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How to improve a chart writingWriting湖南省浏阳市第一中学英语组湖南省浏阳市第一中学英语组 冯玉荣冯玉荣What activities do you usually have after school?每天所用时间（分钟）每天所用时间（分钟）假如你是李华，最近你学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如假如你是李华，最近你学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表下。请根据图表1 1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表表2 2中一两个数据中反映的情况写出你的个人看法。标题和开头部中一两个数据中反映的情况写出你的个人看法。标题和开头部分已给出，词数分已给出，词数120120左右左右Chart 1: 学生主要课余活动及所用时间学生主要课余活动及所用时间Chart 2: 学生各项业余活动所占课余时间比例学生各项业余活动所占课余时间比例After-school activities in our school Recently, I have done a survey about the daily average amount of time the students in my school spend on different after-school activities. . 每天所用时间（分钟）每天所用时间（分钟）学生主要课余活动及所用时间学生主要课余活动及所用时间The chart/graph above shows/describes that From the chart/graph we can that can be seen from the chart/graph that. is shown/described in the chart/graph, (根据）根据）the chart/graph, find out/learn/see It According to As学生各项业余活动所占课余时间比例学生各项业余活动所占课余时间比例Translate the following sentences.1.我们学校的学生每天花我们学校的学生每天花96分钟做作业。分钟做作业。2. 看电视占用了看电视占用了72分钟。分钟。3. 24分钟花在了电脑上。分钟花在了电脑上。4. 学生花了学生花了10%的课余时间用电脑。的课余时间用电脑。5. 锻炼身体只占用了课余时间的锻炼身体只占用了课余时间的5%。1. 我们学校的学生每天花我们学校的学生每天花96分钟做作业。分钟做作业。2看电视占用了看电视占用了72分钟。分钟。3. 24分钟花在了电脑上。分钟花在了电脑上。4. 学生花了学生花了10%的课余时间用电脑。的课余时间用电脑。5. 锻炼身体只占用了课余时间的锻炼身体只占用了课余时间的5%。The students in our school .Watching TV .The students spend their spare time the computer. Translate the following sentences.Doing sports .spend 96 minutes every day in doing homework/on homeworktakes up/occupies 72 minutesontakes up/occupies only 5% of the spare time.10 percent of/ one tenth of/10% of 24 minutes .is spent on the computerChart 2: 学生各项业余活动所占课余时间比例学生各项业余活动所占课余时间比例in my opinion,to my mind, From my point of view,I hold the view/opinion thatAs far as I am concerned,Personally, I think From Chart 1, we can learn that the students spend 96 minutes in doing homework. Watch TV takes up 72 minutes. They spend 36 minutes listen to music. 24 minutes are spent on the computer. They only spend 12 minutes on sports. Which is shown in Chart 2, the students only spend 5% their spare time on sports and they spend 30 percentage of their spare time on TV. I think they spend too much time on TV and too few time on sports. Thats not good for our healthy. I think the students should do more sports in their free time to build up their body. From Chart 1, we can learn that the students spend 96 minutes in doing homework. Watch TV takes up 72 minutes. They spend 36 minutes listen to music. 24 minutes are spent on the computer. They only spend 12 minutes on sports.Watchinglisteningis Which is shown in Chart 2, the students only spend 5% their spare time on sports and they spend 30percentage of their spare time on TV. I think they spend too much time on TV and too few time on sports. Thats not good for our healthy. I think the students should do more sports in their free time to build up their body. ofpercenthealththeirbodieslittleAs From Chart 1, we can learn that the students spend 96 minutes in doing homework. Watching TV takes up 72 minutes. They spend 36 minutes listening to music. 24 minutes is spent on the computer. They only spend 12 minutes on sports. As is shown in Chart 2, the students only spend 5% of their spare time on sports and they spend 30 percent of their spare time on TV. I think they spend too much time on TV and too little time on sports. Thats not good for their health. I think the students should do more sports in their free time to build up their bodies. Is it a good writing? They spend 36 minutes listening to music. 24 minutes is spent on the computer. They only spend 12 minutes on sports. . the students only spend 5% of their spare time on sports and they spend 30 percent of their spare time on TV. They spend 36 minutes listening to music 24 minutes is spent on the computer. ,it . . the students only spend 5% of their spare time on sports (然而，强调对比）然而，强调对比）they spend 30 percent (of the time) on TV. andHowevertakes them 12 minutes to do sportswhile I think they spend too much time on TV and too little time on sports. Thats not good for their health. I think the students should do more sports in their free time to build up their bodies. (很明显）很明显）that many students watch TV do sports after school, is not good for their health.（定语（定语从句）从句） (连词表连词表“因此因此”），）， , the students should (充分利用课余时间）充分利用课余时间）to do more sports to build up their bodies. It is obviousprefer to rather than whichTherefore/So/Thusin my opinion/to my mind/I hold the view that/ as far as I am concernedmake good/full use of their free timewould rather than /would rather thanmake the best/most of their spare time Recently, I have done a survey about the daily average amount of time the students in my school spend on different after-school activities. From Chart 1, we can learn that the students spend 96 minutes in doing their homework. Watching TV takes up 72 minutes. They spend 36 minutes listening to music and 24 minutes is spent on the computer. However, it takes them only 12 minutes to do sports. As is shown in Chart 2, the students only spend 5% of their spare time on sports while they spend 30 percent of the time on TV. It is obvious that many students prefer to watch TV rather than do sports after school, which is not good for their health. Therefore, I hold the view that the students should make good use of their free time to do more sports to build up their bodies.What should a good writing be like? As is shown in Chart 2From Chart 1, we can learn thatgood for their healthI hold the view that Therefore However spendin doingtakes upis spent on it takes them to do whileprefer to rather than do which is notmake good use ofbuild upIt is obvious thatandConclusion uWell-organized (clear outline, linking words)uProper & beautiful sentences. ( good expressions & various sentence patterns)however, therefore, so, and, while,From Chart 1, we can learn that As is shown from Chart 2,. prefer to do. rather than do. make (good/full) use of. build up Complex sentences It is obvious that ,which is not good for their healthI hold the view that and/whilespend. on sthspend. (in) doing sth.takes up.It takes sb.+一段时间+to do 下面两幅图表反映的是最近调查你校学生的有关信息：下面两幅图表反映的是最近调查你校学生的有关信息：写作要求写作要求请根据以上两个图表介绍你校在校学生结构情况和中学毕业生去向调查情况，请根据以上两个图表介绍你校在校学生结构情况和中学毕业生去向调查情况， 并谈谈你自己的毕业意向及理由。（讲话的开头和结尾已为你写好）。并谈谈你自己的毕业意向及理由。（讲话的开头和结尾已为你写好）。参考参考词汇：词汇： 职业学院：职业学院：vocational college 外来务工人员：外来务工人员：migrant workersLadies and gentlemen, Im Li Hua. Today, Im honored to share with you the survey in our school. Thats all. Thank you.学生人数百分比学生人数百分比在校学生结构图在校学生结构图中学毕业生去向示意图中学毕业生去向示意图percent of./ 分数（分数（ one third of, three fifths of, one quarter )/the majority of the studentstake up/occupy/account for percent (占百分之占百分之)选择选择choose to do/plan to do/ intend to do/would like to do/prefer to do百分比百分比In my opinion/To my mind/From my point of view/I hold the view that./As far as I am concerned/Personally, I think Sentence patterns for reference It is obvious thatThere are 分数分数/百分数百分数+ whoThere are 分数分数/百分数百分数 + doing 简单句简单句+while（然而）（然而）+简单句简单句简单句简单句+and +简单句简单句我认为我认为Linking wordsbesides / whats more/ in addition / furthermore/ moreoverIn a word/ in short/ To sum up,Finish Task 5 Review what you have learned today HomeworkLadies and gentlemen, Im Li Hua. Today, Im honored to share with you the result of the survey in our school. As is shown from Chart 1, the students in our school are made up of local students, the children of migrant workers and foreign students. The local students take up ninety-one percent, while eight percent are the children of migrant workers, and one percent foreign students. From Chart 2, we can learn the students choices after graduation. There are about two thirds of them who intend to go to university. One quarter choose to enter vocational colleges, ten percent plan to go abroad for further studies, and the rest, five percent, would like to go directly into employment. As for me, I prefer to go abroad to pursue higher education. Because I am eager/anxious to learn more about different cultures and customs in foreign countries. Whats more, I will become more independent if I live abroad for I have to rely on myself most of the time. Thats all. Thank you.