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第第7感感 写作写作 沟通交流沟通交流练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备话话题题 导导语语 沟通无限，我们日常虽然交流方式多样，但考试多为沟通无限，我们日常虽然交流方式多样，但考试多为书信形式。书信形式。练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备话话题题 必必备备练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备Its July the first，your birthday is only three weeks away！I wish you a happy birthday！Please allow me to send you a box of Chinese green tea as a gift for your brithday.Let me tell you how to make tea.I am glad to learn that you are coming to China and will stay at my home.My parents and I are very pleased to have you with us.Now let me tell you what we have arranged for you.1介绍程序介绍程序2介绍情况介绍情况必备句型：必备句型：练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备Im sorry to tell you that I cant begin work on your appointed day.Im sorry that I wont be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon.I have got a problem and I dont know what to do.I thought Id write to you and ask for your advice.Im happy to write to you for the first time and Im very glad to have a chance to be your pen friend.3说明原因说明原因4请求帮助请求帮助5表示一种愿望表示一种愿望练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备Im going to give a birthday party at my home.Would you please come to my house at 7 pm.of January 10?Ive learned from your ad that your company needs a typist.Id like to apply for it.I shall be very grateful(thankful)if you will give me an opportunity for an interview.My telephone number is 65770545.6提出邀请提出邀请7求职求职练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备Im an American professor named John Smith，teaching at Beijng Language Institute.Im writing this letter to express my heart felt thanks to you for saving my daughter out of danger.I appreciate it more than I can say.Thank you again for your timely help.Thank you very much for letting me stay in your house during my holiday.8表示感谢表示感谢练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备Ive received your letter.Im very glad to know youll come to Beijing in October.Now I want to tell you a little about Beijing.I was so pleased to hear from you and I am writing to tell you something about my school.Im so glad to learn that youre coming in September.Ive found a place for you.9介绍城市介绍城市/ /学校学校/ /住所住所练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备Thank you for your letter.I agree that it is a difficult situation.I advise you.Thank you for your letter.Im sorry that you are not happy yet in your new school.Dear Mr.Brown， I came to return the books that you lent me and said “Thank you”As you happened to be out，I have to leave you the books and this note.10给予帮助给予帮助11留便条留便条练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备必备模板：必备模板：1建议信模板建议信模板 建议信一般分为三个部分：说明建议的内容；提出建议信一般分为三个部分：说明建议的内容；提出 建议的原因；指出采纳建议的好处。建议的原因；指出采纳建议的好处。Dear Bob， Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to(引出对方需要建议的主题引出对方需要建议的主题) Here are a few suggestions(引出作者建议引出作者建议)First，it is important to.Then，it also helps to.Besides，it should be a good idea to.You can also.(根据要求用不同的句式根据要求用不同的句式提出建议提出建议)练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备 As to.，I suggest(需要具体到某一方面需要具体到某一方面)In addition(其他的建议其他的建议)Im sure(预测可能的结果，给对方预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心以行动的信心和决心) Im looking forward to(表达愿望表达愿望) Yours sincerely， Li Hua练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备2邀请信模板邀请信模板 模板一模板一Dear Mr White， There will be a .(内容内容)at/in.(地点地点)in/on.(时间时间)We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at.(具体时间具体时间)This will be followed by a.(进一步的安排进一步的安排)At around.(时间时间)，.(另另一个安排一个安排) I really hope you can make it. Yours sincerely， Li Hua练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备 模板二模板二Dear Mr White， .(开门见山地提出活动的地点和时间开门见山地提出活动的地点和时间)It would be pleasant to have you here(表达邀请愿望表达邀请愿望)Will you give me the pleasure of your company(正式发出邀请正式发出邀请)? During the party time/conference，we will have lots of activities/points you will be interested in(开始介绍活动的内开始介绍活动的内容容)First(介绍要举行的活动一介绍要举行的活动一)Second，(介绍要举行的介绍要举行的活动二活动二)I know/believe you will be very interested.(引出引出受邀请人参加的理由受邀请人参加的理由)练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备First/For one thing.(希望受邀请人参加的理由希望受邀请人参加的理由一一)Second/For another.(希望受邀请人参加的理由希望受邀请人参加的理由二二)The party/conference would not be completed without you(总结受邀请人参加的必要性总结受邀请人参加的必要性)! The party time/conference will begin at.(提出活动的地提出活动的地点点)Is it possible for us to meet at the.(提出具体约定的时提出具体约定的时间间)？We do hope you can come.(再一次发出邀请再一次发出邀请) Yours sincerely， Li Hua练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备3感谢信模板感谢信模板 模板一模板一Dear Bob， I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for.(感谢感谢的原因的原因)If it had not been for your assistance in.(对方给对方给你的具体帮助你的具体帮助)，I fear that I would have been.(没有对方没有对方帮助的结果帮助的结果) Everyone agrees that it was you who.(给出细节给出细节)Again，I would like to express my warm thanks to you！Please accept my gratitude. Yours sincerely， Li Hua练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备 模板二模板二Dear Bob， Im now writing to express my sincere thanks for.(直直接表达谢意接表达谢意)Id like you to know how much your.(表达表达自己非常珍惜对方的付出或礼物自己非常珍惜对方的付出或礼物)meant to me. You have a positive genius for.(对对方的赞美对对方的赞美)I not only enjoyed.，but also.(表述对方的恩惠对自己的影表述对方的恩惠对自己的影响响)练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备 I.(介绍自己的近况介绍自己的近况)I hope to have the opportunity of.(表达出自己希望有回报的机会表达出自己希望有回报的机会)Would you kindly let me know.(询问对方是否有时间询问对方是否有时间)？I will feel very honored and pleased if you have time to.(表达自己回报的心表达自己回报的心情情)How nice it would be to see you again(提出希望下次见提出希望下次见面的愿望面的愿望)! I repeat my thanks again for.(再次表示感谢再次表示感谢)Please give my kind regards to your.(最后表达真挚的祝福最后表达真挚的祝福) Yours sincerely， Li Hua练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备4道歉信模板道歉信模板 模板一模板一Dear Bob， I am truly sorry that.(道歉的原因道歉的原因) The reason is that.(介绍原因介绍原因)Once again，I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. Yours sincerely， Li Hua练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备 模板二模板二Dear Bob， I am excessively sorry to say/tell you that.(直接说出道直接说出道歉事由歉事由)Now I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret.Please accept my sincere apology.I hope you will understand me and excuse me for.(请求对方请求对方原谅的事由原谅的事由)练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备 The reason for my delay/absence was that.(过失的原过失的原因因)I had no way out because(自己当时的处境和情自己当时的处境和情况况)Therefore its not in my power to.(过失导致的结果过失导致的结果) Naturally，I want to suggest.(建议下次再实现愿望建议下次再实现愿望) Yours sincerely， Li Hua练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备佳佳作作 赏赏析析练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备 (2012重庆卷重庆卷)某国际网站提供个人闲置物品交换服某国际网站提供个人闲置物品交换服务。现在，你打算通过该网站将自己的一件闲置物品与他务。现在，你打算通过该网站将自己的一件闲置物品与他人交换人交换(exchange)。请你用英文在该网站上发帖，发布物。请你用英文在该网站上发帖，发布物品交换信息。内容应包括：品交换信息。内容应包括： 1你将拿出什么物品进行交换你将拿出什么物品进行交换 2具体介绍该物品具体介绍该物品 3你希望换回什么物品你希望换回什么物品 4请愿意交换的朋友给你留言请愿意交换的朋友给你留言 练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备注意注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右； 2格式不限；格式不限；3文中不得使用考生真实姓名和学校名称。文中不得使用考生真实姓名和学校名称。练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备【满分佳作满分佳作】Hello，everyone! I have a book about English learning that I want to exchange. The book was bought two years ago.Its content is about how to learn English grammar and vocabulary.Therere many special useful skills and methods about learning English.It may be helpful to your English learning.I want to exchange the book for a Chinese dictionary.I need a portable dictionary.I want to look up some common words in it.练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备 If you want to exchange the book with me，please leave a message on the Internet to me.Thanks a lot.My email is 【名师点拨名师点拨】 (1)本文属于应用文文体。应用文具有的语言特征，本文属于应用文文体。应用文具有的语言特征，即庄重、规范、准确、严谨、平实质朴、简明等。即庄重、规范、准确、严谨、平实质朴、简明等。 (2)正文根据写作需要开门见山，叙事条理清楚。正文根据写作需要开门见山，叙事条理清楚。 (3)时态与人称运用恰当正确，句式使用规范、语时态与人称运用恰当正确，句式使用规范、语言平实质朴，是一篇难得的优秀作文。言平实质朴，是一篇难得的优秀作文。练习吧练习吧话题导语话题导语佳作赏析佳作赏析话题必备话题必备练练习习吧吧