高三英语二轮复习：读后续写专题训练.docx

高三英语二轮复习：读后续写专题第二节 读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。【一】Random Acts of Kindness I was driving along Clarendon Street in South Melbourne on my way to Castlemaine to visit my parents. As I stopped at a traffic light, I noticed a man lying on a bench seat on the footpath beside the road. It was early evening and his rough appearance and the fact that he was holding a bottle wrapped in newspaper confirmed my immediate suspicions he was a drunk. As soon as I saw him, I felt a strong feeling of sympathy for him. But like so many other people, I had other places to be and other things to do. As I watched, I saw two policemen approach and instantly I felt relieved. After all, it was their responsibility to clean up the streets and make sure men like him got a chance to be somewhere safe for the night. As I sat waiting for the traffic lights to turn green, I couldnt believe what I saw. The two police walked around and when they reached the man, both of whom turned their heads the other way, as if not to see, and walked right past. Suddenly, a firm belief streamed through my mind, “Life is never so busy that there is no time to serve.” Right then I looked up and the traffic lights turned green and I had a decision to make. I knew that if I drove off, I would have no peace, so I turned left, drove around the block, parked the car and walked back to the man. As I approached him, I felt completely unconfident to deal with the situation and even a little foolish. What was I going to say? What was I going to do? At the very least I could drive him home if he had a home. I found him sleeping soundly and at first, he didnt respond to me at all, so I reached out and gently shook him awake. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答He woke up, staring at me angrily. _Much to my relief, the man agreed to get into my car._【二】Teen Becomes A Local HeroWhen Sydney Raley headed into her weekend shift on Saturday, December 18, she likely expected to do more of the same: Stand at the drive-through window, take orders over the headset, and hand each customer their meal with a smile.In fact, thats exactly how it started. Sydney Raley has been working at MC Donalds for about seven months and so far, its been her typical after-school job. The day had been mostly normal-making coffee, making drinks, and going into the lunch rush.But a few hours into her shift. things took a dramatic turn. After handing a customer some of their food, Sydney let them know that more would be coming as soon as it was ready. But just seconds later, she noticed a terrible look of panic spread across the womans face. Then came the coughing. She was coughing like crazy and was speechless. Her daughter was in the passenger seat and looked extremely confused and frightened.Sydney immediately knew she was choking. The first aid training Sydney received more than four years ago hit her. Most 15-year-olds might panic at the sight of this. But not Sydney. Instead, the teen remained calm and quickly shouted to both her manager and the womans daughter to dial 911. Then, she dove through the drive-through window and came to the rescue.The teen pushed the drivers side door forcefully open and got the choking woman to her feet. Then she dug down deep into her memory bank to recall everything she learned from her Red Cross babysitter class, which shed taken four years earlier. All that training of how to use the Heimlich maneuver(哈姆立克急救法)immediately kicked in. Still, she had never actually had to use the life-saving technique before, and after a few tries, it wasnt quite working. Luckily, another customer was just a few feet away in the parking lot.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。She shouted to that man for assistance. _The story has made headlines throughout the country._【三】The day my dad gave me a BB gun was my twelfth birthday, and I almost couldn't help jumping up and down when I saw what it was.With a smile, he led me outside and showed me how to shoot first loading the gun, pumping it a few times, aiming, and finally, firing. Before handing the gun to me, he said seriously, “I don't ever want to see you killing anything. That's not the reason why I bought you this gun.” I thought he was afraid that I'd learn what real power felt like. Anyway, it was okay with me because I figured I'd find many other targets.“Hey, Mike.” I yelled to my friend upon making one of my greatest discoveries. “Check this out.” I aimed at the top of the telephone pole. “What are you doing?” he asked. I fired, and the BB hit the top of the pole, causing a loud “DING” to ring out. “Cool,” Mike said. I smiled like a king a smile that grew even wider when Mike couldn't hit the same target. The good thing was that no matter how many times you shot those things they never broke. Then again, maybe that was why it got boring.A few months later, I found myself walking down the street, gun in hand, searching for new targets. I stopped by a telephone pole, popping off a few shots with nothing better to do. Suddenly, a bird swooped (俯冲) down and landed on the wire. It cooed and walked slowly, completely unaware of my watchful eye. Here I was, a bored kid, holding a BB gun, and a bird standing right there in front of meand no one around to tell my dad. It was so perfect. I figured it was a sign from God. I aimed straight at the bird, held my breath, and squeezed slowly upon the trigger (扳机). But I hesitated. I was about to shoot a bird, feeling at one moment uneasy, at another excited. The exciting part won. I fired.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。The bird dropped like a rock, one wing flopping behind as it fell. _When my dad got home that evening, he asked me how my day was._【四】A GIFT FOR GRANDPASummer vacation was coming. Jack and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of visiting their grandparents again.The big day came at last. After the happy family got ready, they set out for the grandparents eagerly. On the way, the brothers were excitedly talking about the fun they had with grandparents.A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared. Behind the property was the forest carrying their good memories with Grandpa. They arrived at the driveway, at the end of which Grandma was waiting for them joyfully.Jack and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room, shouting excitedly “Grandpa, we are back!”Seeing his grandsons, Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair but in vain. A helpless expression flashed on his face. Grandma explained that his health was declining rapidly and maybe couldnt stand up on his own forever. But Grandpa declared stubbornly (倔强地), “I can!” Certainly, he was stuck in his boyish way. Mum and grandparents were happy to meet again after a long time. They sat together and chatted about what happened recently.The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation, went out and wandered into the forest. Tall trees stretched up to the heavens with large branches crossing each other, while young ones rose straight like soldiers. Grandpa was once a great explorer full of wisdom. He could tell where the birds came from only by their calls and songs. The trees, birds, lizards, lots of bugs.How many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom!But now Grandpa couldn't get up. This made them worried. “Wed think out a way to cheer him up.” Jack said. “Grandpa is a bird lover, and we can catch him a bird.” Berlin suggested. “But he hates birds being caged!” Jack shook his head.Then a bright idea came to Jacks mind “Why not make a cane (拐杖) out of a young tree!”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Berlin thought it was a good idea. _Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa._2022届广东省茂名市高三英语二轮复习：读后续写专题参考评分原则一、读后续写评分原则 1. 本题总分为 25 分，按五个档次进行评分2. 评分时，主要从内容、语言表达和篇章结构三个方面考查，具体为： （1）续写内容的质量、续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。 （2）所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。 （3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。 3. 评分时，应先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量， 确定或调整档次，最后给分。 4. 评分时还应注意： （1）词数少于 130 的，从总分中减去2分。 （2）单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 （3）书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分。2. 各档次的给分范围及要求档次描述第五档(2125分)*创造了新颖、丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高。*使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅,语言错误很少，且完全不影响理解。*自然有效地使用了段落间、语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。第四档(16 -20 分)*创造了比较丰富、合理的内容，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整，与原文情境融洽度比较高。*使用了比较多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，有些许语法错误，不影响理解。*比较有效地使用了段落间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。第三档(11 15 分)*创造了基本完整的故事内容，但有的情节不够合理或逻辑性不强，与原文情境基本相关。*使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有部分语言错误和不恰当之处，个别部分影响理解(低级语法错误，如主宾格使用混乱，时态错误，拼写错误等)。*尚有语句衔接的意识，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。第二档(610 分)*内容和逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文有一定程度 脱节。*所用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多且比较低级，影响理解。*未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰,意义欠连贯。第一档（1 5 分）*内容和逻辑上有较多重大问题，或有部分内容抄自原文，续写不完 整，与原文情境基本脱节。*所使用的词汇非常有限，语法结构单调、错误较多、严重影响理解。*几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。0白卷、内容太少以致无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。2022届广东省茂名市普通高中毕业班模拟考试英语试卷（三） 读后续写专题答案【一】He woke up, staring at me angrily. The smell of alcohol on his breath was overwhelming and I stepped back. I cant remember exactly what I said to him probably something no better than, “Mate, are you OK?” Still lying on the bench seat, the man went quiet, looked up and fixed his eyes on mine. Then his eyes filled with tears and he said to me, “God sent you, didnt he?” A little surprised, the only reply I could think of was, “Well. yes, he asked me to take you home”. Much to my relief, the man agreed to get into my car. While driving him home, he wept and poured out the sorrows of his heart. Suffering multiple tragedies, he turned to the only source of comfort he knew: the bottle. I patiently comforted him that everyone would encounter various kinds of difficulties. If we faced them positively, all the difficulties would disappear. At his door, he thanked me sincerely and promised not to drink again. From the steady look in his eyes, I learned a lesson: If life becomes hard, soften it with random acts of kindness.【二】She shouted to that man for assistance. The man heard Sydneys cry and rushed over. Sydney briefed him on the situation, and the man did not hesitate to help the woman. He used the same Heimlich maneuver, but harder than Sydney. And happily, it worked this time, after which the woman threw up the food stuck in her throat and began gasping for air, and she was saved. The woman and her daughter thanked Sydney and the man. Sydney was thrilled to have saved the lady. The story has made headlines throughout the country. All the media praised Sydney and the man for their bravery, and how calmly she performed the Heimlich maneuver in an emergency. From this story, people realized that everyone should master the Heimlich maneuver in case someone around them gets choked, so the media called for schools to train students to master skills of the Heimlich maneuver. Some schools have invited doctors and nurses from the emergency department of the hospital to explain the operation of the Heimlich maneuver to students, which has been well received by parents and the community.【三】The bird dropped like a rock, one wing flopping behind as it fell. I heard it thump into the dirt. Before lowering the gun, I realized what I'd doneI'd killed my first animal. “Oh no！” My stomach was tied in knots and I prayed, “Oh God, please don't let it be dead.” The bird lay there with blood streaming from its beak, feathers large and small scattered about. I reached out and rolled it over, but its head drooped lifelessly to the side. After burying it, I hurried home, hiding my BB gun in the closet.When my dad got home that evening, he asked me how my day was. I hesitated, and was momentarily uneasy that guilt crossed my face. My dad, a man of keen perception, quickly went into confrontation mode, asking what really happened. I replied, as if I had to choke the words out of my throat, tears streaming down my face. He didn't say anything but just looked at me, hand resting on my shoulder. That evening, my dad made me vow never to kill a thing again, explaining that once I got bored of animals, the next target could be something even more priceless.【四】Berlin thought it was a good idea. When the two brothers reached an agreement, they quickly ran back to their grandfathers house, got the tools they needed to make the cane, and ran back to the woods. Jack said, “What kind of tree should we pick for the walking stick?” Berlin thought for a moment and said, “I think we should choose a straight tree, so no knots will scratch grandpas hands.” Jack nodded his head in agreement. They found a straight tree and set to work. They cut the tree down, and with a knife they took the bark off. It was a wonderful tree, which was smooth and was just of the right size. They thought grandpa would love it.Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. When grandpa took the cane, his hands shook with joy, thinking, “This is made by my grandsons themselves. How precious it is!” Jack said, “Grandpa, we hope this cane will help you stand up and come with us to explore the woods.” Grandpa s