英语写作训练--如何写人物介绍课件--高考英语复习.pptx

Introduce A PersonAstrid JohnssonIs this a passage introducing a person?No, it is just a list of the persons life event. Compare the following sentences with short paragraph. Find out how the other sentences in A correspond to the sentences in B. Note the ways the sentences are combined.Sentences Astrid Johnsson is a cellist.She is Swedish.She is famous for her music.She is famous worldwide. She started playing the cello at the age of three. She was born in Stockholm in 1960.She left Stockholm in 1978. She won a scholarship to the Royal Academy of music in London. She studied the cello.She studied the history of music and composition. A paragraph Astrid Johnsson, the Swedish cellist, who is famous worldwide for her music, started playing the cello at the age of three. Born in Stockholm in 1960, Astrid left there in 1978 when she won a scholarship to the Royal Academy of Music in London. Whilst there, she not only studied the cello, she also studied the history of music and composition.An example Astrid Johnsson, the Swedish cellist, , started playing the cello at the age of three. Born in Stockholm in 1960, Astrid left there in 1978 when she won a scholarship to the Royal Academy of Music in London. Whilst there, she not only studied the cello, she also studied the history of music and composition.non-finite: doing/done linking wordswalst while 1. use non-finite (doing/done) to join sentences. 2. use linking words to add more information.Practise: join the sentences to make a more meaningful sentence. Tom is from Australia. He works in our school. He works an English teacher.Tom, an English teacher from Australia, works in our school.Tom was born in December, 1965.He came to teach English in our school in 2008. Born in December,1965, Tom came to our school to teach English in 2008.He is teaching English in our school.He is also an adviser of our school.Whilst teaching English in our school, he is also an adviser of our school.He teaches English in school.He is also an adviser of our school.He gives a lot of valuable suggestions.Whilst in school, he is also an adviser of our school, giving a lot of valuable suggestions.Graduating from the English department of Harvard University, he went on further education and received a doctors degree.He graduated from the English Department of Harvard University.He went on further education.He received a doctors degree. Combine these sentences to form a natural paragraph. Discussion: Which sentences can be put together? How?A brief introductionEarly experienceeducation Born in Stockholm in 1833, he left Stockholm at the age of nine when his family moved to Russia. Practice : use linking words to combine loose sentences. We study Chinese, Maths, physics, chemistry and English.We study Chinese, Maths, physics, chemistry as well as English.Besides (In addition to) English, we study Chinese, Maths, physics, chemistry.Not only but alsoAs well asBesidesIn addition toPractice: Combine these sentences to form a natural paragraph. A possible version Alfred, Bernhard Nobel, the man behind the Nobel Prizes, was an engineer, an inventor, and a poet. Born in Stockholm in 1833, he left there at the age of nine when his family moved to Russia. Whilst there, he was educated by private tutors. He not only studied chemical engineering, he also studied languages and literature in both the United States and France. Continue the biography of Alfred Nobel by combing the sentences. Returning to Sweden with his brother Emil in 1852, he and his brother.danmat Continue the biography of Alfred Nobel Returning to Sweden with his brother Emil in 1852, he and his brother started working in their fathers explosive factory. Deeply affected by an explosion in the factory which killed Emil in 1864, Alfred wanted to invent a safe explosive. In 1867, he invented “dynamite” and started to set up factories in many parts of the world to make it. When he died in 1896, Alfred left a fortune of $ 9 million, which was used to set up yearly Nobel Prizes for science, literature and world peace.phrases to learn be famous for famous worldwide win a scholarship compose film music whilst there deeply affected make a fortune yearly prizes for science, literature and world peace the Noble PrizesThank you!