中考作文专题训练课件.ppt

作文专题辅导总体原则1.审列加连改审：审主题，不要跑题列：列写的要点加：加开头和结尾连：加连词串作文改：检查纠正2.准确把握运用时态 Hope Project Nowdays ,there are many poor students in our country, they cant go to school. But “Hope Project” helps a lot of poor students. “Hope Project” makes many students dreams come true. But What can we do? 1.I think we should organize the students to raise money for a primary school in the local village. 2.We can give away some books to the poor stdents. I hope the children there can get better education, and work for the village when they grow up. Keep Healthy It is very important for us to keep healthy. we should pay more attention to our health.1. In my opinion ,Wed better eat more fruits and vegetables. We should eat breakfast every morning. we mustnt drink wine or smoke .2.We should take exercise for at least one hour every day. We can watch TV or play games for a short time3.We need enough sleep so it is important to go to bed early and get up early. 4.Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. They are bad for our health.Try your best to keep healthy, youll have a happy life. Internet shopping We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days. Some students Like shopping on the internet. 1.I think its very convenient for us to go shopping on the internet. 2.The shop on Internet are open for almost 24 hours a day so we can buy something at any time. 3.Whats more, we neednt to wait in a queue. However, some students disagreed with them. 1.we cant see the things while we are shopping. so we are not sure whether they are good or not. 2. Besides, We cant hang out with our friends. we cant enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends. Saying No to Smoking Smoking is bad for peoples health. It may make us sick, such as cough, lung cancer and so on. 1.Smoking is harmful to teenagers because our bodies are still growing. 2.Secondhand smoke is also bad for our health. So we must do something to keep away from smoking. 1.If someone offers a cigarette, we should refuse it. 2.If anyone smokes nearby, we should try to stop it. From now on, every students should say no to smoking.Pollution around us and how to protect inviroment In recent years our life is becoming better and better. But our environment is becoming worse and worse. Such as rain storm, sand storm, and so on. 1.Now many people have their own cars, they produce waste gas. 2.More and more trees are cut down. There are so much sand on the earth that the weather is worse. 3.We often see factories pour waste water into rivers or lakes. Water in the river is quite dirty. We havent enough clean water to drink in cities. Its our duty to protect our environment . No matter where we live , we should do something to keep our enviroment clean and tidy . 1.We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers and lakes . 2.We mustnt pick the flowers or step on the grass 3.We shouldnt throw rubbish everywhere and spit in public places . It is not good to spit in public places, such as in the library, in the class. 4.Dont draw on public walls . 5.we should save every drop of water, we should turn off the taps after using it. 6.we should save energy, such as turning off the lights when we leave. 7.we should give the old books to the next grade students if we dont use them any more. 8.we should walk or ride a bike instead of driving a car. Its our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy . If everyone tries his best to protect the environment , the world will become more and more beautiful.