中考作文复习指导.ppt

认真认真审题审题，找出文章要表，找出文章要表达的中心。达的中心。写作第一步审审travelstay at homevisit friends or parentsworktravelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork 健康很重要。在学习和工作的压健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，上图是他们此次的调查一次调查，上图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告, ,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。并提倡大家进行假日休闲。审审用简单的句子或短语用简单的句子或短语列出列出文章要点。文章要点。列列写作第二步 根据以下关键词及图表用简根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点单的句子列出文章的要点 如何度假如何度假 调查报告调查报告 倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.列列A lot of people travel . A lot of people travel . Some people stay at Some people stay at home. home. Some other people visit Some other people visit friends or parents. friends or parents. A few people work.A few people work.How do people spend How do people spend their vacation? We their vacation? We made a survey and made a survey and here is our survey here is our survey reportreport. .Come and enjoy Come and enjoy your vacation. your vacation. People who relax People who relax well work well.well work well.a nice heada nice taila nice body加加加首尾加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子注意简洁，漂亮。写作第三步：1. Second , we should keep quiet in the library.2. First , we have to wear our uniforms to go to school, though most of us dont like them at all.3. Every school has its own rules for students. We have many school rules to follow in our daily life.4. Whats more, we ought to return books on time.5. Our school rules are good for us, I will try me best to follow them.6. Third , we must do lots of homework.3 2 1 4 6 5 TailHead How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax well work well.连连恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步：_ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking._, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled. How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.连连 According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays . Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And visiting friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. 美美美美选好词句，美化美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：Skill One Make your sentences correct Good good study, day day up. We should do sports a week once. Save the environment is our duty. There is going to have a meeting today. I hope I can come true my dream.once a weekSavingbeachieve The teenagers like the computers. The teenagers are fond of the computers. Our parents really wish us to work hard. Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study.Skill Two Express in different ways. We shouldnt eat junk food. We should keep away from the junk food. We should learn English grammar. Its important to learn English grammar.Skill Two Express in different ways.Skill Two Express in different ways. If you use English often, you will learn it better. The more you use English, the better you will learn it.中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准第四档第四档(1215分）覆盖所有内容要点。准确使用丰富的词汇和语分）覆盖所有内容要点。准确使用丰富的词汇和语言结构。全文结构紧凑，有效地使用了语句间的连接成份，符合言结构。全文结构紧凑，有效地使用了语句间的连接成份，符合英语交际习惯；具备较强的语言运用能力。英语交际习惯；具备较强的语言运用能力。第三档第三档(811分）覆盖所有内容要点。恰当使用较丰富的词汇和语分）覆盖所有内容要点。恰当使用较丰富的词汇和语言结构。适当运用了语句间的连接成份，较好地达到了交际的目言结构。适当运用了语句间的连接成份，较好地达到了交际的目的。的。第二档第二档(47分）没能覆盖所有内容要点。词汇和语言结构不能完分）没能覆盖所有内容要点。词汇和语言结构不能完全满足写作任务的要求。文章不够连贯，影响对写作内容的理解。全满足写作任务的要求。文章不够连贯，影响对写作内容的理解。第一档第一档(03分）漏掉较多内容要点或写的内容与规定任务无关。分）漏掉较多内容要点或写的内容与规定任务无关。词汇和语言结构错误较多。内容不连贯，无法传达有效信息。词汇和语言结构错误较多。内容不连贯，无法传达有效信息。 上周三初三年上周三初三年级组的同学进级组的同学进行了一次体检，行了一次体检，结果期发现同结果期发现同学们的视力下学们的视力下降了。请你用降了。请你用英语向全班同英语向全班同学报告原因学报告原因（如图所示），（如图所示），并提出倡议：并提出倡议：爱护我们的眼爱护我们的眼睛。睛。2311214眼睛疲劳眼睛疲劳看电视看电视玩电脑玩电脑眼睛近视眼睛近视躺着看书躺着看书走路看书走路看书眼睛疼痛眼睛疼痛强光下看书强光下看书弱光下看书弱光下看书 Most of us paid little attention to protecting our eyes, so with the time goes by, the eyesight becomes poor and poorer. Two thirds of students eyes always get tired because they watch TV or play computer games for long. And a quarter of students always lie in the bed or walking while reading books, so they have become short-sighted. The others always read in strong sunlight or poor light so they have sore eyes often. Its important for us to form a good reading habit to take good care of our eyes. So lets do everything we can to improve our eyes. Passage One Boys and girls, as we know, our life is better than before. There are TV sets, computers and many modern machines. But, our modern life is harmful to our eyes too. Because two thirds of students feel their eyes tired, because of watching TV or playing computer games for a long time. And a quarter of students walk and lie in the bed while they reading. So, they become short-sighted. One twelfth of students have sore eyes. Because they read in strong light or in poor light. When I saw the numbers, I was very surprise at it. So, I hope everyone must keep a good habit to protect our eyes. We can do it!Passage TwoPassage Three Boys and girls, Today we have a classmeet. This classmeet is dissincion a problem with our eyes. Two thirds of students feel their eyes tired. Because they watch TV or play computer. A quarter of students become short-sighted becasus they lie in bed or walking while read book. one twelth of students have sore eyes. because they read in strong or por light. Eyes is very important for us. (by Yang Bin)