【英语】高考英语漫画作文.pptx

PS：本资料由逗你学整理提供，我们的目标是用最小的力气学习！ 网页搜索： 手机应用商店搜索：逗你学 或者扫描下方二维码 收看免费的知识点视频，3分钟提高50分！高考其实可以更简单高考英语书面表达写作指导高考英语书面表达写作指导之之漫漫 画画 作作 文文( (议论类议论类) )20132013届届Difficulties?1. 读图读图2. 解意解意3. 谋篇谋篇读图读图1. 漫画的漫画的题目题目 眼睛眼睛2. 漫画的漫画的画面画面 细节细节3. 漫画的漫画的文字文字 观点观点4. 漫画的漫画的夸张夸张 寓意寓意读图读图题目题目 画面画面 文字文字 夸张夸张 读图读图The underwear is a funny way to look at how desperate parents get - trying to prevent children from seeing things they should not - and maybe underwear isnt a good thing to see either but a lot better than some of the materials on the Internet!夸张夸张解意解意1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度辨明褒贬，找准角度 夸奖褒扬夸奖褒扬 or 批评讽喻？批评讽喻？ 解意解意. 联系生活，明晰主旨联系生活，明晰主旨 Imagination! 解意解意注意注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切记要认真阅读！切记要认真阅读！谋篇谋篇3 parts:1) describe the picture2) interpret its meaning3) give your opinions about the phenomenonPart 1 Describe the pictureThe picture is talking about/showsThe picture is talking about/showsThe picture shows a common phenomenon.The picture shows a common phenomenon. The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.As the picture shows,As the picture shows,The picture above is about The picture above is about Lets practiseLets practise! !Describe the picture We can see in the picture that a child is burdened with heavy schoolbags as well as huge mental pressure. When he was a kid, he was expected to be able to go to a key elementary school, and later a key high school. And now he is expected to be admitted to a key university.Part 2 Interpret the pictureIt seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere.story is performed everywhere.The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection ofThe picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection ofThe picture indicates that weNowadays, it is a The picture indicates that weNowadays, it is a common phenomenon thatcommon phenomenon thatThis is a ironicalThis is a ironical( (讽刺的讽刺的) ) cartoon which describes cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon amongvividly a kind of common phenomenon amongPart 3 Give your opinions I think/believe that As far as Im concerned, In my opinion, From my point of view, might as well It is better/advisable to I consider it necessaryOnly in this way can.Only in this way can. must have to Do/DontPolish up your article!1. To use 1. To use linking wordslinking words if necessaryif necessary2. To use 2. To use complicated structurescomplicated structures if possible if possible 1. To use linking words1. To use linking words表示平行、对等或选择关系表示平行、对等或选择关系 as well as, together with, not onlybut also.as well as, together with, not onlybut also.表示转折关系表示转折关系 however, in spite of, neverthelesshowever, in spite of, nevertheless, otherwise, while, otherwise, while表示对比关系表示对比关系 on the contrary, rather than, on one handon the on the contrary, rather than, on one handon the other hand.other hand.表示因果关系表示因果关系 therefore, as a result (of), owing to, therefore, as a result (of), owing to, due to, thanks to. due to, thanks to. 表示时间、顺序关系表示时间、顺序关系 first, second , then, next, finally, first, second , then, next, finally, for one thing . for another, in the end, for one thing . for another, in the end, 表示递进、强调关系表示递进、强调关系 besides, whats more, in addition, to make matters besides, whats more, in addition, to make matters worse, above allworse, above all表示解释、说明关系表示解释、说明关系 such as, for example, for instance(such as, for example, for instance(例如例如), ), in other words, and so on in other words, and so on表示结论表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion on the whole, in conclusion1. To use linking words1. To use linking words2. To use complicated structures2. To use complicated structuresPeople suggest that the conference be put off. It is suggested that the conference be put off. It is suggested that the conference be put off. She walked out of the room and many students followed her.Followed by many students, she walked out of the room Followed by many students, she walked out of the room To his surprise, the little girl knew so many things. What surprised him was that the little girl knew What surprised him was that the little girl knew so many things. so many things. 被动语态被动语态非谓语动词非谓语动词 从句从句The couple was so curious about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.倒装倒装So curious was the couple about wild plants that So curious was the couple about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.they decided to travel to the forest.Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920.强调句强调句It was not until in 1920 that regular radio It was not until in 1920 that regular radio broadcasts began. broadcasts began. Many lives were saved because there were the efforts of firefighters.虚拟语气虚拟语气But for the efforts of firefighters, many lives would But for the efforts of firefighters, many lives would not have been saved.not have been saved.再叮嘱几句：再叮嘱几句：1. 保证三要素体裁、时态、人称正确保证三要素体裁、时态、人称正确体裁：议论文时态：一般现在时人称：第三人称. 避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误1)1)误解图意误解图意 大忌！大忌！2)不明寓意不明寓意 白写！白写！3)中心不明中心不明 混乱！混乱！再叮嘱几句：再叮嘱几句：1. 保证三要素体裁、人称、时态正确保证三要素体裁、人称、时态正确体裁：议论文人称：第三人称时态：一般现在时. 避免漫画类作文的一些常见错误避免漫画类作文的一些常见错误. 控制字数（没话说控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆）太啰唆）. 搞一精辟的结尾！搞一精辟的结尾！Enjoy this excellent ending!Enjoy this excellent ending! In my view, this phenomenon is no good to us, nor to our society. Its time that we took some measures to improve it. People living in the same zone can be organized to have some activities together. We should call on people to be friendly to each other. As a popular song says, “ If everybody gives a little love to each other, the world will become the sea of love.”Enjoy this excellent ending!Enjoy this excellent ending!From my point of view, reducing the childrens heavy burden requires efforts from the schools, the society as well as the parents. Education that breaks the rules of childrens development in body and mind is bound to fail. Thus, parents together with teachers should become active supporters of all-around character education and work closely with each other in guiding the students towards a balanced development. 一篇一篇好好的英语漫画作文的英语漫画作文 仔细仔细审题审题 准确准确立义立义 规范规范行文行文 整洁整洁书写书写Not good!Worse!Neat! 例：(2011江苏卷)下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家的妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。 你的短文应包含以下内容： 1描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等； 2结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想； 3举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。注意：注意：1. 可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。思路点拨：思路点拨：本文为看图作文，考查角度独到新颖(为家长减负)，主题是孝敬父母。描述图片内容时应使用第三人称，在写自己的感想和减负措施时应用第一人称。短文基本时态应为一般现在时。可按题目提供的内容来安排写作顺序。文章可分为三个部分：(1)描述图片内容；(2)自己的感想；(3)举例说明自己为家长减负可做的事情。后两个部分为开放性写作，考生可根据自己的生活体验来自由发挥。【参考答案【参考答案】 The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children. The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a days work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.【参考答案【参考答案】 All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But, totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return. Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so as to share mothers daily burden. The picture convinces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a “good” student. 高考作文分析高考作文分析遣词遣词三原则三原则 高考写作中的遣词可以遵循三原则：高考写作中的遣词可以遵循三原则：复杂原则，多变原则和温暖原则复杂原则，多变原则和温暖原则。1.复杂原则是指可以用一些复杂原则是指可以用一些“牛词牛词”来代替一些来代替一些“土词土词“ 比如说，比如说，“忙于做某事忙于做某事”，一般的说法是：，一般的说法是：be busy doing sth,使用复杂原则后，我们可以用使用复杂原则后，我们可以用be engaged in doing sth.;be absorbed in sth; be buried in sth 等。等。2.多变原则就是当文章中要写两处相同中文意思的词时，善于用不多变原则就是当文章中要写两处相同中文意思的词时，善于用不同的词或者词组代换，比如最后一段，两处写到同的词或者词组代换，比如最后一段，两处写到“努力努力”就可以使就可以使用不同的短语用不同的短语“spare no effect”和和“try ones best”。3.温暖原则就是，任何一个名词都可以用一个形容词，或者定语从温暖原则就是，任何一个名词都可以用一个形容词，或者定语从句，或者是同位语从句来修饰，比如这边的句，或者是同位语从句来修饰，比如这边的working mum,就比就比“mum”形象得多形象得多;任何一个动词或者形容词都可以由一个副词来修任何一个动词或者形容词都可以由一个副词来修饰，如：饰，如：“a little girl comes to greet her working mom happily”中的中的happily 就对该剧中的就对该剧中的come这个动词起到了温暖的这个动词起到了温暖的作用。作用。造句造句三套路三套路 书面表达中的句子也很讲技巧，可以遵循三套路：书面表达中的句子也很讲技巧，可以遵循三套路：适当拉长，英式思维，闪光句式适当拉长，英式思维，闪光句式。1.适当拉长，可以运用定语从句，并列结构，插入语等适当拉长，可以运用定语从句，并列结构，插入语等方式使得句子变得更加的丰满。方式使得句子变得更加的丰满。“In response ,the mom kneels down to show how thankful and delighted she feels .”这边的这边的“in response”就是一就是一个插入成分。个插入成分。2.英式思维，要做到不是一直以人作为主语，宁否定不英式思维，要做到不是一直以人作为主语，宁否定不肯定以及宁被动不主动等。如肯定以及宁被动不主动等。如 “Being a good daughter outweighs being a good student.” 就用就用了动名词做主语了动名词做主语3.闪光句式，就是用一些比较出彩的句式，比如闪光句式，就是用一些比较出彩的句式，比如“Totally engaged in my study ,I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels”。这个。这个句式中，运用到了非谓语动词，分词作状语的形式。句式中，运用到了非谓语动词，分词作状语的形式。逻辑逻辑八联系八联系 好的文章除了合理的篇章，出彩的字词，还好的文章除了合理的篇章，出彩的字词，还离不开好的逻辑，这个时候，新东方课堂上总结离不开好的逻辑，这个时候，新东方课堂上总结的八大逻辑词就派上了用场。比如说表示让步我的八大逻辑词就派上了用场。比如说表示让步我们可以用们可以用but, yet, however,转折转折 although, though, despite, in spite of;表示并列我们可以表示并列我们可以用用bothand, as well as, neithernor,递进：递进：in addition, besides, moreover,因果：因果：because of, due to, owing to, thanks to, on account of等词。等词。 很多同学提到高考英语写作都会谈虎色变很多同学提到高考英语写作都会谈虎色变,因为有无数的高考猛士都惨败在它的手下因为有无数的高考猛士都惨败在它的手下,失分很严重。其实高考英语英语写作并没失分很严重。其实高考英语英语写作并没有想象中的那么难，只要我们细心品题，有想象中的那么难，只要我们细心品题，精准的使用词和短语，恰到好处的套用句精准的使用词和短语，恰到好处的套用句型，合理的安排篇章，高分也不是特别的型，合理的安排篇章，高分也不是特别的遥远。当然高考英语写作想有质的飞跃，遥远。当然高考英语写作想有质的飞跃，还是需要大家在平时不断还是需要大家在平时不断积累积累的。的。 As can be seen in the picture, 图画内容. The picture tells us概括图片大意 The implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. To begin with, 揭示含义/原因/结果一. Second, 揭示含义/原因/结果二. In my opinion/ As for me, we should take some measures to deal with the problem. First we should具体措施一. Second, we must具体措施二. Only in this way can we solve the problem of 图画内容