中考英语作文备战和讲解ppt课件.ppt

一一.书面表达典型错误分析书面表达典型错误分析二二.书面表达题应试对策书面表达题应试对策三三.中考中考英语英语写作的常见题型写作的常见题型书面表达典型错误分析书面表达典型错误分析1.审题不认真审题不认真,偏离主题偏离主题人称用错人称用错没有正确理解文中题目提示要求没有正确理解文中题目提示要求2.抓不住文章要点抓不住文章要点,文章内容混乱文章内容混乱3.用词不准确用词不准确,汉语式表达方式汉语式表达方式.常用词拼写错误常用词拼写错误think-thing;because-becauce;public-publik关键词用错关键词用错受母语干扰严重受母语干扰严重 1.The price should not be expensive.(high).2.What did you happened?(what happened to you?)4.语言基本功差，语法错误严重语言基本功差，语法错误严重时态，语态错误时态，语态错误句子之间缺乏过渡词连接句子之间缺乏过渡词连接句子结构错误，语序不当句子结构错误，语序不当句子结构单一，用词呆板句子结构单一，用词呆板5.书写不规范，卷面不整洁。书写不规范，卷面不整洁。字母大小不均，难以辨认字母大小不均，难以辨认不按移行规则移行不按移行规则移行标点符号使用不当标点符号使用不当字迹潦草，卷面不整洁字迹潦草，卷面不整洁书面表达题应试对策书面表达题应试对策认真审题认真审题.审题是做好书面表达的关键审题是做好书面表达的关键.要解决要解决写什么写什么?怎么写的问题怎么写的问题?有一个清晰的思路有一个清晰的思路.题材和体裁题材和体裁人称和内容人称和内容时态和语态时态和语态词组和句型词组和句型一一.认真审题认真审题 写好提纲写好提纲 考生在拿到试卷之后，当听力题做考生在拿到试卷之后，当听力题做完，可以先看一看作文的题目与类型，完，可以先看一看作文的题目与类型，对它有一个大致的印象和准备，在做语对它有一个大致的印象和准备，在做语法和阅读题时对自己的作文能有一个初法和阅读题时对自己的作文能有一个初步的构思。应尽可能地留出步的构思。应尽可能地留出20分钟的时分钟的时间来写作文。在正式写作文时，可参照间来写作文。在正式写作文时，可参照以下步骤：以下步骤：1、认真审题，确定题目中的关键词。、认真审题，确定题目中的关键词。2、展开一次、展开一次“Brain Storm”即头脑风即头脑风暴，对该题引申出各种联想和论点。暴，对该题引申出各种联想和论点。 3、根据自己已有的经验和词汇量选、根据自己已有的经验和词汇量选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的方面和论择自己最熟悉、最有把握的方面和论点来写作点来写作 4、确定基本的写作时态，如记叙文、确定基本的写作时态，如记叙文通常用一般过去时。（时态运用错误通常用一般过去时。（时态运用错误是考生们大量失分的主要原因。）是考生们大量失分的主要原因。） 5、对于有能力的同学，注意不能通篇、对于有能力的同学，注意不能通篇均用简单句型，可适当引入初中的语法均用简单句型，可适当引入初中的语法重点如状语从句、宾语从句和被动语态重点如状语从句、宾语从句和被动语态等。这会使考生的作文有质的提高。等。这会使考生的作文有质的提高。 6、当整篇作文写完，一定要进行仔、当整篇作文写完，一定要进行仔细的检查，注意使句子流畅，时态细的检查，注意使句子流畅，时态运用准确，单词拼写正确，冠词运运用准确，单词拼写正确，冠词运用正确，名词的大小写正确。用正确，名词的大小写正确。 中考中考英语英语写作的常见题型有以下四种：写作的常见题型有以下四种：根据所给标题写作根据所给标题写作根据根据英语英语情景提示写作情景提示写作 根据英汉提示写作根据英汉提示写作 看图写作看图写作 如何写好如何写好提示性作文提示性作文 提示性作文：就是给出一个标题或无标题，给出具体的内容，规定一定的字数，让考生写出作文。由于这类作文已经规定了文章的中心思想和主要内容，因此考生可以不再列出提纲，只要把注意力集中在如何正确、完整地用英文词句表达出中心思想和内容就可以了。 1、仔细审题，明确要求。对所给信息反复阅读，弄清这个题目要表达什么，然后对所给信息进行整理、组织，按照自己的写作思路使之条理化。 写好提示性作文应注意的事项写好提示性作文应注意的事项2、确保语言精炼。在写作过程中，考生应时刻提醒自己按照已给出的信息点去写，不必有太多的发挥。但也不必按照信息点去逐句翻译。用自己熟悉的短语、句型去体现要点。掌握好文章的长度，不要字数过多或过少。 【原文】The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much.【修正】The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much. 【原文】I studied Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer at school.【修正】The main subjects I studied at school including Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer.精益求精精益求精【原文】We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.【修正】After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess. 【 原文】She doesnt like sports. 【修正】She cares nothing for sports 记叙事件记叙事件一、汉语提示根据中文提示和英文提示词语，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给英文提示词语必须用上。字数6070左右。 1、昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步。 2、在路上我遇到了一个外国人。3、他向我询问去温泉饭店（theHotSpringHotel）的路。4、我告诉他沿着路往前走，在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见饭店。5、他非常感谢我，我也为能帮他而感到高兴。 提示词语：go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, on the left, thank for, be happy that（分析）写作指导：根据提示我们了解到这是一篇记叙文，所以考生应马上想到时间时间（yesterday evening），地点地点（on the road），人物人物（I, my mother and a foreigner），事件事件（howto show the way）。其次观察信息点，我们确定这篇文章应用过去式来表达。然后，确定这个事件应用第一人称来叙述。最后，按照信息点合理组织文章，别忘用上提示词语。 Yesterday evening,I went out for a walk with my mother.On the road,we met a foreigner. He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel.I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left, then he could see the hotel.He thanked me very much for my help.I was happy that I could help him. We should help the ones who are in trouble.It can make us happy. 文成公主进藏的故事，在古代，各国之间为了彼此的文化传播以及地位文成公主进藏的故事，在古代，各国之间为了彼此的文化传播以及地位的稳定，就产生了和亲这一政策，最为代表的就是唐朝的文成公主进藏的故的稳定，就产生了和亲这一政策，最为代表的就是唐朝的文成公主进藏的故事，文成公主进藏的故事被人们称为一段佳话，并在市井中成为人们茶余饭事，文成公主进藏的故事被人们称为一段佳话，并在市井中成为人们茶余饭后的话题，今天就让我领着大家一起来回顾一下吧。文成公主进藏是指：后的话题，今天就让我领着大家一起来回顾一下吧。文成公主进藏是指：唐朝贞观年间，吐蕃赞普松赞干布派遣大相噶尔东赞唐朝贞观年间，吐蕃赞普松赞干布派遣大相噶尔东赞(即禄东赞即禄东赞)为请婚使者，为请婚使者，赴长安请婚。唐太宗将远支宗女封为文成公主，下嫁松赞干布，并诏令礼部赴长安请婚。唐太宗将远支宗女封为文成公主，下嫁松赞干布，并诏令礼部尚书江夏王李道宗为主婚使，持节护送文成公主入蕃。松赞干布率群臣尚书江夏王李道宗为主婚使，持节护送文成公主入蕃。松赞干布率群臣到河源附近的柏海到河源附近的柏海(今青海玛多县境内今青海玛多县境内)迎接文成公主，与文成公主同返逻些迎接文成公主，与文成公主同返逻些(今拉萨今拉萨)，并在拉萨为文成公主修建宫室。，并在拉萨为文成公主修建宫室。文成公主进藏故事原因松赞干布文成公主进藏故事原因松赞干布(弃宗弄赞弃宗弄赞)是藏族历史上的英雄，崛是藏族历史上的英雄，崛起于藏河起于藏河(今雅鲁藏布江今雅鲁藏布江)中游的雅隆河谷地区。他统一西藏，成为赞普，建立中游的雅隆河谷地区。他统一西藏，成为赞普，建立了吐蕃王朝。文成公主，汉名无记载，其父史书也未记载。史书记载文了吐蕃王朝。文成公主，汉名无记载，其父史书也未记载。史书记载文成公主为宗女成公主为宗女5，不是皇帝的女儿。贞观十五年，不是皇帝的女儿。贞观十五年(公元公元641年年)，唐太宗派江夏，唐太宗派江夏王李道宗持节送文成公主去吐蕃。贞观八年王李道宗持节送文成公主去吐蕃。贞观八年(公元公元634年年)，吐蕃赞普松赞，吐蕃赞普松赞干布遣使大唐，唐太宗遣行人冯德遐出使吐蕃。松赞干布再次派人到唐干布遣使大唐，唐太宗遣行人冯德遐出使吐蕃。松赞干布再次派人到唐自我介绍自我介绍 My name is Li Hua. I was born in Dalian, Liaoning province in February 1977. I started school in 1984 when I was seven. I studied in Guangming Primary School from 1984 to 1990. After that I went to No.6 Middle School of Dalian and graduated this summer. The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer. I like English and computer best and I am very good at them. Last year I won the first prize in the school computer competition. In my spare time I enjoy listening to popular music and collecting stamps. My favourite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter. 假设有一大批外国人来我市假设有一大批外国人来我市吉林市参观。吉林市参观。假设你是导游，请根据以下内容，向外宾简单介假设你是导游，请根据以下内容，向外宾简单介绍我市的情况。绍我市的情况。 要求：要求： 1. 80 词左右；词左右； 2. 要要点包括：点包括： a. 有悠久的历史，位于中国的东北部，有悠久的历史，位于中国的东北部，人口约人口约 200万，松花江穿城而过。万，松花江穿城而过。 b. 有许多著名有许多著名景点，如景点，如北山公园（北山公园（ Beishan Park ）；松花湖松花湖（ Songhua Lake）等等；松花湖是一个很美丽等等；松花湖是一个很美丽的地方，湖水清澈，无污染；湖中有各种各样的的地方，湖水清澈，无污染；湖中有各种各样的鱼；你可以到那里划船，野餐，钓鱼，是度假的鱼；你可以到那里划船，野餐，钓鱼，是度假的好去处。好去处。c. 祝大家在河源玩得愉快。祝大家在河源玩得愉快。介绍介绍地方地方情况情况Ladies and gentlemen，Welcome to Jilin， now let me introduce our city Jilin city to you. Jilin is a city with a long history. It is in the Northeast of China. Its the second largest city in Jilin province. It has a population of over 2 million. Songhua river goes through the city twice .There are many places of interest in Jilin， such as Beishan park, Songhua Lake and so on. Songhua Lake is a beautiful place. The water is clean and not polluted. There are all kinds of fish in it. You can go boating,go fishing and have a picnic there. It is really a good place to spend your holiday. Besides, you can enjoy the delicious food in our city.I hope you can have a great time in Jilin.Thank you.趋势趋势:提示性作文和应用文的提示性作文和应用文的结合结合写作指导：写作指导：作文结合了提示性作文结合了提示性作文和应用文的写作要求。首作文和应用文的写作要求。首先，我们要读懂英语提示的内先，我们要读懂英语提示的内容。其次，我们要知道书信的容。其次，我们要知道书信的写作方法写作方法例题例题Dear Ace Travel, Im Li Ming, from the east of China. For the coming winter vacation, my family and I want to spend our vacation in a foreign city for ten days. We would like to go somewhere not only warm but also interesting. We dont mind how far we have to go. It has to be a place where we can swim everyday, and it would be nice if our hotel is not expensive but clean and comfortable. We like to pay no more than $ 5,000 for the trip. Could you please give us your suggestions for vacation spots? Thanks a lot. Yours, Li Ming 收到一封咨询信，请你以旅行社收到一封咨询信，请你以旅行社工作人员的身份完成任务。工作人员的身份完成任务。 请你根据来信，从下列所给的请你根据来信，从下列所给的地方中选择一个或两个符合地方中选择一个或两个符合Li Ming要求的地方，向他提出建议。要求的地方，向他提出建议。（80字左右）字左右）Tokyo, Sydney, Hawaii, Shanghai写作指导：写作指导： 这篇作文结合了提示性作文和应用文的写作要求。首先，我们要读懂英语提示的内容，也就是那封咨询信的内容。其次，我们要知道书信的写作方法。针对本道题，还要注意，这封信是以旅行社工作人员的身份来写的。最后，还要注意咨询信后的要求-从下列所给的地方中选择一个或两个符合Li Ming要求的地方，向他提出建议及字数限制。Dear Li Ming, Im Gina. Its my pleasure to give you some suggestions for your vacation spots. According to your letter, I think either Sydney or Hawaii is the best choice because they are both warm and interesting. There are some inexpensive hotels, which are clean and comfortable in both places. Whats more, you can enjoy sunshine, walk on the beach and swim every day. Besides, there are many good museums in Sydney. Its also a wonderful place for shopping. . And if you go to Hawaii, you could have a visit to Pearl Harbor, which is quite educational and historical. Thats just my idea. I hope it would give you some help. Yours, Gina 对于提示作文的写法大家都会了吗？不对于提示作文的写法大家都会了吗？不管什么作文的写作，都要要求我们对英语管什么作文的写作，都要要求我们对英语的词汇、短语以及常用的表达方法有一定的词汇、短语以及常用的表达方法有一定的积累。所以，在学习写作的同时，不要的积累。所以，在学习写作的同时，不要放松对以上几个方面的复习。放松对以上几个方面的复习。发言稿发言稿假设有一批英国中学生将来你校就读，校方要求假设有一批英国中学生将来你校就读，校方要求你在开班典礼上介绍一下学校的有关要求。请按你在开班典礼上介绍一下学校的有关要求。请按以下要点写一篇发言稿。以下要点写一篇发言稿。上学要穿戴整洁上学要穿戴整洁上课不迟到、早退上课不迟到、早退保持校园清洁保持校园清洁走路靠右行走路靠右行;若要骑车上学，请办自行车许可若要骑车上学，请办自行车许可证证 Good morning, dear friends. Welcome to our school. Now please allow me to introduce you to some of our school rules here. As high school students, firstly, we are expected to be neatly dressed when at school. Secondly, it must be made clear that we should never be late for class or leave school before it is over. The school is a place for us to live and study in, so we must keep it clean. Lastly, when you are walking on the road, please remember to keep to the right, and, if you want to go to school by bike, you must have a bicycle-permit. I hope you have a pleasant time here. Thanks. 书面通知书面通知 为了丰富外国留学生的生活，你校学生会将举办为了丰富外国留学生的生活，你校学生会将举办一次音乐周活动。请你以组织者的身份写一个书一次音乐周活动。请你以组织者的身份写一个书面通知书。有关内容如下：面通知书。有关内容如下：时间：时间：5月第月第1周周 地点：届时通知地点：届时通知 活动：活动：1. 演唱歌曲：流行歌曲演唱歌曲：流行歌曲 2. 器乐演奏：古典和民间音乐器乐演奏：古典和民间音乐 3. 音乐比赛：听歌曲片断，然后猜出处音乐比赛：听歌曲片断，然后猜出处 参加者请于参加者请于4月月20日前报名。日前报名。 April 10, 2000Dear students,The Students Union has decided to organize a music week. It will be held in the first week of May. The activities include singing pop songs and playing classical and folk music. Bring your own musical instruments, please. A music contest will be included, too. The students taking part in the contest will listen to part of a song or a piece of music, and then guess where it comes from. If youd like to take part in the music week, please come and sign up for it before April 20th. The place for the activities will be announced later.Come to the great fun! Students Union 你校学生会将为来访的美国朋友举办一个晚会，你校学生会将为来访的美国朋友举办一个晚会，要在学校广播中宣布此事，并欢迎大家参加。为使要在学校广播中宣布此事，并欢迎大家参加。为使美国朋友听懂，请你用英语写一篇广播通知。要点美国朋友听懂，请你用英语写一篇广播通知。要点如下：如下：宗旨：宗旨：欢迎来访的美国朋友欢迎来访的美国朋友组织者：组织者： 学生会学生会时间：时间：8月月15，星期六，晚，星期六，晚7：30地地 点：点： 主楼屋顶花园主楼屋顶花园活动内容：音乐、跳舞、唱歌、游戏、交换小礼品活动内容：音乐、跳舞、唱歌、游戏、交换小礼品（请包装好、签名并在包装外面写上几个祝愿词）（请包装好、签名并在包装外面写上几个祝愿词） 通通 知知Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. The Student Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening, August 15, to welcome our friends from the United States. The party will be held in the roof garden of the Main Building. It will begin at 7:30 p. m. There will be music, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gifts. Will everybody please bring along a small gift for this purpose? Remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wishes. Dont forget: 7:30, Saturday evening, roof garden, Main Building. Theres sure to be a lot of fun. Everybody is welcome. Thats all. Thank you! 假设你是李华，在美国探亲。假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年年2月月8日清晨，日清晨，你目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报你目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。 看图作文看图作文 It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didnt stop but drove off at great speed, heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864. About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. MichaelMichael是一名美国中学生，在是一名美国中学生，在学校里选修汉语。他利用暑假到学校里选修汉语。他利用暑假到中国进修，希望进一步了解中国中国进修，希望进一步了解中国文化。有一天，他看到下面有关文化。有一天，他看到下面有关成语的漫画，不大明白其中的意成语的漫画，不大明白其中的意思。请你用英语把漫画所表达的思。请你用英语把漫画所表达的故事和寓意写成一段短文，向他故事和寓意写成一段短文，向他解释。解释。寓言故事 Once upon a time there was a farmer who worked hard in the fields every day. One day, while he was ploughing the field, he heard a bumping sound. He saw a rabbit lying by the trunk. He picked it up and found that it was a fat rabbit. He thought to himself, “Since it is so easy to get a rabbit like that, why should I work so hard all day long?” He threw his hoe away and lay by the tree every day, dreaming for more rabbits to come. When he finally realized his foolishness and returned to his field, he found that all his crops were dead. This story tells us that we should not wait for unexpected gains by chance and luck. Or, we should not hope to get rewards without hard work. Remember, “No pains, no gains!”