第四高级中学高考英语专题训练短文改错、书面表达.docx

精品名师归纳总结资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -河南省信阳市第四高级中学2021 届高考英语专题训练：短文改错、书面表达（ 12）201* ·唐山联考 When I was a child, my mom was pushed me to study hard， 1. hoping I could get a chance to go to college. I experience2. pressure for the first time. I did that my mom expected3. because I didn't want to let her off. I was born to a poor4. peasant family, but I really knew life was not easy. All the5. things my mother did was the result of her hope that I could6. lead better life in the future. As the sayinggoes,“No pains7. no gains.”I was finally able to meet my mother expectations and8. have a chance to go tocollege. Thanks to my mother's push and the 9. pressure,I made it.Now, I no longerthinkpressureisa good thing.10. 答案与解析：1去掉其次个was此处不用被动语态，故was 余外。2experience experienced此处应用一般过去时态，与全文时态保持一样。3that what这里用 what 引导宾语从句并在从句中作宾语，that没有这种用法。4off down结合上下文可知此处意为“我不想让她扫兴”，故应用let sb. down表示“让某人扫兴”。5but and 或 so此处应为顺承关系而非转折关系，故将but 改为 and 或 so。6waswere此处主语为all the things，故应用were。7 better前加 alead a better life表示“过一种更好的生活”。 8mothermother's此处表示“达到了妈妈的期望”，故应用其全部格形式。 910goodbad依据上文可知此处是指“我不再认为压力是一件坏事”，故应将 good可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 1 页，共 11 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -改为 bad。*终止请你依据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈诚信honesty的作用。Honesty means always telling the truth and never cheating.Honesty is a kind ofcourage and responsibility， an invisiblepower and wealth.Honestywins trust， respect and friendship.So it pays to be honest.留意：无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语。内容必需结合你生活中的一个事例。文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称。词数为120 左右。参考范文One possible version：Honesty is a good virtue.If you are honest all the time， you'll be trusted and可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 2 页，共 11 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -respected by others.I have learned a lot from my experience of dishonesty.When I was in Senior One， I was so eager to get a high score that I cheated inthe exam.Although nobody discovered it，I had no sense of success at all.Instead，I felt guilty and it bothered me for a long time.What was worse， I was afraid that my friends would know about it and trust me no longer.So from then on， I have beendetermined never to be dishonest.Otherwise I will be looked down upon and lose all my friends.*终止第一套短文改错（共10 小题。每道题1 分，满分10 分）增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ）。并在其下面写出修改后的词。删除：把余外的词用斜线（/ ）划掉。修改：在错的词后划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。留意： 1每处错误及修改均仅限一词;2只答应修改10 处, 多者 从第 11 处起 不记分。Im a middle school student name Li Ming. I m writing to tell you something.Recently Inoticedmany of my classmatesoftengo to thecybercafenear our school.I went there too intheotherday.Iwas surprisingtosee many studentsplayingcomputergames, watching films orchat. Some students were even talking about love affairs online.Onmy opinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewhichwe canfindmuch useful informations.The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games.The Internetisgood ifwe make good use of it.Otherwise,itwillgiveus greatharm.So thelocal governmentshouldtakemeasure to make sure thatstudentsuse cybercafespositively.可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 3 页，共 11 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -参考答案I m a middle school student name Li Ming. Im writing to tell you something.1 namedRecently I noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near ourschool. I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students2,去掉 in3.surprisedplaying computer games, watching films or chat. Some students were even4 chattingtalking about love affairs online. 5.inOn my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful 5.in6.whereinformations. The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than 7 informationplace for games. The Internet is good if we make good use of it. Otherwise, it 8 a placewill give us great harm. So the local government should take measure to make9do10 measuressure that students use cyber cafes positively.*终止高考英语书面表达讲义：谈论文写作9 我国正提倡建设“节省型社会”，下图为某校两个学期用水、用电、用纸的情形。请对其进行简要分析，以“How to build an economized society”为题，写一篇作文，谈谈自己的想法。项目学期用电用水用纸上学期 80万元 62 万元 11 万元可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 4 页，共 11 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -下学期 95万元 73 万元 12 7 万元文章须包括以下要点：节电：准时关闭电灯、电脑等用电设备节水：顺手关闭水龙头。废水再利用 节纸：纸张再利用补充：自己日常生活所感所为留意：1词数： 100 120 词，短文标题、开头已给出，但不计入总词数。2内容可适当发挥，留意行文贯穿。How to build an economized society（东北三校）Our government is aiming to build an economized society It is everybody's duty to work hard to achieve this goal including us students*假如你是某英文报刊的通讯员，请依据以下表格以A BigForestFire终止为题，写一篇报道。 字数 100 左右 起火的点叛国西南部森林起火时间一九九二年十一月末火因一青工姻连续时间三个多星期参与救火人员数千名消防队员及当的居民伤亡人数九人死亡，约八十人伤受经济缺失至少两千万美元可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 5 页，共 11 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -影响震动全国参考范文A Big Forest FireA big forest fire broke out in the forest in the southwest of America at theend ofNovember of1992.The firewas causedby a young worker'ssmokingcigarettes.Thousands of firemenand local people tried to put out the fire, but they couldn't putit out in a short time. The fire lasted more than three weeksand was finally put out.In the fire nine people died and about eighty people werenjured. It caused a loss of at least twenty million US dollars.The fire shocked the whole country.*终止作文（ * ）假如你是高中三年级的同学李华，你在学校组织了一项“有苦恼向谁说”的调查活动。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信，反映相关情形。内容包括：调查结果 如下列图 、持相应想法的理由及你对调查结果的看法。留意： 1词数 100 左右。2信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Editor，I am a Senior Three student Recently we have carried out a survey-“To whom do you go when in trouble. ” The main findingsare as follows Yours sincerely，Li HuaOne possible version：可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 6 页，共 11 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -Dear Editor,I am a Senior Three studentRecently we have carried out a survey“ To whom do you go when in trouble."The main findings are as follows61 ofthestudentssurveyedselectfriendsor schoolmatesas theirideallisteners when they have trouble， the reason of which is that they are in the same age groupand have a betterunderstandingof each other Another22choose teachersand parents to talk toThey believe that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experiences,Nevertheless， there are also 17who dont share their troubles atall They say that their troubles are noneof othersbusiness Others find it hard to get along with othersItisnoteasy to reachdefiniteconclusionsbased on such a smallsurvey However， some generalcomments can be made Itseems clearfromtherespome thatsome students lackcommunicationwithothers ，and teachersand parentsneed toplaya more important role in their lives可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结*终止Yours sincerely,Li Hua可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结高考英语书面表达指导高考英语书面表达技巧如何提高书面表达的档次, 争取得高分甚至满分？不少同学们可能很不懂得: 考试时 , 写出的书面表达要点齐全, 表达也正确 , 可就是不知道为什么打不上高分。是啊, 为什么了？今日, 我们就来讨论如何解决这个问题。第一让我们来看近年来全国高考英语书面表达的评分标准 : 第五档（很好） : “掩盖全部主要内容 ; 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 ; 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误 , 但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致 ; 应用简洁的语句间的连接成分 , 使全文结构紧凑 ; 达到了预期的写作目的。” 可见 , 高考书面表达评分标准在语言的运用上对考生提出了更高的要求。也就是说在考查考生语言精确性的基础上, 进一步强调了用词的得体性、表达方式的多样性。假如同学们仅运用基础的词汇和基本的句型, 不能表达出较强的语言运用才能, 即使要点齐全, 表达没有语法错误 , 也不能给人一种含金量高的审美享受, 因此很难在考试的评分中得到较高档次。评分标准给我们传递了另外一个信息, 假如有意识的使用较高级词汇或复杂结构, 即使有些错误, 也不扣分 , 仍属于最高档次。因此要使一个平淡的文章变得丰富起来, 从而提高书面表达的档次。我认为同学们应着力于从以下三个方面来增强书面表达的成效。1. 学会使用较高级的词汇词汇反映你学问贮存量的多少, 也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。从评分标准可知, 运用高级的词汇对提高书面表达的分数至关重要。大家先来看下面这些句子:1Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable. Thanks to the good weather,our journey was comfortable. 2We all think he is a great man.We all think highly of him.3Suddenly I thought out a good idea. .came upon.可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 7 页，共 11 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -A good idea occurred to me./A good idea suddenly struck me. 4The students there neednt pay for their books.Books are free for the students there. 5As a result the plan was a failure. The plan turned out to be a failure.(6) When she heard he had died,she went pale with sorrow. At the news of his death,she went pale with sorrow.(7) She went to Austria in order to study music.She went to Austria for/with the purpose of studying music. 8When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.2. 学会使用较丰富的句式在整篇文章中, 防止只使用一两个句型, 要敏捷运用各种语法结构, 运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少, 从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。例如:(1) When he arrives,please give me an e-mail.（使用 v.-ing形式）On his arriving/arrival,please give me an e-mail.(2) To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.That the little girl knows so many things surprises him./It surprises him that the little girl knows so many things.(3) Though Im weak,I ll make the effort.使用倒装句Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.(4) He did not know what had happened untilhe had read the news inthe newspaper.使用强调句型 It was.not until. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. Not untilhe had read the news inthe newspaper did he know what had happened.5I passed the physics exam because of your help.（使用虚拟语气） I could not have passed the physics exam but for your help. If you had not helped me,I could not have passed the physics exam.(6) She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.用过去分词 Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.(7) They sang and laughed as they went back to school.使用 v.-ing形式 Singing and laughing,they went back to school.8I won t believe what he says.（使用状语从句）No matter what he says,I wont believe.(9) If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.（使用并列句）Study hard and youll make rapid progress.(10) He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.使用倒装可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 8 页，共 11 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -句No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.*终止2.正文Although the popular belief is that, a current new / recent study survey/ poll / investigation indicates shows / demonstrates thatCommon sense tells us thatThe increasechange/failure/successinmainlylargely/partlyresults from arises from / is because ofThe increasechange/failure/successinisdue toowingto / attributable to the fact thatMany people would claim thatOne may attribute ascribe / owe the increase decrease / change to, but is not by itself an adequate explanation.One of the reasons given foris thatWhat is also worth noticing is thatThere are many different/ several/ a number of/ a varietyofcauses reasons for this dramatic marked / significant growth change /decline / increase in .First,Second,Finally,There is no evidence to suggest thatWhy are is / do / did. For one thing,For another,可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 9 页，共 11 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -Another reason why I dispute the above statement is thatIt gives rise to lead to / bring / create a host of problems consequences.There are numerous reasons why, and I shall here explore only a few of the most important ones.Itwillexerthave/ produceprofoundfar-reaching/ remarkable/ considerable/ beneficial / favorable /undesirable / disastrous effect influence onA multitude of factors could account for contribute to / lead to / result in/ influence the change increase / decrease / success/ failure / development inIn 1999, it increased rose /jumped /shotupfrom 5 to 10 percent of the total to 15 percent / by 15 percent.By comparison with 1998, it decreased dropped / fell from 10 to 5 percent to 15 percent / by 15 percent.It account for 15 percent of the total.There were 100 traffic accidents in April, and increase of 5 percent in a five-month period.By 1999, only less than / more than / almost / about / over / as many as threequarters40 percentof/ one outof five/one infourcollegepopulationgraduates/ housewives as against as compared with last year 1998 preferred to likedPassage 2Today I showed some foreign friend around our city.1. We started off in car from the Friendship Hotel at 8:00 a. m.2.