Unit1作文导练.ppt

Unit 1 写作写作 方法方法专练专练方法指导：方法指导：三步五要素写日记三步五要素写日记 步骤一：在第一行写明日期（年月日与星期）和天气等信步骤一：在第一行写明日期（年月日与星期）和天气等信息。息。 步骤二：正文用一般过去时态描述当天发生的事情。步骤二：正文用一般过去时态描述当天发生的事情。 步骤三：在日记的最后描述自己的感受和体会。步骤三：在日记的最后描述自己的感受和体会。 五要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、感受。五要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、感受。写作示例：写作示例：20152015年年10月月5日，日， 星期日，你与家人参加了星期日，你与家人参加了“水果旅游水果旅游”活动，到农村采摘苹果，体验果农劳动。请你以日记的形活动，到农村采摘苹果，体验果农劳动。请你以日记的形式为校园网的式为校园网的“热爱生活热爱生活”栏目写一篇文章，记述这次活栏目写一篇文章，记述这次活动经历及感受。动经历及感受。 要求：要求： 1. 词数：词数：80100 ； 2. 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，语句通顺。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，语句通顺。 参考词汇：果园参考词汇：果园 orchard 摘水果摘水果 fruit-picking 写作范文写作范文： Sunday , October 5 , 2015 Fine Its Sunday today . I went on a fruit-picking trip with my family . It took us about one hour to get to the orchard . There were too many apples on the trees . They tasted good . The travelers enjoyed picking them , The farmer told us to take care not to fall down when we picked the apples . I found a big red apple , but it was so high that I couldnt get it . At last I got the big apple with the help of my family . It was a tiring but exciting day . I got to know what “No pains , no gains”means . 实兵演练：实兵演练： 假如你是假如你是Kelly ， 上个月（上个月（8月月2日），周六，天日），周六，天气晴朗，你和父母去北京观光旅游，参观了三个气晴朗，你和父母去北京观光旅游，参观了三个地方（地方（Tiananmen Square , the Palace Museum 故宫，故宫，the Great Wall 长城），你们玩得很开心。长城），你们玩得很开心。请据此写一篇日记。可适当发挥。请据此写一篇日记。可适当发挥。 佳作示范：佳作示范： Friday , August 2nd The weather was sunny and warm . I went to Beijing with my parents on vacation . It was my first time there , so everything was really interesting . We visited three places and took quite a few photos . First, we went to Tiananmen Square . It was beautiful . Then we went to the Palace Museum , we went to the Great Wall . We saw many beautiful things from the top . It was great and Im very proud of it . Although we were tired , we had a good time there .