unit1__写作专项课件-pdf.ppt
Unit1 写作专项讲练写作专项讲练 如何写好英语旅游日记如何写好英语旅游日记写作要求写作要求 本单元的话题是谈论学生自己过去的经历，围绕本单元的话题是谈论学生自己过去的经历，围绕“去某地去某地旅游旅游 展开，学生要能正确表达出在旅游过程中的所见所展开，学生要能正确表达出在旅游过程中的所见所闻所感。这一话题是以日记的形式呈现，所以要符合日记闻所感。这一话题是以日记的形式呈现，所以要符合日记的写作要求。通常在正文上方，自左起写上日期，星期几的写作要求。通常在正文上方，自左起写上日期，星期几和天气情况，正文要用第一人称和一般过去式来写，同时，和天气情况，正文要用第一人称和一般过去式来写，同时，适当写些自己的感受。适当写些自己的感受。 1.1.语法：一般过去式语法：一般过去式 2.2.重点：重点：bebe动词和实义动词动词和实义动词日记的写法日记的写法日记的格式日记的格式 英语的旅游日记的格式和英语其他日记英语的旅游日记的格式和英语其他日记的格式大致相同。通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。日记的格式大致相同。通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。日记常以第一人称记下当天旅游中的所见、所闻、所做或所想常以第一人称记下当天旅游中的所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情。英语日记的书端是专门写日记的日期、星期和天的事情。英语日记的书端是专门写日记的日期、星期和天气的。旅游日记还要写明地点。左上角是日期气的。旅游日记还要写明地点。左上角是日期( (年、月、年、月、日日) )、星期，地点。右上角写上当天的天气情况、星期，地点。右上角写上当天的天气情况日期的写法日期的写法 日期表达有多种形式。年、月、日都写时，通常以月、日期表达有多种形式。年、月、日都写时，通常以月、日、年为顺序，月份可以缩写，日和年用逗号隔开。日、年为顺序，月份可以缩写，日和年用逗号隔开。 例如：例如： December 16 2005或者或者 Dec. 16 2005 A) September 1, 2008或或September 1st, 2008可省略写成可省略写成Sept. 1, 2008或或Sept. 1st, 2008或或 the 1st of September in 2008(月份不可以缩写月份不可以缩写) B)只有月、日只有月、日 September 1或或September 1st(月份可以月份可以缩写缩写)（ 1或或1st都应读作都应读作the first）。）。 C)只有年、月只有年、月 September 2008或或the September of 2008(月份不可以缩写月份不可以缩写) 2. 星期也可以省略不写，可将其放在日期前或后，星星期也可以省略不写，可将其放在日期前或后，星期和日期之间不用标点，但要空一格，星期也可缩期和日期之间不用标点，但要空一格，星期也可缩写。如：写。如： Saturday, November 2nd, 2004；November 22nd, 2004 Saturday 天气常用词语天气常用词语 天气情况必不可少。天气一般用一个形容词天气情况必不可少。天气一般用一个形容词如如 :Sunny, Fine, Rainy, Snowy 等表示。位于日记的右上角。下等表示。位于日记的右上角。下面是一些常用的描写天气的英语词语：面是一些常用的描写天气的英语词语： 晴晴 clear/sunny/fine多多云云 cloudy 小雨小雨 light rain倾盆大雨倾盆大雨downpour 大雨大雨 heavy rain 毛毛毛雨毛雨 drizzle 阵雨阵雨 shower有风有风windy 东风东风 east wind 南南风风 south wind 西风西风 west wind 北风北风 north wind 西南西南风风 southwester 东南风东南风 southeaster 东北风东北风 northeaster 西北西北风风 northwester暴风雨暴风雨stormy 炎热炎热 scorching heat 严寒严寒 icy cold 下雪下雪 snowy 思路点拨思路点拨1 1：开篇点题。指出旅行的地点，人物和时间。：开篇点题。指出旅行的地点，人物和时间。2 2：详细描述。详细讲述所参观的景点，以及在景点所进行：详细描述。详细讲述所参观的景点，以及在景点所进行的活动。的活动。3 3：表达感受。对旅行做出评价，谈谈自己的感受。：表达感受。对旅行做出评价，谈谈自己的感受。佳作赏析佳作赏析 Tuesday,July 8st It was a fine day.I went to Beijing on vacation with my parents.One the first day,we went to Tiananmen Square and watched the flag-raising ceremony.It was really solemn.Then we visited the Great Wall.Like its name,it was very great.The next day we visited the Palace Museum,the Summer Palace and Tiantan Park.We took lots of photos.We ate Beijing duck.It was very delicious.I also bought some souvenirs for my friends. Although i felt very tired ,I was happy.I hope to visit Beijing again.l 我喜欢北京我喜欢北京 This summer vacation, I went to Beijing. It was a very great city! We went to the Great Wall first.Like its name,it was very great.We can see many mountians around. Then we went to visit Tianan Men Square.It was also fantastic. We lived in a small house in a Beijing Hutung, it was a traditional Beijing building called four-section compound. I enjoyed myself a lot. I love Beijing!My vacation Last summer holiday,l went to Beijing.It was quite hot.There are many good places,such us the Great Wall,the summer palace and the Forbidden City.I saw many foreigners taking photos on the Great Wall .Many kids climbed the Great Wall without the help of their parents.I think their parents were proud of them.At last,l succeed in climbing at the top of the Great Wall.So I was excited.In addition to,there were many delicious snacks in Beijing.l think Beijing is worth a visit.What a great vacation I am going to spend half time of my vacation on sports this year. Playing basketball is always my favourite, so some of my classmates and I will form a small team and play basketball together. Sometimes we will have a match against some other teams. I will enjoy the sense when we win the game. Of course, I will spend lots of time on doing my homework. Its important for me to finish my lessons. If I still have enough time, I am going to visit Beijing City, and visiting Beijing is my dream from childhood to now. Oh, what a great vacation!My vacationWednesday,August 2nd It was a fine day! I went to several places of interest such as the Great Wall and Tiananmen square.I was amazed by Chinas historical background and the industrious Chinese people who built the Great Wall. People are very friendly here. I was greeted by amiable people who were nice enough to tell me about the history of China and by modest students who later practiced speaking English with me. China has left me a wonderful impression and I look forward to come back here for the Olympics.
