读后续写专题2：读后续写之善举助人篇 学案--高三英语写作专项.docx

读后续写专题2：读后续写之善举助人篇一、 真题链接：好心的墨西哥家庭阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。During this past year, Ive had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadnt bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK (千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the mans hand, but he wouldnt take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if Id had lunch._After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag._第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境）思路：助人型故事构造第二步：助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链）第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华）二、 词句联想1. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊2. .be close to tears几乎要哭了3. tears (roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face) 泪水落下4. It didn't take long before +从句 不久, .     5. for an instant/moment一瞬间6. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙7. It suddenly occurred to sb that 从句 某人想到/明白.; 有了主意8. Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand(伸出援手).9. In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words (感动得说不出话来). I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest. 10. It is love that makes the world go round（是爱让世界运转）and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.11. I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others（传递爱给其他人）. Just as a saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）. ”12. From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness （希望传递善意）that Mexican family offered me.13. Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.练习：1. 我觉得有点尴尬，就回答说: “不!”_2. 女孩笑着说_3. 感动的泪水在我眼眶里滚动，我拿起了三明治。_4. 狼吞虎咽吃完之后，我觉得这是我吃过的最好吃的三明治。_5. 让我感到很惊讶的是._6. 我对他们表示衷心的感激，然后看着他们消失在我的视线里。_7. 我紧紧地拿着纸袋，静静地站着，一股暖流涌上心头。_8. 我多么感激这家人的帮助。_9. 从那时起，我在车里放了一些普通的工具和食物，在路上遇到需要帮助的人时，我会尽力像帮助家人一样帮助他们，只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。_三、 范文赏析When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if Id had lunch.Hearing what she said, I realized that I didnt have lunch.To be honest, after working hard for several hours, I was so hungry. Feeling a bit embarrassed, I replied: “no!”The girl said with a smile, “Come on! Join us.The Mexicon sandwich is delicious!” With moved tears rolling around my eyes, I took the sandwich.After eating it like wolf, I felt that it was the tasty sandwich that I had ever had.While dining, I talked about my trouble and feelings and they shared their interesting stories in the life.Then, the girls mother had another sandwich and some fruit place din a paper bag and handed it to me,saying gently: “Keep it and have it later! We had to go now.” I showed my heartfelt gratitude to them and saw them disappear in my sight.After they left, I got into my jeep and opened the paper bag. What surprised me a lot was that there was a sandwich,fruit and the bill given by me.Holding the paper bag tightly, I stood still, a warm current rising in my heart.How grateful was I to the family helping me. Although most of people I met on the road were indifferent, there were still some people like this family who was so helpful and thoughtful.From then on, I placed a jack and some common tools in my car.When meeting people in need on the road ,I would try my best to help them like the family.Only in this way, could more and more people help each other in the future.四、 学以致用阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy his name was Bernard had interested her very much.“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I dont see what he can do.”After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish (完成) .”The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn (爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too._With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business._7读后续写专题2：读后续写之善举助人篇学科网（北京）股份有限公司