中考英语写作精要(演示稿).ppt

Some ideas on Junior English Writing 1.the combination of the meaning & the structure2.a variety of the sentence patterns3.the use of set phrases, adverbs, conjunctions and so forth You are supposed to concentrate your attention on：意义与结构的统一意义与结构的统一句型的多样性句型的多样性固定短语，副词及连词等的使用固定短语，副词及连词等的使用1.The simple sentence 1) He runs. He runs slowly near his house every morning. He runs slowly near his house every morning to keep fit. They study. They study really hard at school from Monday to Friday. ( come, go, work, leave, arrive, walk） I. The sentence structure简单句简单句主谓结构主谓结构2) They study English. They study English very hard at an evening school on weekends for fun. I spent money. I often spent little money in the supermarket near my school.3) She was happy. I think she was very happy to meet you in the street the day before yesterday. The movies were boring. To be honest, the movies on TV were a bit boring. 主谓宾结构主谓宾结构主系表结构主系表结构4) The news made us unhappy. The disappointing news made all of us quite unhappy. The teacher asked the students to come. The young teacher asked the students to come early the next day. People call him Little Tom. (let, keep, ask, tell, see. hear)5) My mother gave me a book. My mother gave a book to me. Mike lent his friend a flat. Mike lent a flat to his friend. ( offer, return, show, write/ make, get, buy) 主谓主谓+复合宾语复合宾语主谓主谓+双宾语双宾语2.The compound sentence I like English. He likes English, too. I like English and he likes English, too. He has broken his glasses. He cant read anything. He has broken his glasses, so he cant read anything. She never said she was homesick. Actually she was homesick. She never said she was homesick, but actually she was. ( and, but, so)并列复合句并列复合句3. The complex sentence1) The adverbial clause I like English because it is interesting. I like English although it is quite difficult. Tom will telephone me as soon as he arrives in Beijing. You can work out the math problem if you think hard. They were so weak that they couldnt walk any further. The speaker raised his voice so that everybody could hear him. 主从复合主从复合句句状语从句状语从句2）The object clause Mr Black asked if/whether we had been to New York. David said (that )our school team won the soccer match last night. I wonder how many copies of magazines have been sold out. 宾语从句宾语从句3). The attributive clause They will find an apartment (that) they can afford to buy. This is the farm where we once worked for a year. Look at the girl whose father is my English teacher. I still remember the time when we worked together in the paper factory. Little Tom failed his math test, which made the whole family anxious. 定语从句定语从句1.I appreciate your help. I really appreciate the help you offered to me.2.Thank you for your book. Thank you for the book you sent me.3.He likes your school. He likes the school where you are studying.4.They borrowed some books and began to read them. They began to read the books they had borrowed.5. I only eat healthy food. I only eat the food that is healthy.6. The tourists visited a really interesting place. The place the tourists visited was really interesting. Sentence transformation句型转换句型转换1）Reading different kinds of newspapers after lunch is his habit. His habit is to read different kinds of newspapers after lunch. It is his habit to read different kinds of newspapers after lunch.2）He studies. He studies French in a school on weekends. He studies French in a school far from his house on weekends when he is free.3) Although she is only seven, she can play the piano pretty well. She can play the piano pretty well although she is only seven. 句子的后重句子的后重句子的前重句子的前重定语定语或其它修饰语的或其它修饰语的后置后置1.The book on the desk is mine.2. My uncle lives in a village far away from his school.3. His daughter is a lovely girl of nine years old with a round face and two big eyes.4. I prefer to receive a gift that has some thought behind it. 1.Adverbs hardly, probably/ possibly, maybe/perhaps, luckily/fortunately, unluckily/ unfortunately personally, finally, honestly, gradually, clearly, especially /particularly, quite, extremely, easily, differently, certainly, actually, normally, however, (but), besides, also， therefore (so) 副词副词2. Conjunctions not onlybut also, neithernor , eitheror , someothers on the one handon the other hand, 1) what, when, where, who, which, how, if/whether, that 2) before, after, when, while, as soon as, because, so that, sothat, though/although, if, 3) which, that, who, whom, whose, where, when连词连词3. Set phrases to be honest, to tell you the truth, honestly speaking in my opinion, I personally think, in fact to begin/start with, first/ first of all at first according to, after all, so far as I know for example/for instance, in conclusion, in the end, in general 固定词组固定词组1. The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much.2. We study Chinese, math, English and science at school. The main subjects we study at school include Chinese, math, English and science.3. The box was very heavy, so I couldnt carry it. The box was so heavy that I couldnt carry it. The box was too heavy for me to carry.4. He helped me make progress in physics. With his help, I have made progress in physics.5. The thought really counts. It is the thought that counts.6. I worked out the chemistry problem in this way. Only in this way did I work out the chemistry problem. The improvement of the sentences 7. We will do anything to help you. We will do anything we can to help you.8. They will watch English movies to improve their pronunciation. They will improve their pronunciation by watching English movies.上周，我们班讨论了有关动物园对动物产生的有利上周，我们班讨论了有关动物园对动物产生的有利因素和不利因素，表内是两种不同的观点，请你以因素和不利因素，表内是两种不同的观点，请你以此用英文写一篇报道，向某英语报社投稿。此用英文写一篇报道，向某英语报社投稿。 有利因素有利因素不利因素不利因素1可供人们观赏可供人们观赏1动物被关无自由动物被关无自由2 孩子可学到很多孩子可学到很多2动物生活习惯被改变，动物生活习惯被改变，不利于动物生长不利于动物生长3 动物生活得快乐动物生活得快乐3 应尊重动物应尊重动物 Last week, we had a discussion about the issue “Are zoos good places for animals?”_ Some students think it is a good idea to keep animals in the zoo. First, people can come to the zoo to watch them. And children can learn a lot about animals . Also, animals can be taken good care of in the zoo and live a quite happy life there. But others disagree. They think its not right to keep animals in the zoo. They also need freedom. They change their living habit. We should respect animals. Some students think it is a good idea to keep animals in the zoo. There are mainly three reasons. First, people can come to watch animals for fun. And children can learn a lot by watching them in the zoo. Besides, animals can also be taken good care of and live a quite happy life there. Others, however, disagree. They believe its not right to keep animals in the zoo where they cant live as freely as in the wild. Worse still, in this way they are probably changing their living habits, which is bad for animals. The most important is that we should respect animals. 某学生英文杂志社正举行征文比赛，议题是参加某学生英文杂志社正举行征文比赛，议题是参加社交活动的利弊。请你以表内的信息写一篇短文社交活动的利弊。请你以表内的信息写一篇短文投稿。投稿。 有利因素有利因素 不利因素不利因素1结交朋友结交朋友1. 2学会与人交流学会与人交流 更理解他人更理解他人2.3学到知识学到知识3.Do you often take part in social activities? Do you like them? Different people havevery different opinions._Some think social activities are good. First, you can make friends with others. Next you can learn to communicate with others and understand others better. And also you can learn a lot of knowledge.But others dont think so. They think you will spend a lot of time on social activities. And you cannot concentrate yourself on your studies. Social activities will have a bad influence on your studies. They say some of the social activities are not suitable for young people.Some think social activities are helpful because you can make friends with different people if you often take part in them. Also, you can learn how to communicate with people so that you may under-stand others better. Moreover, you can probably learn lots of knowledge you cant at school. But others think differently. They say too many social activities may take you a lot of time. Besides, you can hardly concentrate yourself on your studies if you go to social activities very often. As a result, they will have a bad influence on your studies. They dont think some of the social activities are suitable for young people. 1.On the other hand, others dont think so.2.Others, however, disagree.3.However, others dont agree.4.However, others think differently.5.But others dont have the same idea(s).6.Others, on the other hand, have a different opinion.7.Others, however, have an opposite view.一认真审题一认真审题 明确要求明确要求二写作切题二写作切题 表达准确表达准确三格式清楚三格式清楚 行文简洁行文简洁四开头自然四开头自然 结尾有力结尾有力五上下连贯五上下连贯 句子流畅句子流畅六六 把握时间检查细节把握时间检查细节