托福写作简洁建议_托福写作语法错误问题精品.docx

托福写作简洁建议_托福写作语法错误问题托福简洁写作建议建议一： 空洞且累赘的词汇须要去除1.有时候某些词汇和词组并没有必要出现在句子中，不能够点明信息和句子主题，其实我们可以干脆去掉的。我们来举个例子看一下：When all things are considered，young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents，in my opinion.我们发觉“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都是显得可有可无的东西。可以干脆删掉。变成：Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.2. 一些繁琐且空洞的表达方式也是不行以不用的，看下面一段话Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents，they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.这里的“due to the fact that”就是一个很繁琐的表达方式，那么我们可以将句子改成更为简洁的表达方式：Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents，they did not have the options that young people have now.建议二： 避开重复1. 不要在写作的过程中反复出现同一词汇，包括同义词反复出现，假如有，看看我们是如何美容动刀的。比方说下面的句子：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.large 对一个farm来说就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改为：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.极简的方式可以改成：My grandfather grew up on a large farm.2.有些词组甚至可以用单词来代替，例如：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents farm.这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly，我们去掉臃肿的词组就可以变成：My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents farm.建议三：语法结构很重要合适的语法结构对于表达来说是特别有利的，合适的语法结构可以是句子看起来更为一目了然、简洁。合适的语法结构为写作要点，但是结构困难性也是比较须要的，但是必需达到表达顺畅的效果。在这里我们给大家细心打算了几个不错的语法结构，希望能够帮到同学们的托福写作考试：1. 一个句子的主语和谓语动词应当能够反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如：The situation that resulted in my grandfathers not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.我们从以上句子得到表达的核心点“grandfathers not being able to study”，我们去表达这个概论的时候，原句用的主语是situation，谓语动词是was，不能强调须要表达的重点概念，那么最完备的更改就如下：My grandfather couldnt study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.2. 切勿“there be”结构运用过多，比方说如下句子：There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.我们可以简化为：My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.极简的改法就是：My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.3. 把从句改为短语或单词。例如：Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.更为简洁的表达就可以改为：The dairy farm was located in a remote area，100 kilometers to the nearest university.4. 仅在须要强调宾语而不是主语的时候，才运用被动语态。例如：In the fall，not only did the cows have to be milked，but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfathers family.这个句子优化的点就在“劳碌的家庭my grandfathers family”，而运用了被动语态后，仿佛重心变成了cows和hay。我们用主语时态进行表达，那么更为简洁：In the fall，my grandfathers family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.5. 精确的词汇比词组更为好用，就像下面这句话：My grandfather didnt have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends.Stand around doing nothing其实可以用一个动词来表达，即loiter：My grandfather didnt have time to loiter with his school friends.6. 有时候两句话表达出来的东西，可以精炼组合成一句话，就比方说：Profits from the farm were not large. Sometimes they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm. They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree.重要信息合并成下面这个句子：Profits from the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational expenses，let alone pay for a university degree.运用长句没有错，但是须要合理。在我们写句子的时候，许多同学都是分数突破不上去，大部分都是因为句子太臃肿了，有许多没有用的地方!不要总是追求满篇的长句，过于困难的话你自己都hold不住，也会特别影响分数!托福写作中须要避开的语法错误1.句子不完整句子缺少主语或谓语。误：Because some necessary procedures such as transporting the factories， modifying equipment or planting more trees.2.句子缺少连词两个句子之间不能只用逗号连接，要有连词。误：My sister loves to dance， she is very good at it.3.句式不平行句子中并列的成分应当是相同的结构。误：I like to eat Japanese and eating Thai food.(eating-> eat)误：Teenagers are more influenced by their peers than their parents.(than their parents-> than by their parents)4.句意重复或冗余误：The low-priced car was inexpensive.(low-priced和inexpensive重复)误：Personally， I believe what the newspaper prints.(personally和I believe重复)托福独立写作高分留意事项1、你的时间预算。你只有半个小时来应对托福独立写作，你必需要把时间估算好，这其中可能包括：安排和记录2-3分钟;写文章大约20分钟;检查文章3-5分钟。这其中可能有的考生还须要理思路和列提纲等，反正大家要把考试时间计算精确，千万别等时间到了，你还没有写完，更别谈检查了。2、细致阅读问题。对于托福独立写作，最重要的就是审题，就是考生必需要精确地写这个题目。假如你对题目都理解得不清不楚，那么你写出来的文章或许也不能算是一篇胜利或者说高分作文。3、头脑风暴。在进行托福独立写作之前，考生应当花一些时间来进行“头脑风暴”，思索这个话题和最好的方法。也只有这样才能让你在看到题目之后把所以可能会出现的状况都提前封上，以求写出高分作文。4、写你安排的文章。你不必用罗马数字、大写字母等写出正式的大纲。但是，你应当做一些笔记。通过你的笔记，你可以依据你列出思路进行写作，把你想要写的点都写到，以充溢你的托福写作文章。5、确保你的逻辑是尽可能清楚。因为现代托福考试都是机考，不涉及写字，但是在打字的时候也要留意文章逻辑思路，不要让读者即你的批改考官看到一篇没有逻辑的文章，这样会影响你的得分的。6、遵循一个明确，逻辑结构。这其实和第5点差不多，就是要说你的文章结构要清晰，这样阅读人才会有爱好读下去。一般好的文章一般是这样的结构：主题段：提出观点或者主旨。正文：由2-3段组成，这其中包括例子叙述等内容。结尾段：最终总结一些为什么选择这个，可能还会运用到让步段，即假如选择另一个观点会怎么样。7、运用详细的例子，详细缘由。对于文章的例子，这个我们在这里也单独说一下，一般置于文章的正文部分，必需要有例子来支撑你的论点。8、运用信号词来表示的转换。在你的文章当中，信号词可以用来连接段落到段落和句子到句子。9、运用不同的句子类型。好的文章是由大部分的简洁句+少许的长句组成。假如全篇都是简洁句，就会让考官觉得你的文章太单调，这样的文章评分一般不会太高，所以在写作时，考生要努力的运用不同长度的句子来体现你的英文水平。10、检查作文错误。在托福写作当中，往往会因一些小的错误让你的托福写作得不了高分，因此不要跨越长的部分或者尝试添加许多新的材料。在标点符号、拼法和大写以及常见的语法错误中找出明显的错误。这也是托福写作高分很重要的一个部分，所以大家要尽可能抽出些时间来进行检查。托福写作简洁建议