最新小学英语作文模板(精华版).doc

YOUR LOGO原 创 文 档 请 勿 盗 版精品文档1. 爱好用 40 个以上的词语描述您的爱好。 例文： My name is Sally, My hobby isgym with my friends after school. We hobby? Can you tell me ?用 40 个以上的词语描述您的家人爱好。swimming. I l ove swimmingbest. Ioften swimin the s yourhave funtogether. Ican swimvery fast. What例文： My name is Sally,There arethree people in my family. My father is tall. His hobby isswimming.hecan swimvery well. My mother is beautiful. Shelikessinginganddancing.Shecan singanddancevery well. And My hobby isreading books. I have many books inmy study. I love the books and I love my family.2机器人会做什么？如果你有一个机器人，你希望 你的机器人会做什么？用英语写出你心目中的机器人能做的事情。例文： s a present from myit is good atMy name is Sally, I have a clever robot. His name is Robit. Itsa talking robot.mother. The robotis very good.ItIt canspeak English. AndIt sgood at！ it canmany things.cleaning. It candraw.It cancount.It canwrite. Wowdoeverying! I love it very much.3.父母日常生活写一篇描述您的朋友或者父母日常生活的短文。例文： Hello, My name is Sally. I am a boy. My father is Tom. He is 45. He oftenwakes upgoes to takes exercisevery early in the morning . After that Hehasa big breakfast. And then He usuallylunch. In the afternoon ,He usuallyworkon foot.He sometimesdoesn t likegoes out forin the park. Hestayingat home . I love my father.4.菜单今天是小玲的生日，请你帮她设计好一个菜单，写一篇不少于40 个单词的小短文。例文： s birthdFaoy.r startersToday is Xiaolingwe can havetomato and egg soup. WeallAndlikesoup.Then for the main course We can havefish, meat ,some vegetable and rice.for dessert we can have5.介绍你最喜欢的动物My Favorite Animal It s very small. Ita chocolate cake. I hopeeveryone likeschocolate cake.My favorite animal is rabbit. Its name is Sweet. Sweet has long ears. s white. It has a short tail. It has red eyes. It likes eating carrots. Itlikes jumpinbest friend. 6.天气g. It goes jumping three times a day. I like it very much. ItI like the rabbit.s lovely. It写一篇小短文，描述广州的四季，天气，以及相应的活动等。并说明你喜欢的季节和理由。例文： Hello, My name is Sally. I am a Chinese girl. IItlive in. Spring is in summer.Guangzhou. In Guangzhou,a beautiful season. I love it.Itscool in autumn. We can flysItsr ainy and wet in spring . The treeshot and sunny in summer. Iturn greenlove swimmingit scold in winter. But it s not very cold. I love Guangzhou.kites .7.描写一个节日精品文档精品资料精品学习资料第 1 页，共 11 页精品文档MyfavouritefestivalisSpringFestival.ItisinJanuaryorFebruary.Duringthefestival,people usually clean their houses and buy now things , They will go to visit theirfamily and friends. And they will have a big dinner. Children often get some lucky money.8. 喜欢的运动Itsmy favorite, too.Itsa gooTable tennis is one of the most popular sports in China.itseasy to play. Youdon tneed many skills. I often play table td way of exercise, andennis after class. Most of my classmates like it. So we always have partners. But if you witsnot so easy. You must focus on your gesture, your hands and yourant to play well,steps. I want to be better, so I practice it very often. I have my own teacher to teach me. Iwork hard on it9.周末活动On Saturday, I go painting in the morning. The pictures are very beautiful. Then, I eat lunch at 12:00 at noon. In the afternoon, I usually go to the park, climb mountains or play with my friends. I can see beautiful flowers, green grass in the park. Wow! Ithappy times! In the evening, I do homework and watch TV. Sometimes I play computergames.10. 介绍朋友I have a good friend. We are in the same class. His name is Bill. He is 13. He likes sports very much. These sports are tennis soccer and basketball. He plays tennis twice a week. He plays soccer twice a week. He plays basketball once a week. He often likes to wear black T-shirt and blue pants. His phone number is 5352375. Everyone likes him.s very very小升初英语书面表达优秀范文一、以你自己的宠物或你熟悉的小动物为题按下面的要求写一篇英语作文。 要求： 1. 意思连贯，词句通顺，标点正确，书写规范。2. 不少于 50 个单词。My dogI have an English dog. Its name is Laike. It's two years old. It's grey. Its body is very long. Its mouth is white. Its two eyes are blue. It has two small ears. Its four legs are very long. Its tail is thin and long. It runs fast. It likes meat. I like to play with it. It's my goodfriend.二、以要求：My Bedroom (我的卧室 )为题按要求写一篇英语小作文。1.要写出卧室内的主要物品。2.条理清楚，语句通顺，标点正确，书写规范。3.不少于 50 个单词。My BedroomI have a big bedroom. There are many things in it. There is a big desk in the middle oftheroom.Therearesomebooks,acomputer,a keyboardandmouseonit.There'sapencil-box and a lamp on it, too. Near the desk, there's a bed. Near the bed, there is a bigwardrobe. There are two windows in the wall. There are four pictures and a nice clock on the wall, too. I often clean my bedroom. I love my bedroom.精品文档精品资料精品学习资料第 2 页，共 11 页精品文档三、以要求：My Day(我的一天 )为题按要求写一篇英语小作文。1. 有一定的内容，条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范。2. 不少于 50 个单词。My DayI'm a boy, and I'm a pupil. I go to school from Monday to Friday. I have no class on Saturdays and Sunday. I often get up at six o'clock. I go to school at seven o'clock. I have four lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. I go home at five. I do my homeworkat home.四、以一种文具为题按要求写一篇要求： 1. 要写出此文具的主要特点。英语 小作文。2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，标点正确，书写规范。3. 不少于 50 个单词。My Pencil-boxI have a pencil-box. It is nice and big. It has many colours. There are two blocks on my pencil-box. One is yellow, the other is orange. In my pencil-box, there are pens, pencils, a ruler and an eraser. I like my pencil-box very much and my pencil-box looks like my bestfriend.五、假如你是照片上的女孩Nancy,请你描述一下你全家的照片。要求： 1. 条理清楚，意思连贯，标点正确，书写规范。2.50个单词左右。The Photo of My FamilyThis is a photo of my family. I sit in the middle of my mum and my dad. Mum is a teacher. Dad is a doctor. Look at the boy. He is my brother, Bill. We are in the same school. But he is in Grade 2. I am in Grade 1. Oh, there is another one in our family, my lovely cat.七、以 Myself( 我 )为题按下面的要求写一篇英语小作文。要求： 1. 语句通顺，条理清楚，书写清晰、规范。2. 不得少于50 个单词。MyselfMy name is Wang Dong. I'm 12 years old. I'm a student of No. 5 Primary School in Beijing. I have many hobbies. I like reading and watching TV in my free time. Snow White is my favourite book.I have some friends in my class. My best friend is Chen Gang. I often play games withhim. My English teacher is Miss Hu. I like her very much.My English Teacher s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two bigMiss Tang is my English teacher. Sheeyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singingand dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一very kind to us. We all love her.篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词 组 ，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。My Days of the weekI m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o clock every day. I have breakfast at精品文档精品资料精品学习资料第 3 页，共 11 页精品文档seven o clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday.half past six, and go to school att have to go to这篇作文的题I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don【要领点评】school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.目是“我的一周” ，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。My Favourite Food小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓 s long and thin. It looks like aDo you know what this is?Guess! Its colour is yellow. Itsmall boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern.colour is orange. ItOh, it is anorange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are s your favourite food?【要yummy. I like them very much.How about you? What领点评】是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢My Favourite Food的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。I can help do housework m in Class Three, Grade Five. ImI am a girl. My name is Li Ling. Ihelpful at home.I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help mymother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful,too?【要领点评】的事情， 介绍自己的名字，本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细， 到位。小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。In The KitchenItsbig and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. TThis is the kitchen of my family.his is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things othey restrawberries. And what are those?n it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh,They are grapes.【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。 小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。My VillageMy village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, the re is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can s ee some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!【要领点评】本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所 在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。小学英语五年级下册各单元作文范例及点评精品文档精品资料精品学习资料第 4 页，共 11 页精品文档My weekendThere are two days on the weekend, Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday, I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and I often help my mother do some cleaning. On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon. After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents. Atthat time, we can talk with each other and say something happily. We often have a good time.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动，记叙了周六和周日的上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感受。即：周六上午：舞蹈课下午：做作业和帮妈妈做清洁周日上午：看望祖父母下午：阅读晚上：看电视，与父母交流感受：高兴和愉快。我们还可以选取周六和周日中的几个比较主要的活动来写，先说明什么时间在什么地方由什么人做了什么事，有什么 感受。再按照活动顺序把活动内容写清楚，最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感想。时态：这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写般现在时（主要描述你经常怎样度过周末）: a. 一般过去时（主要描述你上个周末是怎样度过的）;b. 一;c. 一般将来时（主要描述你要怎样过周末）。这里我们来表述平时是如何过周末的，所以采用一般现在时来写。注意： 活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识，eg.（例） 起床get up ，和新知识， eg. Climb mountainseg.“ I often watch TV with my parents.去爬山中的un 很容易错写成nu 。还要注意不要出现病句，”不要写成“ I often with my parents watch TV .” 词量上控制在My Seasons50 80之间。We have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spitswind. And I can go hiking wiring, the weather is cool and wind, I can fly kites whenitssunny and cool. I like hiking. Summer is hot in the north of Chinth my family whenitsnot long time. I often go swimming. It can make me healthy and strong. I cana, butalso wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter comes, its often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows, everything is white. We can pla y with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski. And winter is my favourite season, bec【要领点评】ause of the Spring Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature.写法：这篇短文是描述“我的四季”，在写法上，是根据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征，之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受，最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容， 之后再去讲其他几个季节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黄，农民在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更贴近实际。时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以我们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即：在什么季节，天气如何，我们可以做什么。注意： 在写作内容上， 不可以像以往的内容那么简单，因为有四个季节，所以要写明季节， 季节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动的感受等，要求句子顺序要正确，在写作中还要注意关联词的使用，如用了“因为” ，就不能用“所以” ，二者不可以同时出现。词量要控制在My Birthday Party80 个词以内。itsbirthday, my parents hold a party for me. They invite my friendEvery year, whento come to my house to celebrate my birthday. I can get many beautiful gifts every year. In my party, we can do many things: 1.Light the candles.Sing a“ Happy”song. 3.2.4.7.BirthdayMake a wish.Eat the cake.Blow out the candles. 5.Open the presents. 8.Cut off the cake. 6.Sing and dance.精品文档精品资料精品学习资料第 5 页，共 11 页精品文档9.Watch videos or play other games. 10. Say goodbye with each other.That s my birthday party, is it interesting?【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按活动的顺序来写的，记叙了生日晚会的各项具体活动，比较全面。比较以前几个单元的写作写法，这个短文按活动顺序比较合适。时态：这篇短文可以用三种时态来写：1 、一般将来时：主要说明生日晚会份的各项计划，都将如何进行。2 、一般现在时：主要说明习惯上 如 何 度 过 每 个 生 日 。 3 、 一 般 过 去 时 ： 主 要 说 明 你 的 生 日 晚 会 是 如 何 进 行 的 。句 型 ：邀请某人做某事invite sb. to do sth.注意：由于这篇短文很有局限性，所表达的大体上都基本相同，所以在书写的时候要注意结合自己的实际活动与真情实感去写。另外注意一些短语和单词的书写不要发生错误：eg. “吹蜡烛”要写成“”而不能写成“My family”。blow out the candlesblow candlesThere are five people in my family. They are my grandma, grandpa, dad, mom and I. Look!Grandma is watching TV. Grandpa is reading a book. Dad is writing an e-mail. Mom is【要领点评】写法：这篇习时态：由于本cooking dinner. I am doing my homework. I love my family!作介绍了自己家的家庭成员，以及此刻他们正在干什么，表达了自己对家人的感情。单元主要讲的是现在进行时态，所以建议采用现在进行时态。句型： 主语 +be+ 动词的现在分词。注意：本单元的重点是现在进行时态，注意在写句子时要保持时态的完整性，即系动词和动词的ing 缺一不可。In the parkIt is sunny today .My mother, my father and I are going to thepark. We like the park very much. It is very big and beautiful .There are many trees andflowers in it. Many people like to go there. Look! An old man is sitting on the chair. He isreading a book carefully. Two boys are jumping on the ground. Their mothers are talking with each other. Two birds are flying in the sky. The ducks are swimming in the river. They s a poor mouse.are very happy. What is the cat doing? Oh, it is running after a mouse. It【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是用现在进行时描绘出公园里的人和动物们正在进行的活动还运用了一般现在时叙述了公园美丽的景色。时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时和现在进行时两种时态，由于本单元的语法项目是现在进行时，因此，描述的重点要放在现在进行时态上。句型：一般现在其他 ? （ 2 ）主语时：主语 +谓语 + 其他现在进行时： （ 1 ） What,are)+ 主语 +v.-ing+be(am,is其他。classmates+be(am,is ,are)+ v.-ing+A Field TripIt is a nice day. Our class will have aThere re alotfieldtriptoday.Theareveryexcited.Look!Hereweare.ofactivities to do. Amy is watching insects. Peter is collecting leaves. They want to write areport. Mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. Tim and Bob are playing chess. Some of the classmates are having a picnic. There is a lot of delicious food to eat. Oh, whoover there? It s Miss White. What is she doing? She is taking photos. We had a very good s thattime. I ll never forget this field trip.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按照郊游时的画面来描时态：这篇文章可以用一般过去时述的，记叙了同学们分别在郊游中做了哪些活动及郊游的感受。和现在进行时来写。由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时，所以，这里我们采用现在进行时比较合适。句型：×× . is/are doing sth. She /He is doing sth. They re doing sth.注意：活动的相关表述法采用新旧知识相结合去写。注意时态的转换、描写感受时用一般现在时。