高中英语写作.ppt

近年高考英语写作高分卷的五大特点近年高考英语写作高分卷的五大特点行文逻辑科学，条理性好；行文逻辑科学，条理性好；巧用过渡词汇，逻辑性强；巧用过渡词汇，逻辑性强；巧用高级词汇和复杂句式，文章品味高；巧用高级词汇和复杂句式，文章品味高；妙用变通式表达，文章错落有致；妙用变通式表达，文章错落有致；书写规范工整，整体效果好。书写规范工整，整体效果好。火眼金睛火眼金睛Which one is better? Why?She always sings while doing her work.She always sings when she does her work.After everything was finished, they began to chat with the elderly people.With everything finished, they began to chat with the elderly people.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress.Study hard, and you will make rapid progress.动词动词ing形式）形式）(with复合结构复合结构)(祈使句祈使句+ and)1.2.3.(A)(B)(A)(A)(B)(B)To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.I passed the English exam because of your help.I would have passed the English exam but for your help.(名词性从句）名词性从句）（虚拟语气）（虚拟语气）4.5.(A)(A)(B)(B)What are complex sentences：1.尽量采用三类从句。尽量采用三类从句。2.变换句式变换句式 如祈使句，倒装句，省略句。如祈使句，倒装句，省略句。3.非谓语，非谓语， 强调句，虚拟句及其他句式。强调句，虚拟句及其他句式。概括总结概括总结Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式1. When he arrived, he gave me an e-mail immediately. (使用使用V-ing形式形式)2. Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten. (省略主语和省略主语和 be动词动词) _, he gave me an e-mail immediately.When arriving/On his arrival,_,it can never be forgotten.Once seen3. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (使用名词性从句使用名词性从句)4. People suggest that the conference be put off. (改为改为it作形式主语作形式主语that做真正主语做真正主语)_the little girl knows so many things.What surprises him is that_the conference be put off.It is suggested that5. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (使用使用notuntil的强调句型的强调句型)6. I passed the physics exam because of your help. (用虚拟语气）用虚拟语气）_he had read the news in the newspaper _ he knew what had happened. _the physics exam _your help. It was not until thatI couldnt have passed but for without 7. I wont believe what he says. (使用状语使用状语 从句从句)8. The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (用定语从句用定语从句)_he says, I wont believe. The girl_is spoken highly of. No matter whatwhose composition was well writtenWhatever9. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）（用并列句）10. He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句使用倒装句)_he come back from Beijing _he was sent abroad._make rapid progress.Study hard, and youllNo sooner had than Hardly . when.1. 通过使用网络与家人联系是很方便的通过使用网络与家人联系是很方便的It is convenient to keep in touch with your family by using the Internet.2.我们所需要做的我们所需要做的 是冷静下来是冷静下来,反思我们的学习方法。反思我们的学习方法。(reflect) What we need to do is to calm down and reflect our learning method.3. 只有以这种方式，只有以这种方式， 我们才能进步。我们才能进步。（2010山东）山东）Only in this way, can we make progress.熟能生巧熟能生巧Translate the sentences4.我们对自己的态度才是最关键的我们对自己的态度才是最关键的。(matter)It is our attitude to ourselves that matters.5.坐在电脑前，这个男孩不知道如何操作。坐在电脑前，这个男孩不知道如何操作。Sitting before the computer, the boy didnt know how to operate6.当别人有困难时，毫不犹豫地去帮助他们。当别人有困难时，毫不犹豫地去帮助他们。 Dont hesitate to help others whenever they are in trouble.7. 我要去购物，大约五点才回来。我要去购物，大约五点才回来。 (2009全国）全国）I am going out shopping, and wont be back until 5:00 oclock.8. 要自信，那么你会发现你是一个受欢迎的学生。要自信，那么你会发现你是一个受欢迎的学生。(2011广东广东)Be confident, and you will find that you are a popuar student.9.这一天如此美好，我们永远不会忘记（这一天如此美好，我们永远不会忘记（2012 浙江）浙江）It was such a beautiful day that we would remember it forever.走近高考范文走近高考范文Fill in the blanks1._(众所周知）众所周知）that China is a country with a long history.2._ (随着春随着春节的临近），节的临近），people will hold all varieties of activities.3._(自从自从我见过史密斯先生已经好久了）我见过史密斯先生已经好久了）and I miss him a lot.It is well knownWith the Spring Festival drawing nearIt has been a long time since I saw Mr. Smith1.We bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees,_ (一路上有说有笑）一路上有说有笑）.2._(一到达），一到达）， we began to work immediately.3._ (看到一排排的看到一排排的树），树），we all have a sense of achievement.talking and laughing all the wayUpon arrivalSeeing the lines of treesWorse!Neat!小试牛刀小试牛刀Write three complex sentencesWhat can I do for our environment?1._2._3._ Homework 目前，许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理，学生对此看法不一。目前，许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理，学生对此看法不一。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。 有的同学认为有的同学认为 有的同学认为有的同学认为 学校限制我们的自由；学学校限制我们的自由；学生和社会接触少；学生的生和社会接触少；学生的兴趣和爱好不能得到充分兴趣和爱好不能得到充分的发展。因此的发展。因此 学校是学习知识的地方：学学校是学习知识的地方：学生应该安心在学校里学习；生应该安心在学校里学习；学生缺乏自觉性，离开了老学生缺乏自觉性，离开了老师，可能会师，可能会 你的看法：你的看法： 注意：注意：1. 1. 字数字数120120左右左右; ; 不要逐字翻译。不要逐字翻译。2. 2. 短文开头已给出，不计人总词数。短文开头已给出，不计人总词数。 Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day longThank you for your attention!