2014中考英语写作讲座 (2).ppt

金石中学金石中学 邓艳蕾邓艳蕾一一、时事新闻，国家政策，家乡变化。、时事新闻，国家政策，家乡变化。二二、健康问题：学生不爱吃学校的午饭，常到校、健康问题：学生不爱吃学校的午饭，常到校 外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。三三、关于环境保护问题、关于环境保护问题 How to protect/save our environment/world? 四四、语言学习：世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经、语言学习：世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经 成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直 在求索的问题在求索的问题 。五五、写人记事篇：、写人记事篇：My favorite teacher 六、旅游和介绍地方篇六、旅游和介绍地方篇七、新生事物评价：汽车、电脑、手机七、新生事物评价：汽车、电脑、手机八、梦想和未来八、梦想和未来 九、烦恼篇九、烦恼篇十、社会准则，公共道德十、社会准则，公共道德 English Day!Lets practice writing English!Writing is as important as speaking!英语写作六字诀英语写作六字诀审审列列写写查查赏赏评评英语写作训练六字诀英语写作训练六字诀定内容定内容定语法定语法定句型定句型开头开头主体主体结尾结尾打草稿打草稿誊写誊写要点要点 人称人称 时态时态 句型句型 拼写拼写 字数字数 标点标点 自评自评互评互评师评师评学生作文评价表学生作文评价表评价项目评价项目（共（共1010分）分）评价要点评价要点分值分值评价形式评价形式备注备注 自评自评同同伴伴评评师评师评符合题意符合题意内容完整内容完整（4分）分）要点齐全要点齐全4少少1个要点个要点3少少2个要点个要点1语意连贯语意连贯符合逻辑符合逻辑（2分）分）要点顺序合理要点顺序合理2部分要点顺序合理部分要点顺序合理1要点顺序混乱要点顺序混乱1多种句型结构多种句型结构（2分）分）3种以上（含种以上（含3种）种）22种种11种种1词汇丰富词汇丰富（2分）分）60词以上词以上259-30词以下词以下129词以下词以下1-0总分合计总分合计备注备注如果以上评价要点都符合，但有语言错误，请按如果以上评价要点都符合，但有语言错误，请按1-2个知识点错误扣个知识点错误扣1分处理。分处理。We can not only download music but also see films on it. Besides, it is the quickest and cheapest way to get in touch with our friends by sending emails. one of the most important inventionsbecome more and more importantbecome necessary in our daily lifebecome a part of our lifeplay an important roleCould you please use a sentence to describe the importance of the computer?What do people often do on the computer?play _ emails_online listen to _films read _ download _do _computer gamessendchat/shopmusicseenews / magazinesmusic/pictures/informationhomeworkWhy do people often do that on the computer?get_get to know _ themselvesSending emails is the _ to get in touch with the friends.all kinds of informationthe latest newsrelaxquickest and cheapest wayplay computer games such a long time that What bad influence does the computer bring us?转折、连接句型转折、连接句型Computers are useful, butAlthough Computers are good for us, However, computers also bring lose interest in their lessonsbe bad for peoples eyespeoples health, get worse should doshouldnt doIts a good idea to doHow about doingWhat about doingWhy not doTry (not) to doI think, In my opinion.What advice would you like to give on using the computer properly?Computer is a tool, not a toy!电脑是工具，而不是玩具！电脑是工具，而不是玩具！2022-7-816 电脑在日常生活中越来越重要，我们通过电脑在日常生活中越来越重要，我们通过电脑不仅能了解世界各地的新闻，而且还电脑不仅能了解世界各地的新闻，而且还能能，但是，电脑也给我们带来了许多问，但是，电脑也给我们带来了许多问题。请你以题。请你以“Computers: Good or Bad?” 为题写一篇短文，分析电脑的利与弊，并提为题写一篇短文，分析电脑的利与弊，并提出你合理使用电脑的建议。（不少于出你合理使用电脑的建议。（不少于60词）词） 提示词语：提示词语：computer, important, daily life， the latest news, relax, however, problems, lose interest, health, thinkStep 1 定体裁 _Step 2 定语法 Step 3 素材串联_人称人称_时态时态_议论文议论文以第一人称为主以第一人称为主一般现在时一般现在时参考词汇和句型参考词汇和句型Step 4写作思路a.内容：电脑的重要性电脑的重要性 做什么做什么 为什么为什么 不利影响不利影响 给出建议给出建议b. 提纲提纲 ：开头：开头:点题。点题。 主体：利弊及建议。主体：利弊及建议。 结尾结尾:阐明自己观点。阐明自己观点。Beginning:_Body:_Ending:_Computers have become more and more important.1. We can not only , but also whats more,转折句型转折句型 However, computers also bring some problems.2. Some students spend all their free time Whats worse, 3. I think we should/ shouldntIn a word, we should learn to use computers properly.Look for your mistakes.一查要点是否齐全，字数是否符合要求。一查要点是否齐全，字数是否符合要求。二查语法是否有错误。二查语法是否有错误。三查拼写、大小写、标点是否正确。三查拼写、大小写、标点是否正确。Lets look atA model essay Computers have become more and more important in our daily life. We can not only get to know the latest news around the world but also send e-mails to our friends by using them. Whats more, after a busy day, we can relax ourselves by playing games. However, they also bring us problems. Some students spend so much time playing computer games that they have lost interest in their lessons. And their health is getting worse. So I think we can use them for a short while after finishing our homework. If we use them properly , they will become really helpful to us. 先读提示，弄清要点与格式；先读提示，弄清要点与格式；时态语态要当心，时态语态要当心，前后呼应要一致；前后呼应要一致；句子结构和搭配，句子结构和搭配，语言习惯莫违背；语言习惯莫违背；文章写好细检查，文章写好细检查，点滴小错别忽视；点滴小错别忽视；审审列列写写查查赏赏评评明确标准靠尝试。明确标准靠尝试。赏析互助共提高，赏析互助共提高，Homework: Practice writing another composition using the way we learnt today.现在社会普遍对现在社会普遍对90后有不同程度的误解，认后有不同程度的误解，认为他们自私、无礼为他们自私、无礼那么作为一名那么作为一名90后学后学生，你又是怎么看待这个问题的呢生，你又是怎么看待这个问题的呢?请结合你请结合你自己和周围同学的表现，分别列举至少三条自己和周围同学的表现，分别列举至少三条优点和两条不足之处进行描述。优点和两条不足之处进行描述。Welcome to my class Welcome to my class 邓邓 艳蕾艳蕾