写作训练三 (2).ppt

写作训练三议论文-How to write an argumentation-How to write an argumentation（议论文）（议论文） StructurePart 1: (beginning) have different opinions on sth. react to sth in different ways differ in their attitudes towards sthPart 2: (body) some. others/ prefer to do A.rather than do B.Part3: (conclusion) in a word / in short / in my opinion / I am in favor of the idea that/for/against 英语句子的种类英语句子的种类简单句简单句 (The simple sentence)并列句并列句 (The compound sentence)复合句复合句 (The complex sentence)请用合适的并列连词把每组句子合并为一个并列请用合适的并列连词把每组句子合并为一个并列句。句。1. I turned on the TV.I watched it. 2. I bought my sister a present.She didnt like it. 并列句并列句I turned on the TV and watched it.I bought my sister a present,but she didnt like it.3.He was tired. He went to bed. 4.The child hid behind his mothers skirt. He was afraid of the dog.He was tired, so he went to bed.The child hid behind his mothers skirt,for he was afraid of the dog.请用括号中所给的词把此组句子请用括号中所给的词把此组句子连接为一个复合句。连接为一个复合句。I still remember the day .I first came to Beijing on that day.(when)I still remember the day when I first came to Beijing.特殊句式特殊句式t句型句型强调句型强调句型倒装句型倒装句型ith复合结构复合结构独立主格结构独立主格结构省略句型省略句型将下列句子变成强调句或者倒装句将下列句子变成强调句或者倒装句1.I didnt realize the mistake until I grow up.(强调划线部分）强调划线部分）2.We can make our country stronger and stronger in this way.（倒装句）（倒装句）It was not until I grow up that I realized the mistakeOnly in this way can we make our country stronger and stronger.III. 汉语中的逗号与在英语中的作用并汉语中的逗号与在英语中的作用并非一致非一致 英语中句与句之间的联系绝不依靠逗号英语中句与句之间的联系绝不依靠逗号, 而是借助而是借助连接词。缺少连接词连接词。缺少连接词, 句与句之间也就不存在其合理句与句之间也就不存在其合理性性.例如例如: 老师问了我一个问题老师问了我一个问题, 我不会回答。我不会回答。 The teacher asked me a question, I couldnt answer it. The teacher asked me a question, and/but I couldnt answer it. 【要点要点1】插入语前后须用逗号隔开插入语前后须用逗号隔开 1. It is, after all, due to his negligence. 毕竟这是由于他的疏忽毕竟这是由于他的疏忽 2. She is, as I have told you before, very fond of collecting stamps. 就像我以前告诉过你的她很喜欢集邮就像我以前告诉过你的她很喜欢集邮 3. I am ,therefore, very careful when crossing the road. 因此我过马路时非常小心因此我过马路时非常小心4. They, Mr. and Mrs. White, will be there in Beijing tomorrow. 他们（怀特先生和太太）明天就到达北京他们（怀特先生和太太）明天就到达北京5. He is, to be exact, sixteen years old and is not old enough to join the army.确切的说，他才十六岁，还没有达确切的说，他才十六岁，还没有达到参军的年龄到参军的年龄【要点要点2 2】状语从句和逗号状语从句和逗号 (1) 句首状语从句用逗号隔开。 If it rains tomorrow, I will not go. When they met, they used to nod to each other. (2) 状语从句出现在主句之后, 一般不用逗号，但附加的语意强时，就用逗号。 I met Tom when I was five years old. He works hard, so that he may pass. 词汇词汇,句型句型 , 语法多样化语法多样化 1.覆盖了所有的覆盖了所有的要点要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结应用了较多的语法结构和词汇构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑凑要要点点全全连连接接词词对写作的建议：对写作的建议：1、注意、注意审题审题！2、分段写分段写！3、注意书面表达、注意书面表达板块齐全、要点完整板块齐全、要点完整；4、段与段之间一定要有、段与段之间一定要有过渡性过渡性的语句；的语句；5、句式应富于、句式应富于变化变化；6、适当使用、适当使用较高级较高级的词汇；的词汇；7、尽量避免、尽量避免句型结构、时态和语态句型结构、时态和语态等错误；等错误；8、加强、加强个人观点的准确阐述个人观点的准确阐述！9、注重、注重书写书写！Writing model Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (议论议题) . In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in (议论议题) . Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, (优点一). And secondly (优点二) . Just as a popular saying goes, Every coin has two sides, (议论议题) is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, (缺点一) .In addition, （缺点二）.(本次作文未涉及) To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of (议论议题) into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the (议论议题) 仿真卷四书面表达 随着现代科技的发展，越来越多的电动汽车将进入人们的生活，受到人们的青睐。请你根据下面表格中的提示内容，用英语写一篇关于电动汽车的优点及建议的短文。电动汽车的优点：1.节能、环保、不污染空气 2.安全、易操作、低噪音建议：1.采取有效措施来支持电动汽车的生产 2.鼓励使用电动汽车，使世界更干净、更美好。优点优点节能、环保、不污染空气节能、环保、不污染空气安全、易操作、低噪音安全、易操作、低噪音有效措施有效措施支持支持生产生产鼓励使用鼓励使用使世界更干净、更使世界更干净、更美好美好1.审题审题2.关键词关键词3.分段分段4.连句连句5.发表观点发表观点6.查错整理查错整理注意：1. 词数100词左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 参考词汇：节能：energy-saving _ With the development of modern science and technology,more and more electric cars will go into our life and become popular in the future. There are many advantages of electric cars. Firstly, electric cars are energy-saving and they can help us protect our environment. They dont pollute air because they use electricity instead of petrol. Secondly, it is easy and safe to drive Sample writingelectricity cars. Besides,they make little noise while they are running. In my opinion, our government should take some measures to support the production. People should be greatly encouraged to use electric cars in order to make our world cleaner and better in the future. Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over electric cars. In fact, there are some advantages and in electric cars . Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, electric cars are energy-saving and they can help us protect our environment. They dont pollute air because they use electricity instead of petrol. And secondly , it is easy and safe to drive electricity cars. Besides,they make little noise while they are running. To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of electric cars into full play, our government should take some measures to support the production. People should be greatly encouraged to use electric cars in order to make our world cleaner and better in the future.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the electric cars.Thank you for your listening.