2020高考英语专题训练《短文改错议论文》含答案解析.doc

20202020高考英语专题训练高考英语专题训练: : 短文改错议论文短文改错议论文 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错 误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 (一) Hi, Janice, Its been a month since I came to this new school. I really want share with you some problems Ive been experiencing. As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together whenever we can. Weve been spending much time sing in karaoke bars. Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a wasting activity. In fact, I dont like to go anymore, so Im afraid Ill lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him? Please help with me and give me some advice. Grace (二) Dear editor, Im sorry to occupy your precious time, and I really want to tell you anything about the problem of some people keeping pets nowadays. I take the problem seriously for the following reason. First, as it is known to all, pets make much noise that trouble people greatly. Additionally, its widely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment, where makes people uncomfortable. Many owners like taking pets to public places where they may frighten children or even bite people. Most important, pets can spread some diseases that have attracted much attention. Take these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope I can get help to you and expect the media to do something for this. Yours truly, Li Hua (三) Dear Feng Ying, Ive received your letter, in that you said you wanted to lose weight by dieting. Its natural that girls of your age hope to look beautiful, and in my opinion, health overweighs beautiful. For a student, study is first thing to consider but appearance is the second. So dont let others ideas affect your normal life. However, if you did want to lose weight, its good idea to do it by taking exercise and change unhealthy eating habits. Furthermore, you should keep for a healthy state of mind, which is helpful in many aspects. I hope my advices will be helpful to you. Im looking forward to hear from you. Yours, Li Hua (四) I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that Senior 3 students must make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once Im allowed to do that, Ill be unable to control myself and forgetting all about my study. She also thinks its bad for my eye. But I really cant accept her ideas. In my view, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a days hard works. Besides, its important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldnt be forbidden to watch TV. (五) Time is valuable but limit. There is a famous saying, “Time is life”, this shows the importance of time. When time had gone, itll never return. Its a pity when many people make poor use of time. They spend their precious time oversleeping, drinking and hanging around. They dont realize wasting time is equal with wasting their life. They always regret having made little achievement so far. However, we should form the habit of value time. Dont put off what can be done today tomorrow. Laziness will not only bring us the failure, but also lead us to the road to poverty and even deaths. (六) Do you read reviews after you see a movie? I use to do that, but I usually regretted. I read so much about a movie on advance that I often ended up not go to see it at all. The writers point out everything thats wrong with the film, but seldom mentions anything good about them. They also tell many things and even the ending of the movie. Lately I have changed way I choose movies to watch. I read reviews afterwards. Whats importance to me is that I dont watch the talk shows in that people discuss movies. I dont ask others how they like of it. Now, I enjoy myself even more. (七) Last week, students in our class held debate on whether we should shop online. Most students are in favor for it, think that shopping online can help people save time. Besides, shopping online not only allow people to browse many items without leaving our homes, but also lets them compare the prices of goods in a short time. More important, the Internet is open all day long, so it is of great convenient for those who are busy in the daytime. However, special attention must be pay to the safety of online shopping. People need to make sure of that they get that they have ordered before paying for the bill. (八) With the development of our countrys economy, more and more people buy cars, that causes serious traffic problems and environmental pollution. As far as I am concerned about, the solutions of this problem are presented as follows. Firstly, the government should restrict the amount of car-buying and raises the costs of owning private cars. Secondly, cars from other places ought be limited to going to big cities. Beside, the government should design different reasonable traffic system to help solve the traffic problems. In the word, traffic problems have increasing affected many aspects of our life. Therefore, we must spare no efforts to solving this problem. (九) Last week, the Students Union in our school conduct a survey among all the students on if we should learn English. As the survey shows, the most of the students say yes, for they think learning English is one of the demand of modern society and will do good to our future career. Therefore, others are against the idea, saying that learning English is useless and is waste of energy. Whats worse, they feel learning English is anything but a burden. In my opinion, we are supposing to learn English well so that we can understand west cultures better. Beside, a good command of English means more opportunities in the future. (十) Thank to the Internet, the world is becoming smaller and smaller, that I think is good for people. Firstly, with help of the Internet, its possibly for people to work at home with a computer in front. People can also send and getting the information they need from it. Secondly, they can chose to buy or sell whatever they want through the Internet, while traditional shops dont provide them for such great convenience. Thirdly, they can download all kinds of informations from the Internet whenever its necessary. E-mails can be send to their friends in just a few more seconds. 参考答案参考答案 (一) 这封求助信表达了作者的困扰。作者交了三位新朋友，经常一起闲逛和K歌，实际上作者并不想出去但又担 忧失去这份友谊，她想寻求一些建议。 1. 在want后加to 因want后用不定式作宾语。 2. telltold 由后面的时间状语last time可知应用一般过去时。 3. friendfriends 由前面的three可知要用复数。 4. sing singing 由固定结构spend(in) doing sth.意为“花费做某事”可知。 5. manymuch 根据句意“它真地花费了我很多钱”，故用much指代钱(不可数)。 6. sobut 此处显然存在“转折”关系，故用并列连词but。 7. HowWhat 因作do的宾语，故要用what。 8. arewere 此处是虚拟语气。虚拟条件句中的系动词是be(对现在事实的虚拟)时，要用were。 9. himthem 根据上文可知作者交了三位朋友，故要用复数them。 10. 去掉help后的with 因动词help是及物动词，可直接带宾语，不需加介词with。注意：help sb. with sth.意为“帮助某人做某事”。 (二) 作者(Li Hua)向媒体写信就人们养宠物这个问题寻求帮助。 1. andbut 表“转折”用并列连词but。 2. anythingsomething 肯定句用something。 3. reasonreasons 下文列举的原因不止一个，故用复数。 4. 去掉is known前的it 由常用结构as is known to all意为“众所周知”可知。 5. troubletroubles 先行词noise是不可数名词，故此处要用第三人称单数。 6. wherewhich 引导非限定性定语从句，并在从句中作主语。 7. 在taking后加their 表“他们的宠物”，故要加their，此乃英语的习惯表达，常用交代清楚是“谁的”。 8. importantimportantly 修饰整个句子要用副词。 9. TakeTaking 此处Take作非谓语，与逻辑主语I存在主动关系，故用现在分词。 10. tofrom 此处理应表“从你那里”，故用from。 (三) 作者(Li Hua)给Feng Ying回信就如何合理减肥提供建议。 1. thatwhich 非限定性定语从句不能用that引导。 2. andbut 表“转折”用并列连词but。 3. beautifulbeauty 作宾语要用名词形式。 4. 在first前加the 因序数词前要加定冠词。 5. butwhile 表“对比”用并列连词while。 6. diddo 此处是强调谓语，而全文的主体时态是一般现在时，故要用do。 7. changechanging 作介词by的宾语要用动名词，与前面的taking并列。 8. 去掉keep后的for 因keep是及物动词。 9. advicesadvice 因advice是不可数名词。 10. hearhearing 由固定短语look forward to doing sth.意为“期待做某事”可知。 (四) 本文讲的是作者和母亲关于能不能看电视展开了争论。 1. aboutwith 由固定短语quarrel with sb.意为“和某人争论”可知。 2. 在view前加the 由固定短语hold the view意为“认为”可知。也可以说，表特指。 3. fullyfull 修饰名词use要用形容词full。 4. meher 根据上下文意可推知，此处是指“对她来说好像”。 5. forgettingforget 情态动词后用动词原形，与be并列。 6. eyeeyes 因eye是可数名词，此处理应是指“双眼”，故用复数。 7. watchwatching 作主语要用动名词。 8. workswork 因work是不可数名词。 9. hadhas 全文的主体时态是一般现在时，故此处要用现在完成时。 10. 去掉abroad前的at 由固定短语at home and abroad“在国内外”可知。abroad本身可作副词，前面无需加介词。 (五) 本文告诉我们，时间是有限的，我们要珍惜时间。 1. limitlimited 作表语要用形容词。 2. thiswhich 引导非限定性定语从句。 3. hadhas 全文的主题是条是一般现在时，故此处用现在完成时。 4. whenthat 由固定句型its a pity that意为“很可惜”可知，引导主语从句。 5. withto 由固定短语be equal to意为“与相等”可知。 6. HoweverTherefore 根据上下文意，此处理应表“因果”关系，故要用Therefore。 7. valuevaluing 作介词of的宾语，要用动名词valuing，意为“珍惜”。 8. 在tomorrow前加till/until 由固定短语put offtill/until意为“把推迟到”可知。till/until在此作介词，并非连接词。 9. 去掉failure前的the 抽象名词前不加冠词。此处是第一次提到，而且并无特指，故不用定冠词。 10. deathsdeath 因和poverty是并列关系，故用单数death。deaths意为“死亡人数”。 (六) 本文作者就“看电影评论的方式”谈了自己的观点。 1. afterbefore 根据下文可知，应该是在看电影之前看的评论。故用before。 2. useused 由固定短语used to do意为“过去常常”可知。 3. onin 由固定短语in advance意为“提前”可知。 4. gogoing 由固定短语end up doing意为“以结束”可知。 5. mentionsmention 主语是复数名词writers，故不用第三人称单数。 6. themit 指代前面的the film，故用单数it。 7. 在way前加the 此处表特指，故要用定冠词。 8. importanceimportant 作表语要用形容词。 9. thatwhich 在带有介词的定语从句中不能用that。 10. 去掉like后的of 因like是及物动词。 (七) 本文论述了网络购物的优点和缺点。 1. 在debate前加a 因debate是可数名词，故要加不定冠词。 2. forof 由固定短语in favor of意为“赞同”可知。 3. thinkthinking 分析句子成分可知此处think作非谓语动词，且与逻辑主语students存在主动关系，故用现在分词，作伴随 状语。 4. allowallows 本句主语是shopping online，谓语动词要用第三人称单数。 5. ourtheir 由前面的people可知要用their。 6. importantimportantly 作状语要用副词形式。 7. convenientconvenience 因be of great+抽象名词= be very+形容词。 8. paypaid 此处是被动，故要用过去分词。 9. 去掉of 因make sure that+从句，此处of显然是多余的。 10. thatwhat 引导宾语从句。根据语境可知应该用what才符合逻辑。 (八) 本文就私家车越来越多从而引起的交通环境问题提出一些解决措施。 1. thatwhich 引导非限定性定语从句，关系代词只能用which。 2. 去掉concerned后的about 由固定结构as far as I am concerned意为“在我看来”可知。 3. ofto 由固定搭配the solution to sth.意为“解决某事的方法”可知。 4. raisesraise 因与前面的restrict并列，故用动词原形。 5. 在ought后加to 由固定短语ought to意为“应该”可知。 6. BesideBesides 因Beside意为“在旁边”， Besides意为“此外”，故填Besides。 7. systemsystems 根据前面的different可知要用复数。system是可数名词。 8. thea 由固定短语in a word意为“总而言之”可知。 9. increasingincreasingly 修饰后面的动词affected要用副词形式。 10. solvingsolve 由固定短语spare no efforts to do sth.意为“不遗余力做某事”可知。 (九)本文谈论了学习英语的利与弊。 1. conductconducted 在上个星期，要用一般过去时。 2. if whether 介词之后宾语从句不能用if引导。 3. 去掉most前的of 不是最高级不用加定冠词，most of表示“大部分的”。 4. demand demands 在one of后的名词要用复数形式。 5. Therefore However 此处表转折关系。 6. 在waste前加上a 因a waste of是一个固定搭配。 7. anythingnothing 此处nothing but表示“只不过”。 8. supposingsupposed 此处be supposed to是固定搭配，意为“应该”。 9. westwestern 作定语要用形容词，表示“西方的”。 10. BesideBesides 因besides是连接性副词，表“此外”；而beside是介词，表“在旁边”。 (十)本文谈论了互联网给人们带来的好处。 1.Thank Thanks 因thanks to 固定搭配，意为“由于、多亏了”。 2. thatwhich 因that不能引导非限制性定语从句。 3. 在help前加上the 因with the help of sb.是固定搭配。 4. possiblypossible 作表语用形容词。常用句型it is adj for sb. to do sth. 5. gettingget 此处应与send 并列。 6. chosechoose 在情态动词(can)后用动词原形。 7. forwith 因provide sb. with sth. 是固定搭配。 8. informations information 因information是不可数名词，没有复数形式。 9. sendsent 此处是被动语态，故要用sent。 10. 去掉seconds 前的more 因与前面没有比较的关系。