since 从那时起从那时起: from then on6. 表示特定的顺序关系 首先，首先， 最主要的最主要的: above all 其次其次: secondly 然后然后: then; next 最后最后: finally; in the end7. 换一种方法表述 换句话说换句话说: in other words; that is to say; 8. 进行举例说明进行举例说明 例如，比如例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as9. 用于陈述事实用于陈述事实 实际上实际上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact 说实话说实话 : to tell you the truth10. 对一个话题进行总结对一个话题进行总结 总而言之，总的来说总而言之，总的来说: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word11. 其它常用到的副词其它常用到的副词 therefore; otherwise; finally; furthermore; thus; namely; although; afterwards; personally; 怎样使用恰当的连接词怎样使用恰当的连接词On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, where the playground used to be now stands another new buildingour library. (NMET1999 范文)As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.(NMET2001 范文)Whats more, I can go to bed earlier. (NMET2001 范文) Born in a farmer family of Liaoning, Born in a farmer family of Liaoning, Xiao Shenyang is a gifted actor. Poor as Xiao Shenyang is a gifted actor. Poor as he was, he was strong-willed. he was, he was strong-willed. AfterAfter graduating from the primary school, he graduating from the primary school, he had no choice but to drop out. had no choice but to drop out. Since Since thenthen, he has begun to learn acting. It is , he has begun to learn acting. It is his talent, diligence and teachers help, his talent, diligence and teachers help, especially Zhao Benshans, that make especially Zhao Benshans, that make him successful. him successful. Because ofBecause of his hishumorous performance, he is loved by humorous performance, he is loved by many people.many people.SampleSampleconnecting words connecting words 过渡词过渡词Tip FourTip Four从行文需要出发运用从行文需要出发运用恰当的连接词、恰当的连接词、过渡词过渡词可以使文章增色不少。使用可以使文章增色不少。使用恰当的连接词能使整篇文章衔接自恰当的连接词能使整篇文章衔接自然、浑然一体、文句流畅。然、浑然一体、文句流畅。 Practice 1 请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。1. Xiao Ming was walking in the street _ he heard someone cry for help.2. He advised that I hire a car _ I could travel around in the west .3. It was not long _ the police came .4. _he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl.whenin order thatbeforeAs soon as 5. Do you agree with my arrangement ? _ , do write to me soon.6. We can go downtown and do some shopping. _, we can pay a visit to some places of interest.7. I shared the cost of the gas with my friends ._, I saved $80.8. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _ , it may make us fat.If not/soIn additionAs a resultWhats worse 联合国教科文组织某考察团正联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：的形式简要介绍这个村的情况： 1)大小：近大小：近100户人家，约户人家，约500口人。口人。 2)变化：过去很穷，变化：过去很穷，78年后变年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。现已旧貌换新颜。 3)教育：原来的学校很小，现教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。儿童在此免费就读。 注意：注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：）词数：100- -120之间。之间。Practice 2 书面表达：书面表达：Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school.This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978. People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. The school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you.Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . 书面表达：书面表达：Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small . Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you. In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt and which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay herethe newly built teaching building/ May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. 赢取高分的策略尽可能的避免出现语法错误尽可能的避免出现语法错误 减少失分减少失分尝试使用高级词汇代替一般词汇尝试使用高级词汇代替一般词汇 增加表现力增加表现力灵活使用多样化的句型灵活使用多样化的句型 凸显特色凸显特色添加恰当的连接词和过渡词添加恰当的连接词和过渡词 使行文流畅使行文流畅 Write a letter to the senior three students of Xinhua No.1 Middle School.You can write whatever you want to share with them, such as your future life, your Study and your dream!