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高考短文改错解题方略Contents 高考短文改错应试策略及答题原则高考短文改错命题特征及命题趋势短文改错典型错词类型分析归纳高考短文改错真题实战演练本题满分本题满分1010分，给出一篇约分，给出一篇约100100个单词的短文，文中有个单词的短文，文中有1010处错误，要求考生对每个句子进行判断，如有错误即处错误，要求考生对每个句子进行判断，如有错误即将其改正。错误类型包括将其改正。错误类型包括词法、句法、行文逻辑词法、句法、行文逻辑等方面等方面的错误。的错误。注意答题说明及答题规范Introduction 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。u 增加增加 （1-21-2个）个） 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。），并在其下面写上该加的词。 u 删除删除 （1-21-2个）个） 把多余的词用斜线（把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。不计分。）划掉。不计分。u 修改修改 （6-86-8个）个） 在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。u 注意：注意：1 1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2 2、只允许修改、只允许修改1010处，多者（丛第处，多者（丛第1111处起）不计分。处起）不计分。注意答题说明及答题规范 纵观近年高考英语短文改错题，学生和老师都认为纵观近年高考英语短文改错题，学生和老师都认为难度不大，然而，每年高考中还是有不少考生对此题深难度不大，然而，每年高考中还是有不少考生对此题深感头痛，主要原因是：感头痛，主要原因是：u考生的英语基础知识不扎实考生的英语基础知识不扎实. .u考生缺乏对短文改错命题考生缺乏对短文改错命题 特点的了解和做题规律方特点的了解和做题规律方法的总结法的总结. .Problems重视重视掌握基本的词汇和语法知掌握基本的词汇和语法知识识; ; 规范使用常用的词规范使用常用的词语和习语语和习语. .广泛阅读，广泛阅读，增强语感增强语感，提高语言知识运用的准确性，提高语言知识运用的准确性 . .做题时以句子为单位，做题时以句子为单位，从语篇角度把握内容从语篇角度把握内容, ,查找行查找行文逻辑错误。文逻辑错误。错误的设置一般都是中学生写作时常出现的错误错误的设置一般都是中学生写作时常出现的错误 。改错训练和书面表达训练结合改错训练和书面表达训练结合。Tipsu 短文中所设的错误大部分都是所谓的短文中所设的错误大部分都是所谓的“语法语法”错误错误, , 但是这种试题并不是单纯检测语法知识但是这种试题并不是单纯检测语法知识的的, ,而是检测考生的写作能力中的校验能力。而是检测考生的写作能力中的校验能力。试题的立意特征高考短文改错命题特征及命题趋势u 高考短文改错涉及词汇、语法、句型结构等方高考短文改错涉及词汇、语法、句型结构等方面的知识和逻辑推断和综合辨析面的知识和逻辑推断和综合辨析, , 是一种在较是一种在较高层次上考查考生对英语知识的掌握和语言综高层次上考查考生对英语知识的掌握和语言综合运用能力的测试题型。合运用能力的测试题型。u 题材以记叙文为主题材以记叙文为主, ,题材和语言符合中学生实题材和语言符合中学生实际际; ;句子结构由简单句主逐渐过渡到以复合句句子结构由简单句主逐渐过渡到以复合句和并列句为主。学生在平时写作中常出现的错和并列句为主。学生在平时写作中常出现的错误是短文改错的考查的重点。误是短文改错的考查的重点。试题的情景特征高考短文改错命题特征及命题趋势u 高考短文改错的难度、错误类型设置、文章高考短文改错的难度、错误类型设置、文章长度通常不会有太大变化。长度通常不会有太大变化。u 考查会更加注重语用功能考查会更加注重语用功能, ,取材范围将更广取材范围将更广泛泛, ,并注重语言的综合运用能力。并注重语言的综合运用能力。试题的命题趋势高考短文改错命题特征及命题趋势 What types of mistakes are usually involved in Passage Correcting? What is the method of correcting?高考短文改错命题规律Discussion 动词形，名词数动词形，名词数 还要注意形和副还要注意形和副 非谓语，细辨别非谓语，细辨别 介词短语要牢记介词短语要牢记 代词格，细领悟代词格，细领悟 句子成分多分析句子成分多分析 冠词连词常光顾冠词连词常光顾 逻辑错误须关注逻辑错误须关注 错误主要集中在动词的时态、语态，主谓一致等方面。错误主要集中在动词的时态、语态，主谓一致等方面。【2006安徽卷安徽卷】 Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish. 【2006安徽卷安徽卷】 You can sit at the desk and read the daily newspapers, magazines and the other books, but you are not permit to take them out.wishespermitted短文改错典型错词类型分析归纳动词形【2006 NMET】 We had guests last night who have not stayed in a B&B hotel before.【2006天津天津】 Today, I got a letter that said I had been admitting to a college.【2006四川四川】 We hung a sign on the front door that was read: “Were having dinner .” hadadmitted 【2006陕西陕西】 Ill send my friend Charlie to meet you at the airport when you arrived.【2006湖北湖北】 . sometimes all that is need is someone to rely on.【2007天津卷天津卷】 In Grade Eight I took physics. 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The smell from it was very good 【2011重庆卷重庆卷】 Katia, like many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. heldis解决方案(1) 通读全文，搞清文中动词时态的主旋律 .(2) 结合语境，灵活运用时态形式 .(3) 认真推敲，准确把握主动与被动 .【2006浙江卷浙江卷】 Your knowledges of English can help the whole class.【2006陕西卷陕西卷】 The library has all kinds of book. Im sure you will find one you like. books knowledge名词爱考数与格，也要分清可不可名词爱考数与格，也要分清可不可短文改错典型错词类型分析归纳名词数【2006福建卷福建卷】 If you have interests in it, reply to me soon. 【2006陕西卷陕西卷】 They have all sorts of course. Im sure you will find one you like it. 【2006重庆卷重庆卷】 In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more beautiful. interestcoursessky【2007陕西卷陕西卷】 Personally, I found most lesson rather uninteresting. 【2008浙江卷浙江卷】 A nearby company was looking for students with good handwriting to write addresses on envelope .The pay was 10 cents per envelope.【2010四川卷四川卷】 In fact, Ive nearly killed three peoples . lessons envelopespeople【2010全国全国 卷卷】 Christie was one of my best friend at high school. 【2011全国全国卷卷】 My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to stay another a couple of day. 【2011四川卷四川卷】 Tom was having much troubles getting up in the morning.trouble friends days【2011陕西卷陕西卷】 . I came across a crew making a new film with one of my favorite actor. 【2011浙江卷浙江卷】 I was playing at my cousin house.【2011辽宁卷辽宁卷】 . the rate of UFO reports was steady, around three per weeks. actors cousinsweek1. 修饰修饰名词名词，作宾补作宾补及及连系动词连系动词后用形容词；后用形容词；2. 修饰修饰动词动词，形容词形容词，副词副词及及整个句子整个句子时时用副词用副词；3. 比较级比较级和和最高级最高级的使用。的使用。【2006福建卷福建卷】 We can hear birds singing happy all around. 【2007浙江卷浙江卷】 I won the race. 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(2) 强化语法训练，分清连词，副词和介词之间的区别和句法功能 . (3) 语法知识的记忆和语感的培养结合起来 . 人称代词人称代词的性别，单复数及代词格的误用；的性别，单复数及代词格的误用； 物主代词物主代词，反身代词反身代词以及以及不定代词不定代词的误用；的误用； “it” 一词的不当使用一词的不当使用(包括用于从句中或作形式主语包括用于从句中或作形式主语或宾语或宾语)； Whose 和和whos，its和和 its的混淆的混淆代词方面的错误主要体现在：代词方面的错误主要体现在：代词格，须领悟短文改错典型错词类型分析归纳人称单数复数主格宾格主格宾格第一人称第二人称第三人称Imeweusyouyouyouyouhehimsheheritittheythem单数复数形容词性物主代词myyourhisheritsouryourtheir名词性物主代词mine yourshishers itsoursyourstheirs【2007全国全国I卷卷】 I was only about six when he held his hand out to me. I took it in me and we walked.【2007陕西卷陕西卷】 Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!minemyself【2008全国全国II卷卷】 I should be able to tell visitors about our history and culture and show them their great achievement.【2011重庆卷重庆卷】 With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, Ive soon got used to living without my parents .【2011全国全国II卷卷】 Thank you very much for showing them around your city and providing us with the wonderful meals. ourmineus解决方案(1) 顺藤摸瓜，理清短文中代词的指代关系，注意联系上下文。(2) 系统掌握it的各种用法 . (3) 准确把握不定代词在文中的正确使用。 句法涉及到句法涉及到一致一致, 从句多考从句多考引导词引导词（误用误用，多用多用或或遗漏遗漏 ）【2007天津卷天津卷】 I was lucky enough to have a teacher which didnt take my bad grades as a judgment of my abilities.who / that句子成分多分析短文改错典型错词类型分析归纳【2008年安徽卷年安徽卷】 She looked at me and started to laugh. “How are you laughing?”I asked.【2009辽宁卷辽宁卷】 One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan.Whywhich【2010陕西卷陕西卷】 It turned out to be her own cup, that shed left on the shelf by mistake. 【2010宁夏青海卷宁夏青海卷】 . let me know what things are going. whichhow【2011辽宁卷辽宁卷】 .the rate of UFO reports were steady .【2011重庆卷重庆卷】 Katia will introduce me to some of her friends, one of who has been to China several times.waswhom【2010重庆卷重庆卷】 Here is my idea about how a friend is like. 【2010全国全国卷卷】 So if they had said was true, I would have a chance of winning the prize .whatwhat解决方案（1）不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；（2）不同的语境要选择不同的词语。（3）只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。冠词在前冠词在前 “错错” “多多” “少少”。常考的错误形式有：冠词常考的错误形式有：冠词the, a, an 的误用，多用或少用。的误用，多用或少用。【2007全国卷全国卷II】 I meant to write long letter and tell you all the things Im doing at the schoola冠词、连词常光顾短文改错典型错词类型分析归纳【2007四川卷四川卷】 An Australian farmer found the kangaroo caught in the fence around his farms.【2010陕西卷陕西卷】 Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it. a the【2011陕西卷陕西卷】 He was right there in the front of me. 【2010 课标全国卷课标全国卷】 My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US. a【2011全国卷全国卷2】 If youd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be more than happy to be your guide. 【2011浙江卷浙江卷】 It was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you. a the 连词连词常考常考 but，and，or, so 等的等的逻辑错误逻辑错误，以及，以及搭配错误搭配错误。【2006辽宁卷辽宁卷】 She always made sure that our homework was finished on time, but she marked strictly on our actual performance.and短文改错典型错词类型分析归纳【2007浙江卷浙江卷】 Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.【2007四川卷四川卷】 He thought the poor animal was injured, but the kind farmer took off his jacket and put on the animal. whenso 【2007四川卷四川卷】 He worked hard, but it wasnt surprising that he pass the exam.【2010课程标准卷课程标准卷】 my neighbor picked up the box but announced and/soand【2010辽宁卷辽宁卷】 Her hair was black and purple, and she wore black sports shoes and a black sweater, although in the summer. 【2010全国全国】 All I had to do was to write a story or present it. evenand【2011四川四川】 His boss wanted to fire him if he didnt start coming on time, but he went to the doctor for a help. 【2011全国全国II卷卷】 Its been a week after we left your family and we are now back home. asosince词法句法均未错词法句法均未错, 逻辑推理来寻找。逻辑推理来寻找。主要是句子之主要是句子之间逻辑关系的矛盾，代词在人称上的不一致等。间逻辑关系的矛盾，代词在人称上的不一致等。【2006四川卷四川卷】 That night，we sat down to what they thought would be a pleasant, uninterrupted meals.we逻辑错误须关注短文改错典型错词类型分析归纳【2010陕西卷陕西卷】 The assistant was clearly as embarrassed as my sister, for I just thought it was funny. 【2011辽宁卷辽宁卷】 Wayne Tyler decided to make his findings known. 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I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, Thats it. No more toys to you. My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.【2012全国新课标、海南卷】2012年高考短文改错真题实战演练 I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. lessmythemgowenttoys形容词名词数代词误用动词搭配逻辑错误【2012全国新课标解析】But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, Thats it. No more toys to you. My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.forwhattorecould句子成分动词时态介词误用情态动词非谓语动词【2012全国新课标解析】 My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish. It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.【2012陕西卷真题】2012年高考短文改错真题实战演练 My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport. 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