高考备考写作专题三段式作文法.docx

精品名师归纳总结资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -学习好资料欢迎下载可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结重点诠释 ：写作专题1三段式作文法可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结所谓三段式就是将一篇书面表达按三段的写作模式谋篇布局。就整体篇章结构而言，如何把握较大的写作空间，三段式的写作模式为正确挑选。三段式的模式写法通常为：1 第一段开门见山，提出要解决的问题或观点，或者把时间，的点，人物和主要大事准时点出。2 其次段要摆出事实或提出论据，或者把事情进展的经过具体写出来。3 最终一段，得出结论或理由。留意： 要学会使用过渡词。过渡词如同“桥梁”和“粘合剂”。恰当的使用过渡词可防止结构松散，层次分明，表意不清等弊端，使文章条理清晰，文字连贯流畅。常用的过渡词有：递 进 型 ：also,andbesides,whatsmore,moreover,furthermore,inaddition, even, whatsworse,worse still, to make matters worse, not onlybut also 等。说明型： that is to say, in other words, or ， namely,if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等。转折型： however,but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the contrary,on the other hand等。列举型： firstlysecondlyfinally,（ on the one hand, on the other hand）, （ for one thing, for another ） 等举例型： for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, takefor example 等。因 果 型 ： becauseof,since,nowthat,thanksto,dueto;thus,therefore,asa resultconsequence,sothat,so that 等。让步型： though, although, in spite of, despite等。次序型： firstnextand thenfinally, firstthenafter thatfinally等。并列型： and, bothand, or, eitheror, as well as,等时间型： afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/on doing, hardlywhen, no soonerthan 等总结型： in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion等见解型： in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned ， I m sure 等条件型 ：if, as long as,so long as, on condition that , unless等可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 1 页，共 8 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -学习好资料欢迎下载写作典例：假设你是李越，你的加拿大笔友Steve 来信说，他和他的一些同学正在学中文，请你举荐两本学中文的词典。依据下表供应的信息，请你给他写一封回信。收词英汉词典18000（英语）新华字典10000（字）20000 （汉语）价格52 元11 元特点大量例子，用法说明，适合初学者中国最常用的汉语字典留意： 1。词数： 100 左右。2参考词汇：举荐recommend; 英汉词典The English-Chinese Dictionary ECE;新华字典Xinhua Dictionary XD Dear Steve,可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结-Yours Li Yue可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结分析：此篇书面表达属于实物说明文，其篇章结构可按三段式进行写作。本文的第一段，可用直接的表达 “ I m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese”.正文即可作为其次段， 其主要内容是对两本词典的一些介绍。 终止语即可作为第三段。 应将两本词典的特点表达精确，以便加拿大笔友 Steve 作出合理挑选。表达时，文章的基本时态可考虑用一般现在时。范文：Dear Steve,I m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.I d liketo recommend the followingtwo dictionaries.TheEnglish-Chinese Dictionaryis really a good one for beginners. It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words, besides plenty of examples, it has many notestelling you how to use a word. Xinhua Dictionary isthe most popular Chinese dictionary, and it has a vocabulary fo 10,000 words. It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese. Of the two, ECD is more expensive. It costs 52 yuan,and XD costs 11 yuan.Please let me know if you want me to buy one for you.Yours, Li Yue可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 2 页，共 8 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -学习好资料欢迎下载针对练习 ：（用三段式表达，留意用过渡词）1 目前，的球面临水资源危机，请依据一下提示写一篇100词左右的短文。1 ） 人们以为淡水是取之不尽的2 ） 实际上淡水是特别紧急的3 ） 人类应当怎样办Global Shortage of Fresh WaterMany people believe that the world s supply of fresh water will never be used up. They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use. Such anopinion leads to a shocking waste of water.As a matter of fact, the earth is short of fresh water. Furthermore, with the rapid growth of the worldpopulation,the risingdemand for waterby industry,and the serious pollutionof our surroundings, the world is facing the ganger of running out of fresh water. Actually, in some big cities, fresh water can not meet the daily needs.Therefore, to find new ways to save water is an urgent task. First, we should pass strict laws to control any waste of water. Second, scientists must work even harder to purify sea water, and try to find substitute to reduce the use of fresh water.写作典例：暑假即将来临， 你班同学就假期方案进行争论，提出了不同看法，请依据提示写一篇英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。优点缺点呆在家中花费少，舒服便利不能亲自明白外界外出旅行增长学问，开阔眼界。花费多，旅途不便留意： 1。词数 120 左右（不含已写好部分）2短文必需包括表中所列要点，可依据内容分段表述。3可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。 4参考词汇：眼界horizonview可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 3 页，共 8 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -学习好资料欢迎下载2这几年，“考生该不该复读”这个话题始终为社会各界所关注。下表是你班同学争论的结果，请你给英文报社写一封信，客观介绍讲座情形，并简要阐述自己的观点。多数同学认为少数同学认为1.不该复读1.应当复读2.对应届生不公正2.可以考上好高校3.增加家庭经济负担3.有利于将来就业4.精神压力大4.上何种高校是人生重要转折点要求：1.信的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 2.词数：120 左右 .Dear Editor:I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether students retake classes after failing the college entrance examination.Yours truly,Li HuaDear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether students retake classes可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 4 页，共 8 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -学习好资料欢迎下载after failing the college entrance examination.Opinions are various on the question. Many students are against the idea of retaking classes. They think it unfair for the students who take the exam for the first time. Besides, it also adds the familyburden. So many of them suffer mental pressure as well as economic problems. Others thinkthat it can be done because through one more year of hard study, they can make better preparations and may get a chance to enter their ideal universities. After all, the kind of university they enter, an important turning point in life, will directly affect their future employment.However, I think, this depends on different situations. If one student has no chance to be admitted to one university, maybe he can choose to retake classes.Yours truly,Li Hua3 最近几年越来越多的高校生加入打工的队伍，请你结合下表，就这一现象写一篇短文。1依据最近调查，约25的高校生打零工现象2在暑假，这一数字将增至72 3高校生常做的零活有：家教、服务员、售货员等4想赚钱支付一部分日益增长的学费缘由5想经济上独立，买一些自己想买的东西6意义7内容由考生自己拟定8留意：1词数： 120 左右。文章的开头已为你写好。2参考词汇：调查 survey;家庭老师tutor;学费 tuition;经济的 economically;视野 outlookAccording to a recent survey, Accordingto a recent survey, about 25 percent ofcollegestudents have a part-time job During summer vacation, this figure will increase to 72 percent. College students are working as tutors, waiters or salesmen.Why do they want part-time jobs ？ First ， they want to earn money to help cover the increasingly higher college tuition. Second, they hope to be economically independent and buy whatever they want. Third,In my opinion, by doing part-time jobs, college students can gain some society experienceand broaden theiroutlook.What s more, part-timejobscan providethemwitha valuable chance/opportunity to know the outside world. So its of great significance for college students todo part-time jobs.4最近，网上绽开一场关于“教科书是否要循环使用”的辩论。假如你是Li Hua，请你向报社写信谈谈你自己的一些想法。要点如下：可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 5 页，共 8 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -学习好资料欢迎下载（1.）据说我国的教科书寿命一般是半年，而美国就是五年。这说明铺张严峻。（2.）我国有两亿两千万同学，每年要用三十亿本教科书，这就需要消耗一千一百万棵树木。假如将教科书的寿命在延长一年的话，那么将节约好多树木。（3.）很多贫困家庭的同学买不起教科书，假如将不用的教科书赠给他们岂不是更好？（4.）你的看法（至少两点）。 要求：（ 1）.语句通顺，结构合理。（ 2） .开头和结尾已给出，不记入总词数（字数：150 左右）（ 3） .参考词汇： lifespan寿命Dear Editor,Recently there has been an argument about the reuse of textbooks on the internet.Best wishes,Yours truly, Li HuaOne possible version: Dear Editor,Recently there has been an argument about the reuse of textbooks on the internet. I am writing to talk about it.As we all know, the average lifespan of a copy of a textbook is only half a year in our country while in America it is five years or so, which shows we waste too much. There are 220 million students consuming 3 billion textbooks each year, so about 11 million trees are needed to produce them. If the lifespan of textbooks could be extended for one more year, a large number of treescould be saved each year. In addition, many children from poor families can t afford textbookWill it be good if we can afford them to reuse the books.So I suggest that all of us should encourage students to take care of their textbooks, and not only does it do good to us but also to nature. At the same time, this can also help us develop awareness of thriftiness.5 2021 上海高考英语卷写作题：你班将组队参与学校组织的集体舞竞赛（group dancingcompetition） , 班长期望大家积极参与。对此谈谈你的看法。可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 6 页，共 8 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -学习好资料欢迎下载你的文章必需包括以下内容：l.你是否会参与竞赛。2.你做出该打算的具体理由。Version 1:A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.Version 2:Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school. But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.There are a number of reasons for my decision. First and foremost, as the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, study is the top priority for me. Participating in the group dancingcompetition has to give way because it might take me too much time. What s more, without anyexperience of dancing, I don t think I can be a good dancing partner. I am apforaoirddmanycingskills will probably spoil the performance of the whole class. In this case, it s better for spectator cheering for my classmates.For these reasons, it seems more appropriate for me to watch the competitionthan to dance myself.从写作方法来说，考生可以依据高考谈论文写作的一般思路将整个文章分为三段来写。第一段是引言段，引出两点：topic 和 thesis。 Topic 就是文章的话题，在这篇文章中就是集体舞竞赛这个事情。而 thesis 就是指全文的中心内容，在本文中就是自己是否参与竞赛。留意英语写作需要开门见山的引出主题。有些考生到全文结尾的时候才说明自己参与或不参加的态度就是不对的，必需在开头就说明自己是否参与这个竞赛，然后再论述理由。例如在例文中， A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls oneverybody to take an active part in it. 或 者 Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school.都是用可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 7 页，共 8 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -学习好资料欢迎下载来引出 topic 的句子。 而引出 thesis 的句子就是While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.或者 But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.其次段是论证段，也是全文的重心所在，主要是表达自己的理由，即为什么参与或者不参与这个竞赛。 一般来说， 对于一篇 120150words 的文章来说， 只要写两个理由就够了， 每个理由之后都有一个进一步的细节阐述，这样整体的字数就差不多达标了。例如， 在论述自己参与竞赛的缘由时，范文中写了两点：1.可以放松自己。2.可以展现自己的舞蹈水平并 为班级做奉献。 每个观点又都有自己的支撑句，例如对于 “放松自己 ”的支撑句就是用一个谚语来引出relaxation 的重要性。而对于“展现自己的才华”，支撑句是自己学舞蹈学了五年以 上并且舞蹈技艺很好。第一个分论点的论证方式是先提出总的观点，再进行论证， 是演绎法的推理。其次个分论点的论证方式是先有理由，再有观点，是归纳法的推理。最终一段是总结段，此题目在总结段的时候可以写的略微简洁一点，例如以上两篇范文，最终的结尾都很简洁，能够总结全文的中心即可。所用的句型也可以新东方高考写作教材上找到原形。可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 8 页，共 8 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载