Book4-unit-1-Writing.ppt

假如你是李华，假如你是李华，最近你的外国朋友最近你的外国朋友Tom来信说他对中来信说他对中国诺贝尔奖获得者屠呦呦很感兴趣。请你给他写封信国诺贝尔奖获得者屠呦呦很感兴趣。请你给他写封信介绍屠呦呦。内容包括：介绍屠呦呦。内容包括：1、屠呦呦，女，科学家。生于浙江宁波，、屠呦呦，女，科学家。生于浙江宁波，1951年考入年考入北京医科大学，毕业后致力于治疗疟疾的研究。北京医科大学，毕业后致力于治疗疟疾的研究。2、她非常地刻苦，谦虚。、她非常地刻苦，谦虚。 因为发现了青蒿素在因为发现了青蒿素在2015年年获得了诺贝尔医学奖。获得了诺贝尔医学奖。3、你对屠呦呦的评价。、你对屠呦呦的评价。要求：包括以上提示内容，可适当添加细节，字数不少要求：包括以上提示内容，可适当添加细节，字数不少于于100字。字。 疟疾疟疾 malaria 青蒿素青蒿素 artemisinin诺贝尔医学奖诺贝尔医学奖 Nobel Prize in medicine Born in., . is a great scientist.With the excitement inside, Details are as follows.be admitted into.devote.to.as a resultAs far as Im concernedmake a big differenceI would appreciate it if. Useful words and expressions: Useful words and expressions:第第1段：段：问候问候+写作目的写作目的【引入引入4分分】【要点】假如你是李华，你写信给你的外国朋友假如你是李华，你写信给你的外国朋友Tom介绍介绍屠呦呦。屠呦呦。第第2段：段：【作文重点作文重点18分分】【要点】 1. 屠呦呦个人信息及事迹；屠呦呦个人信息及事迹； 2. 你对她的评价。你对她的评价。 第第3段：段：【结尾【结尾3分】分】【要点】希望你的介绍对他有所帮助，期待早日回复。希望你的介绍对他有所帮助，期待早日回复。篇章布局篇章布局第第1段：段：问候问候+写作目的写作目的【引入引入4分分】【要点】假如你是李华，你写信给你的外国朋友假如你是李华，你写信给你的外国朋友Tom介绍介绍屠呦呦。屠呦呦。【表达】Dear Tom, Hows it going recently? Knowing that you are interested in Tu Youyou, Im very glad. With the excitement inside, Im writing to tell you something about her. Details are as follows.组织组织第第2段：段：【作文重点作文重点18分分】【要点1】屠呦呦个人信息及事迹屠呦呦个人信息及事迹; 【表达】 Born in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province, Tu Youyou is a great scientist. she was admitted into Beijing Medical College in 1951. After gradutation,she devoted all her efforts to the research in treating malaria. With hard work and determination, she discovered artemisinin, which is of great significance for curing malaria. As a result, she became the first Chinese citizen to win a Nobel Prize in Medicine. 第第2段：段：【作文重点作文重点18分分】【要点2】你对她的评价你对她的评价 【表达】 As far as Im concerned, Tu Youyou is hard-working and modest. It is these personal qualities that helped her make such a big difference. All our Chinese are proud of her because her discovery is seen as a great contribution to the human health.第第3段：段：【结尾【结尾3分】分】【要点】希望你的介绍对他有所帮助，期待早日回复。希望你的介绍对他有所帮助，期待早日回复。 【表达】 I would appreciate it if my introduction could help you get a better knowledge of Tu Youyou. Im looking forward to your early reply.Dear Tom, Hows it going recently? Knowing that you are interested in Tu Youyou, Im very glad. With the excitement inside, Im writing to tell you something about her. Details are as follows. Born in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province, Tu Youyou is a great scientist. she was admitted into Beijing Medical College in 1951. After gradutation,she devoted all her efforts to the research in treating malaria. With hard work and determination, she discovered artemisinin, which is of great significance for curing malaria. As a result, she became the first Chinese citizen to win a Nobel Prize in Medicine. As far as Im concerned, Tu Youyou is hard-working and modest. It is these personal qualities that helped her make such a big difference. All our Chinese are proud of her because her discovery is seen as a great contribution to the human health. I would appreciate it if my introduction could help you get a better knowledge of Tu Youyou. Im looking forward to your early reply. Hows it going recently? Known that you are interested in Tu Youyou, Im very glad. With the excite inside, Im writing to tell you something about her. Details are as follows. Born in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province, Tu Youyou is a great scientist. she is admitted into Beijing Medical College in 1951. After gradutation,she devoted all her efforts the research in treating malaria. 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