中考英语专题复习—写作训练课件.pptx

书面表达框架结构的搭建写作训练（一）1.体裁：征文2.人称：一般现在时3.时态:一人称4.要点:1）强健体魄 2）全面发展 3）自理能力4）诚信友善/勤学善读体美劳德？智？框架框架: :Para 1： 引入话题（略） Para 2：希望和期待(略)Para 3:如何成长（详）How? +Why ? +What ? （set examples）Para 1：引入话题 As teenagers, we are the future of our homeland. 关键词：the yong are strong, the country is strong try to make ourselves strong升华： 倒装+高级短语The stronger the young are, the stronger the country will be. make our efforts to become strongerPara 2：如何成长 中心句: How to make ourselves strong? 支撑句（关键词）：1. take exercise more-take our PE class seriously, do outdoor activities (play basketball, run,.) to make our body strong.2. develop our all kinds of abilities-take up singing, dancing,playing the piano to improve us in an all-round way.3. develop our life skills-do all kinds of chores 4. be honest and kind to others - People prefer making friends with those who are honest and kind to them.Para 2：如何成长 中心句: How to make ourselves strong? 支撑句（关键词）：1. take exercise more-take our PE class seriously, do outdoor activities (play basketball, run,.) to make our body strong.2. develop our all kinds of abilities-take up singing, dancing,playing the piano to improve us in an all-round way.3. develop our life skills-do all kinds of chores 4. lean to cooperate with others -put ourselves into others shoes, be active, positive ,tolerant, compete with smilePara 3：希望和期待 关键词：take action to try to make ourselves strong be able to build our country wellAs teenagers, we are the future of our homeland. The stronger the young are, the stronger the country will be. So we teenagers are supposed to make our efforts to become stronger. Here are some of my suggestions. First of all, we must take exercise more to make our body strong, such as taking our PE class seriously, doing outdoor activities, for everything is nothing without good health condition.Secondly, to improve us in an all-round way, we can develop different kinds of abilities. Taking up singing or dancing is such a good choice. In our daily life, we should do some chores. Not only can it help us improve our life skills, but make the relationship between parents and us better. More importantly, a kind character should be put in the first place. Wed better be always ready to help others, try to be kind and honest, because people prefer making friends with those who are honest and kind to them. All in all, I believe that our country will be built better and better as long as we go out of our ways to improve ourselves . Lets take action right now !句式补充：1. We should pay more attention to study.2. Try to get more knowledge from reading and thinking. 3. 写作训练（二）-图表作文图表作文：学生通过图表信息进行写作。图表包括：饼状图柱形图条形图 现今越来越多的人喜欢网上点餐外卖服务，你所在的学生会就“你对网上点餐的看法”进行了问卷调查。请根据调查结果给我校的英文校刊写一篇短文，并谈谈你的看法。方便快捷，随时随地点餐品种丰富，选择多样其他缺点塑料包装，造成污染一审一审: :1. 1.体裁：体裁：2.2.人称人称：3.3.时态时态: :4.4.要点要点: :调查报告第三人称第一人称一般现在时Part1:Part2:Part3:引出话题（关于网上点餐的调查）描述饼状图内容，介绍调查结果自己对网上点餐的看法二搭二搭: :略略详详Part1: 引出话题（关于网上点餐的调查）Online food delivery is booming(繁荣的) in China. The Student Union in our school has made a survey about it. online food delivery/order food onlinethe student unionmake a surveyHere are the results.描述饼状图内容，介绍调查结果convenient;order food anytime and anywheredifferent kinds of foods;more choicesuse plastic packaging;cause much pollutionunhealthy;make people lazier连词成句注意逻辑likedislikelikedislikePart2:关键词35% of them think its 连词成句Part2:like:convenient;order food anytime and anywheredifferent kinds of foods;more choiceslikeMost students like to order food online. convenient. They can order food anytime and anywhere. because they can order food anytime and anywhere. Meanwhile, 主题句支撑句主题句支撑句 30% of them enjoy different kinds of foods online so that they can have more choices .逻辑use plastic packaging;cause much pollutionunhealthy;make people lazierdislikePart2:dislike:主题句支撑句However,.逻辑自己对网上点餐的看法In my opinion, I prefer cooking by myself to ordering food online.One of the reasons is that I like cooking. Its a way to enjoy life.Besides, I agree that delivery food is not as healthy as home cooking food.Part3:I think/believe that In my opinion, /As for me, ./It seems to me that.I am of the opinion that / I take the view that . My personal view is that / Personally, I think From my point of view, / As far as I am concerned, 主题句支撑句Therefore, I dont like online food delivery.结束句Online food delivery is booming(繁荣的) in China. The Student Union in our school has made a survey about it.Here are the results. Most students like to order food online. 5% of them think its convenient because they can order food anytime and anywhere. Meanwhile, 30% of them enjoy different kinds of foods online so that them can have more choices .However, there are also many students dont think like it. 25% of them think it needs a lot of plastic packaging which may cause much pollution. And the other 10% think its unhealthy and make people lazier, for people dont need to go out to eat or cook meals by themselves. In my opinion, I prefer cooking by myself to ordering food online.One of the reasons is that I like cooking. Its a way to enjoy life.Besides, I agree that delivery food is not as healthy as home cooking food.Therefore, I dont like online food delivery. Whats your opinion? /How about you? Do you like to order food online?引发读者思考Summary: 图表作文 (Possible version)引出话题（关于网上点餐的调查）主题句描述饼状图内容，连词成句注意逻辑关键词支撑句结束句逻辑连接词自己的观点Part1:Part2:Para3:主题句支撑句Para1Para2Para3自己对网上点餐的看法引出话题（关于网上点餐的调查）描述表格内容，介绍调查结果like:dislike:Para4主题句支撑句Whats your opinion? /How about you? Do you like to order food online?引发读者思考Summary: 图表作文结束句结束句Homework:2019年受新冠(COVID-19)疫情影响，全国开展线上教学，我们亲身体验了线上学习的利弊，针对线上学习的感受,我校进行了一次调研，结果如下。请根据调研结果写一篇短文，并谈谈你的看法。方便；丰富的学习资源；.影响视力；容易分心.主题句支撑句一审一审: :二搭二搭: :结束句连词成句注意逻辑关键词