2019-2020学年新教材高中英语unit4 stage and screenperiod5writing教学案版本：外研版必修第二册.doc

Period 5Writing读后续写电影影评技法指导本单元的写作项目是读后续写，主题为电影影评。同学们在课余生活中，一定看过不少令你印象深刻的电影吧。无论是那些令你记忆犹新的剧情、精彩的对白或者是某个演员的精湛演技都给你带来了令人愉快的视觉盛宴。在续写电影影评时要注意以下几点：1要明白故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置变化、人物特征和情感态度等。2要顺着文章的思路，根据既有线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用英语表达出来。3想象要合理简单，不要过于复杂，中心主题一定要围绕“真善美”等正向的价值观积极地去展开。经典句式1开头常用句式Have you seen the latest Tarantino movie? 你看过塔伦蒂诺最新的电影吗？The action takes place in France. 这个故事发生在法国。 I like films with plenty of action. 我喜欢情节曲折离奇的影片。 She has starred with many leading actors. 她曾与许多大牌演员一起担任主角。2主体段落常用句式Julia Roberts is a famous Hollywood star. 茱莉娅罗伯茨是著名的好莱坞明星。The hotel is popular with movie stars. 这家酒店很受电影明星的喜爱。Other members of the cast include Johnny Depp and Danny DeVito. 剧组的其他成员包括约翰尼德普和丹尼德维托。The play will be performed by an allfemale company. 该剧将由一个女子剧团表演。3结尾常用句式The final episode will be shown next Sunday. 最后一集将于下周日播放。Shes not only a great dramatic actress but shes also very funny. 她不仅是一位伟大的女戏剧演员，而且也很幽默。She acts well but she hasnt got star quality . 她演得不错，但缺少成为一个明星的素质。She was the star of many popular television series. 她在许多受观众喜爱的电视连续剧中担任过主角。典例演练阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Avatar (阿凡达) truly marks the coming age of 3D cinema with its pure technology,_special effects, beautiful finesse, aesthete, shock, fearfulness and eye for detail. The idea of James_Cameron to create a whole new world with creatures, flora and fauna flying across the screen is something that actually leaves the audiences in an awe of the bumping up creativity inside the computer.The directors vision inside the Pandora is a pure art that is made more beautiful with the tall and wide eyed people, lush greenery and the postmodern creatures. More than this, its the violence that has made Avatar a worth watch. Though, it is a simple story that is narrated in a complete straightened manner, the movies evergreen romance in between a human and an alien blended beautifully with the strong antiwar_statement is something that has given Avatar a heart.The story moves around the landing of the US army in Pandora,_an earthsized satellite in outer_space,_with an objective to extract the minerals from the Pandoras soil. But before their objective is established, the army should fight with the peaceloving inhabitants of the Pandora, for which they must destroy the alien world with their spies and bombs.Director and Screenwriter, James Cameron has no doubt created a burly and visually thrilling appeal to save the world, before its too late. Cinematography by Mauro Fiore is excellent and the special effects by Joe Letteri are truly mind blowing. Music given by James Hormer goes off smoothly with the flow of the movie. Both Zoe Saldana and Sam Worthington perform their roles excellently and have shaped up the warm love story of the Navi woman and the blue skinned human avatar perfectly.注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：Avatar, an upcoming scifi action adventure film directed by James Cameron, will finally open to international audiences on December 18, 2009. Paragraph 2：The story is set in a distant moon Pandora. 精彩范文Paragraph 1: Avatar, an upcoming scifi action adventure film directed by James Cameron, will finally open to international audiences on December 18, 2009. ProducedDirected by the man who swept the box office and Oscars in 1997 with his Leonardo di Caprio starrer Titanic, James_Cameron will reinvent himself with the Avatar a 3D science fiction film made using the latest intuitive CGI technologies by WETA digital. WETA is well known in the animation and film industry for its work in movies like Lord of the Rings sequels and King Kong. Avatar is publicized to be the third most expensive film ever with a whopping budget of $237 million.Paragraph 2: The story is set in a distant moon Pandora. In there a paraplegic exmarine Jake Sully (Sam Worthington) finds himself plunged into an unfriendly alien world filled with magnificent looking humanoid creatures known as Navi. Jake unsuspectingly is set upon a mission to invade the jungles of Pandora for which he is transformed into an Avatar, an alien body with a human mind. As an Avatar he is able to walk again, but now he has to fight a double edged heroic battle for both his survival and that of the alien civilizationNavi.总评本篇范文续写部分对阿凡达电影内容的介绍以及市场价值都进行了合理的描述，运用了高级的词汇和句型；在合理的续写的基础上，对原文内容进行了延伸，使读者更加直观的感受到阿凡达这部影片带给观众的视觉体验。亮点呈现(1)ProducedDirected by the man who swept . 使用定语从句，使句意表达清晰准确。(2)Avatar is publicized to be the third most expensive film ever with a whopping budget of $237 million. 使用具体数字，增强文章的可信度。跟踪演练阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Mel Gibsons “Braveheart” is a fullthroated, redblooded battle epic about William Wallace, the legendary Scots warrior who led his nation into battle against the English in the years around 1300. Its an ambitious film, big on simple emotions like love, patriotism and treachery, and avoids the travelogue style of so many historical swashbucklers: Its locations look green, wet, vast, muddy and rugged.Not much is known about Wallace, known as Braveheart, except that according to an_old_epic_poem,_he unified the clans of Scotland and won famous battles against the English before being captured, tortured and executed as a traitor.Wallaces dying cry, as his body was stretched on the rack, was “freedom！” That isnt exactly based on fact (the concept of personal_freedom was a concept not much celebrated in 1300), but it doesnt stop Gibson from making it his dying cry. It fits in with the whole glorious sweep of “Braveheart，” which is an action epic with the spirit of the Hollywood swordplay classics and the grungy ferocity of “The_Road_Warrior.” What people are going to remember from the film are the battle scenes,_which are frequent, bloody and violent. Just from a technical_point_of_view,_“Braveheart” does a brilliant job of massing men and horses for largescale warfare on film. Gibson deploys what look like thousands of men on horseback, as well as foot soldiers, archers and dirty tricks specialists, and yet his battle sequences dont turn into confusing crowd scenes: We understand the strategy,_and we enjoy the tactics even while were doubting some of them (did 14th century Scots really set battlefields aflame？)注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：In the film, Wallaces chief antagonist is King Edward I (“Longshanks”), played by Patrick McGoohan with sly cunning. Paragraph 2：And as Braveheart, Gibson plays his role with flamboyance, and cuts it with sly humor. 写前导读：本文是一篇影评。勇敢的心是以战争为核心，讲述了主人公与统治阶级不屈不挠斗争的故事。精彩范文Paragraph 1：In the film, Wallaces chief antagonist is King Edward I (“Longshanks”), played by Patrick McGoohan with sly cunning. He is constantly giving his realpolitik interpretation of events, and thats all the more amusing since hes usually guessing wrong.Edwards son, the Prince of Wales (Peter Hanly), is an effete fop who marries a French woman only for political reasons. “I may have to conceive the child myself！” Longshanks says, and indeed, under the medieval concept of prima nocte, or “first night，” nobles were allowed a first chance to sleep with the wives of their lessers.Paragraph 2：And as Braveheart, Gibson plays his role with flamboyance, and cuts it with sly humor. He is an amazing battlefield strategist, inventing new strategies and weapons, outsmarting the English at every turn, leading his men into battle with his face painted blue, like a football fan. There is a scene where he is so pumped up with the scent of battle that his nostrils flare; not many actors could get away with that, but Gibson can.课外拓展阅读中国优秀传统文化专题练阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。Traditional Chinese WeddingTraditional Chinese wedding customs have been around for thousands of years. They may vary from place to place and time to time, but have been holding _1_ important position in the lives of Chinese people, _2_ (cause) farreaching (影响深远的) effects on the way the Chinese lead their lives. A traditional Chinese marriage usually consists _3_ some necessary procedures, such as matchmaking, engagement, meeting the bride, and three bows. In addition, a typical Chinese wedding nowadays _4_ (go) like this: when a new couple is engaged, _5_ follows is a choice of the date of their marriage.Most people would favor a public holiday _6_ special Chinese festival for their relatives and friends _7_ (attend) the wedding. However, quite a few others, _8_ (especial) those in the countryside, would fix a lucky date so that their marriage would have “Double Happiness”. The wedding ceremony is usually hosted warmly and wedding guests would _9_ (treat) to a unique wedding feast. _10_ (toast) are made to wish the new couple everlasting love, happiness and early birth of a healthy baby and so on.1_2._3._4._5_6._7._8._9_10._答案：1.an2.causing3.of4.goes5.what6.or7.to attend8.especially9.be treated10.ToastsDifferent countries have different etiquette. We are supposed to take pride in our culture and etiquette, and respect the etiquette of other countries.不同的国家有不同的礼仪，我们应该以本国的文化和礼仪为荣，并尊重其他国家的礼仪。