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Students worksheet湖南省浏阳市第一中学英语组 冯玉荣How to improve a chart writingExample：假如你是李华，最近你学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中一两个数据中反映的情况写出你的个人看法。标题和开头部分已给出，词数120左右Chart 1: 学生主要课余活动及所用时间Chart 2: 学生各项业余活动所占课余时间比例每天所用时间（分钟）After-school activities in our schoolRecently, I have done a survey about the daily average amount of time the students in my school spend on different after-school activities. Task 1: Revision：fill in the blanksThe chart/graph above shows/describes that From the chart/graph we can that can be seen from the chart/graph that. (正如) is shown/described in the chart/graph, (根据）the chart/graph,Task 2: Translate the following sentences.1. 我们学校的学生每天花96分钟做作业。The students in our school .2. 看电视占用了72分钟。Watching TV .3. 24分钟花在了电脑上。24 minutes .4. 学生花了10%的课余时间用电脑。The students spend their spare time the computer. 5. 锻炼身体只占用了课余时间的5%。Doing sports .Task 3: pair work: Proofreading-A first-time writing From Chart 1, we can learn that the students spend 96 minutes in doing homework. Watch TV takes up 72 minutes. They spend 36 minutes listen to music. 24 minutes are spent on the computer. They only spend 12 minutes on sports. Which is shown in Chart 2, the students only spend 5% their spare time on sports and they spend 30 percentage of their spare time on TV. I think they spend too much time on TV and too few time on sports. Thats not good for our healthy. I think the students should do more sports in their free time to build up their body. Task 4: Modification-Rewriting They spend 36 minutes listening to music. 24 minutes is spent on the computer. Tip: 用连词把两个简单句转换成并列句。They spend 36 minutes listening to music 24 minutes is spent on the computer. They only spend 12 minutes on sports. Tip: 句首用连接词，意思为“但是，然而” ; 用 “It takes sb.+ 一段时间+ to do.”句型改写句子。 , it . . the students only spend 5% of their spare time on sports and they spend 30 percent of their spare time on TV. Tip: 使用连接词，意思为“然而” 强调对比; 避免重复使用 spare. the students only spend 5% of their spare time on sports (然而，强调对比）they spend 30 percent (of the time) on TV. I think they spend too much time on TV and too little time on sports. Thats not good for their health.Tip: 很明显在课余时间很多学生更愿意看电视而不愿意做运动，这不利于健康; 定语从句 (很明显）that many students watch TV do sports after school, is not good for their health.（定语从句） I think the students should do more sports in their free time to build up their bodies. Tip: 句首加连接词表“因此”；I think 用其他表达；学生应充分利用课余时间做运动来锻炼身体。 (连接词表“因此”）， ,（I think 用其他表达） the students should (充分利用课余时间）to do more sports to build up their bodiesTask 5：Learn to write下面两幅图表反映的是最近调查你校学生的有关信息：学生人数百分比在校学生结构图 中学毕业生去向示意图写作要求请根据以上两个图表介绍你校在校学生结构情况和中学毕业生去向调查情况， 并谈谈你自己的毕业意向及理由。（讲话的开头和结尾已为你写好）。参考词汇： 职业学院：vocational college 外来务工人员：migrant workersLadies and gentlemen, Im Li Hua. Today, Im honored to share with you the survey in our school. Thats all. Thank you.Expressions & sentence patterns for reference百分比：percent of./ 分数（ one third of, three fifths of, one quarter of )/the majority of the studentstake up/occupy/account for percent (占百分之)选择：choose to do/plan to do/ intend to do/would like to do/prefer to do我认为：In my opinion, /To my mind, /From my point of view, /I hold the view that./As far as I am concerned,/Personally, I thinkLinking words：besides / whats more/ in addition / furthermore/ moreoverIn a word/ In short/ To sum up,Sentence patterns for reference参考句型It is obvious thatThere are 分数/百分数 who. There are 分数/百分数 doing 简单句+while（然而）+简单句简单句+and +简单句附：例题范文After-school activities in our school Recently, I have done a survey about the daily average amount of time the students in my school spend on different after-school activities. From Chart 1, we can learn that the students spend 96 minutes in doing their homework. Watching TV takes up 72 minutes. They spend 36 minutes listening to music and 24 minutes is spent on the computer. However, it takes them only 12 minutes to do sports. As is shown in Chart 2, the students only spend 5% of their spare time on sports while they spend 30 percent of the time on TV. It is obvious that many students prefer to watch TV rather than do sports after school, which is not good for their health. Therefore, I hold the view that the students should make good use of their free time to do more sports to build up their bodies.4
