漫画作文之审题.ppt
Some Background Information2015江苏高考说明江苏高考说明书面表达：书面表达：要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇要求考生根据所给情景用英语写一篇150个单词个单词左右的短文。情景的形式包括左右的短文。情景的形式包括图表、图画图表、图画、提纲、提纲、信函、短文等。考生应能：、信函、短文等。考生应能：（1）根据特定的语境）根据特定的语境准确使用英语语法准确使用英语语法，选用，选用恰当的词汇恰当的词汇；（2）使用一定的句型、词汇，）使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯清楚、连贯地传地传递信息和表达思想。递信息和表达思想。Some Background Information审题，就是在写作文之前，对给定的作文题审题，就是在写作文之前，对给定的作文题目进行分析和思考，以目进行分析和思考，以准确理解题意，明确准确理解题意，明确题目要求题目要求，即，即弄清文章要求写什么和怎样写弄清文章要求写什么和怎样写，避免写出偏离题意和文不对题的文章来。，避免写出偏离题意和文不对题的文章来。审题是完成各类作文的关键性步骤审题是完成各类作文的关键性步骤。且审题。且审题不细，下笔千言，离题万里，文章就成了一不细，下笔千言，离题万里，文章就成了一页废纸。页废纸。Steps of developing a composition ：Step one：analyze the theme(审题审题) Step two：list the outline(列提纲列提纲) Step three：choose words and make sentences(选词组句选词组句)Step four：form a composition(连句成篇连句成篇)Step five：review and correct(复查纠错复查纠错) Attention ：make your composition as neat as possibleQuestions:How to find out the theme?How many elements should we take into consideration?Analysis of an example请根据你对以下图的理解，以“Playing a trick or working hard”为题，用英语写一篇作文。 你的作文应包括以下内容： 1. 简要描述该图的内容； 2. 概述你对该图中做法的理解； 3. 举例说明该图对你的启示。 注意： 1. 可参照图画适当发挥； 2. 作文词数150左右； 3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。 headline/title picture exaggeration: association wordsinsideoutsidetricklife1.看标题看标题(the headline)，标题就是漫画的眼睛。标题就是漫画的眼睛。 2.看画面看画面(the picture/cartoon)，注意画面上的每一注意画面上的每一个个“要素要素”。3.看夸张处看夸张处(the exaggeration)，夸张之处往往就是夸张之处往往就是寓意所在。寓意所在。4.看联系看联系(the association)，找准分析角度与现实生找准分析角度与现实生活联系起来。活联系起来。5.看文字看文字(some words)，图中的文字说明和要求可图中的文字说明和要求可以帮助提炼要点。以帮助提炼要点。How to find out the theme?How many elements should we take into consideration?Attention: 1.Please examine all the details included in the picture.2.Sometimes we cannot find all the elements discussed above.Lets practisePlease find out the theme reflected in the following cartoons.Requirements: Use short but correct sentences to explain the cartoon to reveal the theme.Picture1请认真观察下面的漫画，简要描述漫画内容，并根据你对该漫画的理解，结合学习实际，谈谈自己的思考和看法。参考词汇：参考词汇：缸：缸：vat；漏出来：漏出来：leak out；漏洞：漏洞：loopholeWe should pay attention to the mistakes we have made and the holes we have in our study.Parents are desperate to help their children make academic achievements.Picture2My dear son, you are bound to be the second Newton!Parents attitudes may influence childrens social values.Picture3Picture3Protect animals.No buying, no killing.Picture4Money cant buy everything.Health is the best wealth.Picutre5Consolidation: 大家拿到图片漫画类作文，首先 审题,判断感情是褒义还是贬义,其次按照图片描述、联系生活、个人见解三步来谋篇。Presentation of some students compositionsPlease assess the three paragraphs.Requirements: Find out the writing problems concerning the theme.要求：读上图，联系生活实际，发表自己的感想，写一篇150字的作文。 (1) Each child wants to support parents by himself rather than share with other brothers or sisters. What causes this phenomenon is their parents possession. They are eager to get more things from their parents without sharing with others. So there is no harmony in the family.要围绕主题展开合理的想象，切忌游离要围绕主题展开合理的想象，切忌游离于主题展开不着边际的联想或感想。于主题展开不着边际的联想或感想。偏题偏题Paragraph 2Paragraph 1(2) The picture shows that the young arent willing to look after their parents so they are playing a football match about the question “who will look after their old father?”第一段描述漫画时画面中有助于主题的信息第一段描述漫画时画面中有助于主题的信息都要表达出来。不要过于简单，评论性的话都要表达出来。不要过于简单，评论性的话可以放在描述之后。可以放在描述之后。描述图片描述图片太简单太简单（3）There is a common phenomenon in the society. The oldest son sends the old father to other brothers or sisters. However, what makes the father sad is that the second and third son dont accept him. At the same time, the little daughter also refuses to look after her father.表达时应将重点放在所反映的主题上，表达时应将重点放在所反映的主题上，不要想到什么就表达什么，要言简意不要想到什么就表达什么，要言简意赅，切忌罗嗦。赅，切忌罗嗦。太罗嗦太罗嗦一般来说，漫画的体裁多为夹叙夹议，一般来说，漫画的体裁多为夹叙夹议，时态可用一般现在时或现在完成时。人时态可用一般现在时或现在完成时。人称多为第三人称。称多为第三人称。 一篇一篇好好的英语漫画作文的英语漫画作文 What should you pay attention to?仔细仔细审题审题准确准确立意立意规范规范行文行文整洁整洁书写书写生词：生词：hospital discharge出院出院 Study the following picture and write an essay entitled “Health Care”. In the essay you should 1)Describe the picture and interpret its meaning. 2)Give your opinions on the phenomenon. Study the following picture and write an essay entitled “Lonely Old People”. In the essay you should 1)Describe the picture and interpret its meaning. 2)Give your opinions on the phenomenon.
