（整理版高中英语）高考英语书面表达0204开放式练与评（2）.doc

高考英语书面表达02-04：开放式练与评2练评二试题来源省石庄高级书面表达指导与练习请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数150左右In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.讲 评该题选自海定区第一次模拟考试的开放式作文，但是，我们对作为的考生的要求是作文词数要到达150左右。该题借助一幅漫画，让学生表达自己对画面中内容的理解。在观察、理解试题的前提下，从不同角度，展开想象，表达自己的观点。一、描图仔细看图，搞清漫画所给我们的重要信息：通过图中河上的小船上的人拿着望远镜、船上空着的鱼网和船边游着的鱼，我们可以得出以下重要的信息：1.有个打渔人乘着小船正在用望远镜找鱼；2.他很努力地找，但却一无所获；3.他没有先观察自己的身边，否那么他就能轻松的发现鱼群了。在描述漫画内容时，考生要注意用自己比拟熟悉的词汇、句型对画面内容进行简明、清楚地表达。译出要点注意多重表达1.有个打渔人乘着小船正在用望远镜找鱼。A man on a boat is searching for some fish with a telescopeA fisherman on a boat is seeking fish with a telescope.A man on a boat is trying to search for fish with great effort through a telephone.The major character on a boat, using a telescope, is struggling to search for some fish.A man on a boat , using a telescope, wants to find with great effort if there are some fish distantly.2.他很努力，但却一无所获。Hard as he attempts, he has gained nothing.Hard as he tries, his efforts do not pay off.Although he attempts hard, his efforts are all in vain/useless.Although he works very hard, he has got nothing.However hard he works, he fails to find any fish.3.他没有先观察自己的身边，否那么他就能轻松的发现鱼群了。He doesnt first observe the circumstance around him otherwise he is able to find a school of fish swimming nearby.A school of fish is swimming just nearby, but he completely ignores/neglects them.He doesnt find a school fish swimming nearby because he doesnt first observe the circumstance around him.If he first observed the circumstance around him, the fish swimming nearby should be discovered easily.A school of fish is swimming just nearby, but he completely turns a blind eye to them. 连句成篇注意加过渡词语和过渡句As is vividly described in the picture, a man on a boat , using a telescope, wants to find with great effort if there are some fish distantly. However hard he works, he fails to find any fish, for the net is still empty. Amusingly, it happens that a school of fish is swimming just nearby, but he completely turns a blind eye to them.In the picture, a man on a boat is searching for some fish with a telescope. However, his efforts do not pay off, for the net is still empty. Amusingly, a school of fish is swimming just nearby, but he completely ignores them.The cartoon portrays a vivid picture in which there is a boy, a boat, an empty net, and a school of fish. To be more specific, the major character, using a telescope, is struggling to search for some fish, neglecting the ones swimming around him. Ironically, his efforts do not pay off simply because of his wrong aim and attitude.二、解(议)图解(议)图就是解读：漫画折射出什么生活现象， 给人以 什么启示。从不同角度去看，对漫画就有不同的解读。但是只要我们联系现实生活，找到与画面主旨相对应的现实素材展开联想来解读这幅漫画的意义及其寓意即漫画折射出的生活现象以及给人们的启示。从画面与现实的“链接中，确定话题及立意的方向。确定好立意之后，先写出主题句，再展开议论。议论要联系实际，摆事实，讲道理。只要是逻辑合理，立意可以是多样的。比方：1.不要好高骛远； 2.想成功，从小事做起；3.有的人花更多的时间在寻找，所以错过了很多事而一事无成；4.粗心就会失去很多时机；5.应该去踏实做事而不是观望；6.立足脚下；等等。但是不管怎么立意，都要注意在立意过程中尽量要贴近题意，领会出题者的意图。从图中我们不难看出最贴近此题题意的立意为：不要好高骛远，目标要切合实际。1.主题句：不要好高骛远，目标要切合实际。What the picture conveys is that we should never aim too high, neglecting the readily attainable goal.What the story tries to convey is that we high school students should not set a goal out of our reach, ignoring the attainable and accomplishable goal.The message conveyed in the picture is clear. That is, when we set a goal, we should not aim too high, but within our reach.The picture conveys us a message that we should set an impractical goal instead of one out of our reach.2.展开议论：联系实际，摆事实，讲道理If the man stopped focusing on the distant waters and looked around, the fish near the boat would be an easy harvest for him. This is not uncommon in our daily life. When we aim to build one ridiculously large project, we complete nothing. When we aim for a small goal, we complete it. Lets be more practical.The boy would harvest more with less hardship only if he abandoned the distant goal and turned back to focus on the fish around the boat. Such phenomenon seems fairly common in our daily life. Sometimes, we teenagers tend to stick to a target which is beyond our grasp when faced with problems, which will surely lead us to a wrong way and finally in failure.In reality, not only will an impractical goal mislead us, but also keeps us away from victory. This kind of phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays among the younger generation. Owing to the anxiety for achievement, we frequently ignore the consideration of surroundings and reach for what is beyond our grasp, which eventually causes failure. On the contrary, as long as we work out a practical scheme before taking action, the target should be beaten more conveniently. 三、圆图所谓圆图就是结尾：要求考生结合描图、解议图的内容，再申主旨，力求使文章完整、有力。最终使结尾起到升华观点，画龙点睛的作用。All in all, it is an appropriate aim and realizable plan that form the basis of success. Only in this way can our dream come true.In conclusion, it is highly recommended that practical aim be set in our life. Only when we realize the great importance of it can we lead a successful life.参考答案一As is vividly described in the picture, a man on a boat , using a telescope, wants to find with great effort if there are some fish distantly. However hard he works, he fails to find any fish, for the net is still empty. Amusingly, it happens that a school of fish is swimming just nearby, but he completely turns a blind eye to them.What the picture conveys is that we should never aim too high, neglecting the readily 参考答案二The cartoon portrays a vivid picture in which there is a man, a boat, an empty net, and a school of fish. To be more specific, the major character, using a telescope, is struggling to search for some fish, neglecting the ones swimming around him. Ironically, his efforts do not pay off simply because of his wrong aim and attitude.What the story tries to convey is that we high school students should not set a goal out of our reach, ignoring the attainable and accomplishable goal. The man would harvest more with less hardship only if he abandoned the distant goal and turned back to focus on the fish around the boat. Such phenomenon seems fairly common in our daily life. Sometimes, we teenagers tend to stick to a target which is beyond our grasp when faced with problems, which will surely lead us to a wrong way and finally in failure.In conclusion, it is highly recommended that practical aim be set in our life. Only when we realize the utter importance of it can we lead a successful life.同步练习In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.参考答案一In the picture, a man is rowing a boat with great difficulty. However, the water in the river is too shallow for the boat to move on. Obviously, it is difficult to move the boat no matter how hard he tries. The picture tries to convey the message that it is important to build a solid foundation if we want to succeed. We can learn this lesson in real life. Take study for example. If we dont have basic knowledge and essential ability, we may fail to achieve our goals even if we work hard. Just like the man in the picture, he cant move forward as expected because water is not deep enough for the boat. Therefore, a good foundation is the key to success.参考答案二As can be seen from the picture, a man is trying really hard to move the paddles to make his boat go ahead. However, he actually is stuck there since the river is too shallow for the boat to move on. I think the picture conveys the message that we should find proper ways according to the situations when faced with problems. The man in the picture doesnt consider the depth of the river so he chooses a wrong way to move the boat and end up making effort in vain. Similarly in or solve problems more efficiently. *结束