2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习(七)饮食健康(共6页).docx

精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上2018年广州市中考英语作文专题复习（七）饮食健康一、相关话题饮食（Food and drinks）、卫生与健康（Hygiene and health）二、与专题相关的知识准备：1.相关单元：九年级上 Unit 6 Healthy diet；2. 相关词汇：高频词：menu, bread, milk, noodles, rice, potatoes, beef, vegetables, fruit, grains,        restaurant, hamburger, cola, healthy, unhealthy, waiter, traditional, service, knife, fork, contain, dish, 高频短语：restaurant review, order food, have dinner, fried food, stay away from, a glass of lemon tea, soft drinks, lose weight, medical examination, plenty of, treat oneself to , coffee with milk and sugar, chicken wings, different kinds of, change ones diet, fast food, be good for, be bad for;拓展词及词语：protein, dairy products, eating habits, servefood, recommend, regular 3. 经典句型：I have bread and eggs for breakfast.Its necessary to have a balanced diet.You should/ ought to/ You d better/ Why notWe should instead of Some people think that If you , you will can help youIts +adi.+for sb+to doHere is some advice.Try to order dishes with vegetables and low-fat meats. 4.参考谚语1) An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果，医生远离我。2) Health is better than wealth.健康胜于财富。3) Health is happiness.健康就是幸福。4) He who has health has hope.留得青山在，不怕没柴烧。 三、经典例题 (2012年广州中考题)你是学校英文报的小记者李华。请给你校初三学生写一封公开信，就如何保持考前健康提出建议。主要内容如下：（1）早睡早起，保持充足睡眠；（2）饮食均衡，少吃垃圾食品；（3）多做体育运动； （4）你的其他建议。注意：1.词数80左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Dear students,As we all know, good health is important for success in the exams, so I m writing to_Best wishes and stay healthy.                                                       Yours,                                                       Lihua                                                            1、审题：本文共有   4  个要点时态涉及  一般现在时 人称是 _第一人称_ 2、抓要点(我们)早睡早起和保持充足的睡眠（We should sleep early and get up early; have enough sleep;）(我们)饮食均衡 ( balanced diet);(我们)少吃垃圾食品( have less junk food)(我们)多做体育运动( do more exercise)3、连词成句主要使用句型1,2,5,8,9 12,使用谚语 2，3 4、连句成文与修改评分学生作文：Dear students,As we all know, good health is important for success in the exams, so Im writing to students who is studying in grade nine. Firstly, we should sleep and get up early, and its important to have enough sleep. Secondly, we should balance our diet, dont eat too many dim-sum. Thirdly, ding much exercise is very important .we can play basketball and badminton after school. Lastly, we can listen to music when we feel tired. It can relax ourselves.Best wish and stay healthy.点评：整篇文章行文流畅，调理清晰，并且对要点的描述到位，但是有拼写和简单的语法错误。要点拓展也可适当补充例子，尝试运用不同句子的表达。 5. 检查思路：完成作文自查表：1. 如果没有问题的，请在项目后打。2. 如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。项目 第一次自查第二次自查布局与内容要点  人称 时态、主谓一致  动词搭配、介词搭配   拼写错误   好词好句   分项分档评分表项目要素给分表内容:6分切合题意，体现要点6-55654.54-3.53-2.521.510有所发挥准确性:6分语  法6-5.554.54.54-3.53-2.521.510词  汇机械性：大小写，拼写和格式等错误流畅性:3分结构3-2.52-1.51.510.50000自评总分： _12_     (满分=6+6+3=15) 6.参考例文：     Dear students,As we all know, good health is important for success in the exams, so Im writing to tell you that during this period of time you need to get up early and go to bed early to ensure enough sleep.  As a saying goes “you are what you eat”, I suggest you have a balanced diet and avoid eating junk food these days. Although your will be very busy, I still suggest you make some time to play some sports to help yourselfer relax. Also, you can do other things to reduce stress, like listening to music and reading some interesting books.     Best wishes and stay healthy.                                                          Yours,                                                                        Li Hua三、 练习：  适当的饮食习惯是健康成长的保证。请你以Good Eating Habits, Good Health为题,并根据下表提示（可适当补充内容），用英语写一篇不少于80个词的作文谈谈你的看法（开通已经给出，字数不计算在内）   Good Eating Habits, Good Health不良习惯不吃早餐；爱吃零食；偏食，饮食过量良好习惯饮食多样化；饮食定时定量 个人看法良好发热饮食习惯有助于身体健康. 注意：1. 词数80-100个 2. 文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名 3. 可适当发挥。 解题思路：1、审题：a.本文共有    个要点b.时态主要采用            c. 人称是_2、可能用到的词语（写在要点旁边）_3、可能用到的句型_ 4、成文：_检查思路：完成作文自查表：1. 如果没有问题的，请在项目后打。2. 如果有问题，请在项目中圈出来，并在文中做出修改。项目 第一次自查第二次自查内容要点  人称 时态、主谓一致  动词搭配、介词搭配   拼写错误   好词好句   参考例文：  “Good Eating Habits lead to Good Health.” So its very important for us to form healthy eating habits. However, many students still have bad eating habits. Some go to school without breakfast; some like to eat snacks all the time; some always like to the same food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these habits are bad for our health.To keep fit, we should eat all kinds of foods. Such as rice, fish, meat, vegetables and fruit. Besides, wed better have meals at the right time.In my opinion, we should develop healthy eating habits to make ourselves stronger.专心-专注-专业