公开课日记写作导学案.doc
九年级英语导学案 编写人：邹明玉 审阅人： 学案编号：English writingkeeping a diary九年级 班 组别 姓名： 等级教师寄语：Ask much, know much. (问得多，懂得多。)一、学习目标1.学会作文审题，构建文章结构。 2.能够根据要求列出关键词，连词成句。 3.通过添加主题句和适当的连接成分等，学会组句成篇，写一篇日记。二、学习过程 Step 1 Warming up Ask two questions.1).Where did you go on vacation? _2).Have you ever been to Yunnan?_ Step 2 Before writingAsk:1)When did you go to Kunming? _ 2)How did you get to Kunming?_ 3)What did you do there?_Step 3根据图片内容填空，完成下面这篇文章，一空一词。Last summer vacation, My parents and I _ the train to Yunnan. The weather was _ and _. So we decided to Wild animal zoo . It was so _. When we got to the zoo, we _ many ugly tigers,cute and clever pandas, beautiful parrots and so on. _ 6:00pm, we _ rice noodles for dinner. Today I was tired _ happy. On the second day, We took the bus to Dali. First, we went to Lijiang. There are many shops there. People sell many things that I haven't seen before. On the third day, we went to Erhai. The sky is very blue. We _tea on the ship. We _ a good time in Yunnan.Step 4 Writing 根据所给单词短语，选择恰当的填空，完成下面这篇日记。hot and sunny tiredBeijing duck delicioustake some photos beautifulbuy something special interestinglearn something important August Wednesday, _ 20thToday the weather was _. I went to _. It was _. We _. I liked this place because _. For dinner we had _. It was _. In the evening, I felt really _. Its your turn now. What other places do you like to go? Please write them down. Wednesday, _ 20thToday the weather was _. I went to _. It was _. We _. I liked this place because _. For dinner we had _. It was _. In the evening, I felt really _. 三、课堂小结(3分钟) How to write an article? Step 1:Look carefully and find out the key words 仔细审题，找关键动词。 Step 2:Decide which tense to use 确定时态、人称。 Step 3:Make an outline 列提纲，以免遗漏要点。 Step 4:Check and correct mistakes 检查订正。 四、当堂写作(15分钟) Ann的峨眉之游 根据汉语提示，一个女孩Ann回忆从宜宾去四川成都峨眉山的旅游经历和感受，写一篇日记， 要求110词以上： On August 2nd：上午：7:00 起床 刷牙洗脸 7:30 吃牛奶和鸡蛋作为早餐 8:00 乘坐公交车去峨眉山 9:00 天气晴朗，攀登峨眉山，山上有很多猴子和各种树木，可观云海、日出等 六大奇观. 12:00 午饭吃牛肉、蔬菜和米饭 下午 ：4:00 去春熙路购物 晚上8:00 住蓝天宾馆 根据汉语意思，写关键短语： 7:00 起床 _ 刷牙洗脸 _ 7:30 吃牛奶和鸡蛋作为早餐 _ 8:00 乘坐公交车去峨眉山_ 下午，去春熙路购物_ 晚上8:00 住蓝天宾馆_ 写作指导： 1.本文为写日记，因此应用一般过去时态。应注意动词的过去式形式。 2.回顾一下在题中出现的短语，然后将这些短语组合成句子，按恰当的逻辑顺序排列在一起， 形成条理清晰的一段文字。 3.可根据旅行经历再加一些恰当想像的句子。 4.再次，阅读一遍短文，看有没有错误的句子。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 五、课堂自我总结 Gold tips(金点子): 1. 多用简单句，注意时态语态。 2. 化难为易，化繁为简。 3. 此路不通，绕道迂回。 4. 字迹工整，留好印象。 5. 卷面整洁。 六、教学反思：
