2019-2020学年新教材高中英语unit5 musicsectionⅤwriting教学案版本：人教版必修第二册.doc

Section Writing 应用文演讲稿本单元的写作项目是撰写演讲稿。演讲稿的格式与以往的应用文写作不同。演讲稿是要面对观众去发表的，所以在遣词造句上要注意挑选能传达情绪的词语，增强演讲稿的感染力。写作时要注意以下几点：1开头很重要作为演讲稿的开头，一定要具有先声夺人的效果。在一开始就吸引住别人的视线，那么这篇演讲稿也就成功了一半。2逻辑性演讲稿是向公众发表你个人看法的文体，所以在写作的过程中，要注意整体的逻辑性，不要跑题或者表述过多、过杂。要有轻重主次之分，这样才能成为一篇合格的演讲稿。3修辞法演讲稿因为是有目的性的一种文章形式，目的就是为了说服听众进入你的思想世界。所以可以适当使用引用、比喻、排比等有利于你更好地传达自己思想的修辞方式。1开头常用句式(1)Good afternoon, Id like to say a few words . 大家下午好，我想要先说几句话(2)Its an honor to be here . 很荣幸在这里(3)Ladies and gentlemen, never before have we had so many different ways to talk to one another.女士们，先生们，我们彼此交流的途径从未像今天这样多元化。(4)Now we have heard a number of outstanding speeches . 我们已经聆听了许多精彩的发言2主体段落常用句式(1)Because we wanted the nations of the world, working together, to deal with . 因为我们希望全世界各国团结起来去应对(2)And if we do not act . 如果我们不采取行动(3)Now, I share the concerns that have been expressed . 我也同意对于表达的担心3结尾常用句式(1)Let us show the world that by working together we can . 让我们告诉全世界，通过一起努力我们可以(2)It is now time for us to . 是时候我们(3)And I have always wished that . 我一直希望(4)Thank you for letting me share this day with me.感谢你们和我共度这一天。假如你是高中生李华，你校将举办一次以“音乐”为主题的演讲比赛，请你按照主题，写下你的演讲稿。注意：词数100左右。 精彩范文First of all, thank you for listening to my speech. My topic is: love music like love yourself.Music is like the air we need to maintain our normal lives around us. You cant imagine how terrible a world without music would be. Movies and TV shows have no music, only dry conversations and scenes; mobile phones only vibrations; streets only noisy crowds; cafes, western restaurants only depressed meals. What a terrible world it is!As a student, I hope we all can enjoy the fun brought by music in our spare time. Instead of just listening to music, we can even make our own music. Lets enjoy the fun of music!Thanks again for your attention!总评本篇范文，结构上采用提出主题阐述主题再次强调主题的方式；其中四处排比的运用，可以调动听众的情感，与听众形成共鸣，达到了演讲的目的。亮点呈现(1)Music is like the air we need .，使用比喻的修辞手法，使表达生动形象。(2)What a terrible world it is！使用what引导的感叹句式，充满感染力。假如你是李华，你所在学校的演讲社团要招新的社员，要求想要入社的同学准备一篇演讲稿。要求：与音乐有关；注意：词数100左右。 精彩范文