定语从句与写作2.ppt

Attributive Clause and its Application in Writing 定语从句及其在写作中的运用定语从句及其在写作中的运用Lead-inEnjoy a song-the one you loveI know you need a friendSomeone you can talk toWho will understand what youre going throughWhen it comes to loveTheres no easy answerOnly you can say what youre gonna doI heard you on the phoneYou took his numberSaid you werent alone, but youd call him soonIsnt he the guyThe guy who left you cryingIsnt he the one who made you blueWhen you remember those nights in his armsYou know youve gotta make up your mindAre you gonna stay with the one who loves youOr are you going back to the one you loveI know you need a friendSomeone you can talk toWho will understand what youre going throughWhen it comes to loveTheres no easy answerOnly you can say what youre gonna doI heard you on the phoneYou took his numberSaid you werent alone, but youd call him soonIsnt he the guyThe guy who left you cryingIsnt he the one who made you blueWhen you remember those nights in his armsYou know youve gotta make up your mindAre you gonna stay with the one who loves youOr are you going back to the one you loveShe is the girl_lives next door.Attributive clause关系词关系词先行词先行词定语从句定语从句who注意事项注意事项:1.从句的位置从句的位置:2.翻译方法翻译方法:先行词先行词 之后之后“.的的”关系代词关系代词关系副词关系副词who whom that which whose aswhen where why关系词关系词非限制性定语从句既可修饰先行词非限制性定语从句既可修饰先行词,又可修饰又可修饰整个整个主句主句,不可用不可用that引导，且关系代词引导，且关系代词不可以省略不可以省略。注意事项：注意事项：关系词的主要作用：关系词的主要作用：替代先行词替代先行词和和在从句中充当在从句中充当成分，在从句中作宾语可以省略。成分，在从句中作宾语可以省略。Practice of the Attributive clause 1.A plane is a machine _can fly . 2.The car _my uncle bought last week was stolen. 3.The man_is walking on the playground is my old friend. 4.The woman _ you saw in the park is our English teacher . which/that(which/that)who/that(who/that) 5. I saw a woman _bag was stolen. 6. The reason _he was late was that he got up late. 7. I still remember the day _I first came to Beijing. 8. It is an important day _ I will never forget. 9. The park _ they paid a visit to is beautiful.whosewhywhen(which/that)(that/which)10. His father, _ works in Beijing, came back yesterday.11. Shanghai, _is in East China, is developing quickly.12. My mother, _ you met last year, keeps telling me not to take them because they are dangerous.13. He failed in the exam , _ made his parents angry.14. _ we had expected , he failed in the exam.whowhichwhomwhichAs定语从句在写作中的应用定语从句在写作中的应用Part 1: 写作中定语从句的主要作用写作中定语从句的主要作用1. 增加词数增加词数2.可以连接两个包含同一事物的句子，可以连接两个包含同一事物的句子， 避免单词的重复和句式单一。避免单词的重复和句式单一。3.补充细节，以丰富文章内容。补充细节，以丰富文章内容。Part 2: 如何写定语从句如何写定语从句1. 题干中出现两句涉及同一事物的简单句。题干中出现两句涉及同一事物的简单句。Solution: 1找出这两个简单句中都出现了的同一个事物。找出这两个简单句中都出现了的同一个事物。 2将其中一个简单句改成从句，去修饰另外将其中一个简单句改成从句，去修饰另外一个句子中那个相同的事物（注意关系词的选用）一个句子中那个相同的事物（注意关系词的选用）For example:我们班是一个我们班是一个大家庭。大家庭。这个大家庭这个大家庭包括包括17个男生和个男生和7个女生。个女生。 Our class is a big family.The family consists of 17 boys and 7 girls.Our class is a big family, which consists of 17 boys and 7 girls.我们班是一个我们班是一个大家庭。大家庭。这个大家庭这个大家庭包括包括17个男生和个男生和7个女生。个女生。我最好的朋友是唐琦，他的外号叫我最好的朋友是唐琦，他的外号叫Donkey。My best friend is Tang Qi.His nickname is Donkey.My best friend is Tang Qi, whose nickname is Donkey.他居住在长沙，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的他居住在长沙，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。景点。He lives in Changsha.People can visit lots of scenic spots here.He lives in Changsha, where people can visit lots of tourist spots.(注意此处不再有注意此处不再有here)2. 题干中只有一个孤立的简单句题干中只有一个孤立的简单句, 找到这个简单句中找到这个简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。长沙是一个历史名城。长沙是一个历史名城。Changsha is a famous historic city.Changsha is a famous historic city, which has a long history of more than 3,000 years and large numbers of historic spots, such as the Yuelu Mountain, Mawangdui Han Tomb Museum and so on.有多久的历史？因何出名？有多久的历史？因何出名？Practice:1. 即将到来的中秋节是中国的传统节日。即将到来的中秋节是中国的传统节日。The upcoming Mid-autumn Day is a Chinese traditional festival.The upcoming Mid-autumn Day is a Chinese traditional festival, when people get together with their family members, eat moon cakes and enjoy the pretty moonlight.( (节日的习俗节日的习俗) )2. 李明是一个热心肠的人。李明是一个热心肠的人。Li Ming is a warm-hearted man .Li Ming is a warm-hearted man, who always lends a hand whenever somebody is in trouble. ( (具体化具体化) )直击高考直击高考1. 2013年全国高考新课标年全国高考新课标我的叔叔李明要去我的叔叔李明要去你居住的你居住的城市参加一个会议。城市参加一个会议。My uncle Li Ming is going to the city where you liveto attend a meeting.我让叔叔带去我让叔叔带去你想要的你想要的中国画。中国画。Ive asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting you have asked for before.2. 2013 年广东高考年广东高考那些那些做普通简单工作的做普通简单工作的人也在推动着社会的发展。人也在推动着社会的发展。Those who do simple and ordinary jobs are also promoting the development of the society.正如我们都知道的那样，正如我们都知道的那样，扫大街是最为困难的工作扫大街是最为困难的工作之一。之一。As we all know, cleaning streets is one of the hardest work.直击高考直击高考（2013年高考山东卷）年高考山东卷）描述你的假期打算描述你的假期打算 （包括兼职，旅游，志愿者等）（包括兼职，旅游，志愿者等）（用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因）（用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因）I would like to do a part- time job,which will help me earn money and accumulate working experience.Traveling is one of my choices,which will enrich my life and broaden my horizon.I would like to do voluntary work,which will make a great contribution to the society.Traveling is one of my choices,I would like to do a part- time job,Traveling is one of my choices,I would like to do a part- time job,Traveling is one of my choices,翻译写作训练翻译写作训练 众所周知，北京已经成功地举办了众所周知，北京已经成功地举办了2008年奥运年奥运会。奥运会上友好的志愿者们利用了英语这个语会。奥运会上友好的志愿者们利用了英语这个语言工具为各国运动员及客人服务，给他们留下了言工具为各国运动员及客人服务，给他们留下了深刻印象。我渴望有一天能做一名传播中国灿烂深刻印象。我渴望有一天能做一名传播中国灿烂文化的志愿者，所以我现在应该努力学好英语。文化的志愿者，所以我现在应该努力学好英语。只有这样，才能为国家贡献自己的力量。只有这样，才能为国家贡献自己的力量。注意：要使用定语从句注意：要使用定语从句. . As is known to us all, Beijing has successfully hosted the 2008 Olympic Games. The friendly volunteers who made full use of the tool of English to serve guests and athletes from all over the world during the Olympics, left deep impression on them. I desire to be a volunteer who is a carrier for our splendid culture some day. So now I should try my best to learn English well, by which I can make my contributions to my country.Translate the following English proverbs intoChinese .1. God help those who help themselves . 2. He who laughs last laughs best . 3. He who doesnt reach the Great Wall is not a true man .4. He who is content is always happy.自助者天助之。自助者天助之。笑到最后的才是笑得最好的。笑到最后的才是笑得最好的。不到长城非好汉。不到长城非好汉。知足常乐。知足常乐。写作训练 LI MING 是我们班的同学。今年17岁。他个子不高留着短发。他父母都是老师，在油田二中工作。他家离学校不远。他学习很努力所以老师和学生们都很喜欢他。他经常帮助家里很穷的学生。大家都很尊敬他。上大学是他的理想之一。Homework:1. Polish the article we have written in the class.2. Review the attributive clause.2. Recite the new words.翻译下列句子翻译下列句子1.不努力学习的学生不会通过考试的。不努力学习的学生不会通过考试的。2.她上周买的房子非常漂亮。她上周买的房子非常漂亮。3.这就是他爸爸工作的地方。这就是他爸爸工作的地方。4.你们已经取得了很大的进步，这使老师非常高你们已经取得了很大的进步，这使老师非常高兴兴.5.众所周知，他是一个好学生。众所周知，他是一个好学生。6.北京是中国的首都，它是一座美丽的城市。北京是中国的首都，它是一座美丽的城市。7.鲁迅的原名鲁迅的原名(real name)是周树人。在他的一生是周树人。在他的一生中他写了很多小说和散文（中他写了很多小说和散文（prose)8.杰克来自加拿大，他在我们学校已经学习了杰克来自加拿大，他在我们学校已经学习了3年。年。他经常帮助我们学英语，而且中文也讲的很不错。他经常帮助我们学英语，而且中文也讲的很不错。翻译下列句子翻译下列句子1.不努力学习的学生不会通过考试的。不努力学习的学生不会通过考试的。The students who dont study hard will not pass the exam.2.她上周买的房子非常漂亮。她上周买的房子非常漂亮。The house which she bought last week is very nice .3.这就是他爸爸工作的地方。这就是他爸爸工作的地方。This is the place where his father works.4.你们已经取得了很大的进你们已经取得了很大的进 步，这使老师非常高兴步，这使老师非常高兴.You have made great progress, which makes your teacher very happy.5.众所周知，他是一个好学生。众所周知，他是一个好学生。As is known to us all, he is a good student.6.北京是中国的首都，它是一座北京是中国的首都，它是一座 美丽的城市。美丽的城市。Beijing,which is the capital city of China ,is a very beautiful .7.鲁迅的原名鲁迅的原名(real name)是周树是周树人。在他的一生中他写了很多小人。在他的一生中他写了很多小说和散文（说和散文（prose)Luxun,whose real name is ZhouShuren,wrote many novels and proses in his whole life .8.杰克来自加拿大，他在我们学校已经学习了杰克来自加拿大，他在我们学校已经学习了3年。年。他经常帮助我们学英语，而且中文也讲的很不错。他经常帮助我们学英语，而且中文也讲的很不错。Jack is from Canada. He has studied in our school for three years .He often helps us learn English .He speaks Chinese very well.Jack is a student of our school ,who comes from Canada. He has studied in our school for three years .He often helps us learn English ,and he speaks Chinese very well.Jack comes from Canada. He is a student of our school where he has studied for 3 years .Not only does he often help us learn English but he speaks Chinese fluently as well.