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武汉考研培训班 2016考研英语作文写作指导(汇总)考研英语是大多数考生的“一根软肋”，而考研英语作文则是“软肋中的软肋”，很多学生都觉得考研英语作文很难搞定。为了帮助各位参加2016年硕士研究生入学考试的考生搞定这根“软肋”，武汉文都考研英语辅导老师给大家一一讲解几大书信的写作方法，让你也能轻轻松松写出“任性”作文!让你麻麻再也不用担心你的考研英语作文了!以下是“2016考研英语任性作文”的汇总，希望能帮到各位同学。 2016考研英语:“任性”作文之投诉信多考生可能都有过这样的困惑，为什么有些人的英语作文就能写得那么“任性”，挥洒自如还能屡获高分，从今天开始，老师就为你一一讲解几大书信的写作方法，让你也能轻轻松松写出“任性”作文!投诉信又可称为抱怨信，其主要目的是表达写信人对于某一情况的不满。人们在生活中经常会遇到一些不愉快的事情，比如消费利益受损、正常生活和工作受到干扰等，有时写封投诉信不失为一个解决办法。投诉信通常包括以下几个方面的内容：说明投诉的原因并表示遗憾;实事求是地阐述问题发生的经过，切忌夸大其词;指出问题引起的后果;提出批评及处理意见，或敦促对方采取措施，或提出所希望的赔偿以及补救方式。投诉信的写作策略：说明投诉问题描述具体情况期待解决方案。注意事项：写投诉信时语气要冷静、郑重、克制，不必过于礼貌。但也要就事论事，不能进行人身攻击。同时，在描述问题时尽量采用被动句式，使描述更加客观合理。【相关真题】DirectionsSuppose you have found something wrong with the electronic dictionary that you bought from an online store the other day ,Write an email to the customer service center to1)make a complaint and2)demand a prompt solutionYou should write about 100words on ANSERE SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter ,Use “Zhang Wei” instead.【范文】Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing this letter to complain the quality of your productan electronic dictionary I bought in your online shop last week. Today, I find the dictionary does not operate properly. For some reasons, the battery can work only two days after last charging. What is worse, the pronounce button of it does not function. Last but the worst, the screen will shut down unexpectedly and randomly.As the machine is under warranty, I would like to exchange it for another one or get a refund. I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.Sincerely yours,Zhang Wei【点评】这一次的小作文很中规中矩，题目是之前就在英语一中考过的投诉信，投诉的产品也是考生很熟悉的学习用具电子词典。投诉信在开头就表明写信的目的，给出一句套话。接着第二段开始写出投诉的内容，具体说明问题有哪些。第三段表明自己期望的结果以及用一句套话表明自己的期待问题。在这里还需要提醒的是小作文的字数是在100字左右，可以是80到120字之间，但是由于小作文答题卡的位置特别有限，所以如果写到了100字以上，会显得非常拥挤。因此小作文在保证清楚表达意思的情况下尽量用一些简单的句式，尽量不要追求像大作文那样复杂且多变的句式。【投诉信开头常用句式和套话】I wish to draw your attention to the problem/faultthat I boughtI am writing to advise you that I findunsatisfactory.It is with great reluctance that I must inform you that【投诉信结尾常用句式和套话】I must have you fully understand that without a satisfying solution, I will reserve my right to take legal action.I would like to have this matter settled by the end ofI understand you will give immediate attention to this matter.英语作文是典型的慢工出细活，日积月累，方能有成。祝各位考生能够按照自己的计划踏踏实实走好每一步，到达理想的彼岸。 2016考研英语：“任性”作文之建议信很多考生可能都有过这样的困惑，为什么有些人的考研英语作文就能写得那么“任性”，挥洒自如还能屡获高分，从今天开始，老师就为你一一讲解几大书信的写作方法，让你也能轻轻松松写出“任性”作文!建议信是对收信人就某一问题提出建议和忠告。它有可能是写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务质量提出建议或忠告;也可能是写给个人，就其人生中的某个重大决定提出自己的看法、建议和观点。考生需要注意：建议信和投诉信在某些情况下既有相同，又有不同，在改进质量的建议和忠告方面应该有很多的共通点，但如果是关于个人的重大决定就不应该用很生硬的语言了。【相关真题】Directions:Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university, suggesting how to improve students physical condition. You should include the details you think necessary.You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address.(10 points)【范文】Dear President,I am writing this letter to give some suggestions on how to improve our students physical condition after my observation of my classmates poor performance in the annual “climbing mountain festival” held by the local authority.First of all, the morning exercise is expected to be introduced and promoted as routine regulation so as to help us keep a regular schedule every day. Secondly, more fitness equipment should be installed in the public area of the dormitory. Consequently, we can do the body building more conveniently and make the best use of our precious time.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful and practical.Yours sincerely,Li Ming【译文】亲爱的校长先生：当地政府每年都会举办登山节，在我看到我们学生表现得很不好之后，我决定写这封信来提出一些建议以提高我校学生的身体素质。首先，我们应该引入晨练，并将其作为日常的规定，以使我们形成规律的作息。其次，我们应该在宿舍的公共区域安装更多的健身器材。这样一来，我们就能更顺利的锻炼身体并且最好的利用我们珍贵的时间。希望您能觉得这些建议是有帮助且实用的。李明谨上【建议信开头常用句式和套话】I have received your letter sayingI recommend thatYou asked for advice concerning (with regard to)and I will try to make some suggestions.I am writing to express my views about【建议信结尾常用句式和套话】I would be more than happy to see improvement in this regard.I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details.Please take good consideration of my advice. Thank you.英语作文是典型的慢工出细活，日积月累，方能有成。祝各位考生能够按照自己的计划踏踏实实走好每一步，坚持不懈地到达理想的彼岸。 2016考研英语：“任性”作文之道歉信我们在工作或生活中，有时难免会犯一些错误，写封道歉信就显得很有必要。道歉信的目的是向收信人表明歉意，请求对方对自己的某种过失表示谅解。道歉信通常包括以下内容：表示歉意;道歉的缘由;出现差错的原因;提出弥补措施;请求原谅。道歉信的写作策略：表示道歉说明具体原因、提出补救办法再次致歉，希望得到理解。写道歉信的语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实，不要显出丝毫的虚情假意。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解，还会增进彼此的感情。在写作过程中，尽可能提供比较合理的理由。如果违反生活常识将导致扣分。在解释完原因后，尽量提供一个合适的补救办法，使行文更加圆满。【相关真题】Directions:You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there. Write him a letter to1) make an apology, and2) suggest a solution.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address. (10 points)【范文】Dear Bob,I am writing to make an apology to you for I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week. Yesterday I have come back from Canada and I found it in my luggage. I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present.The CD which I borrowed from you is made in Canada, so I believe you can find another one in your local store. How about your buying another CD by yourself and I will pay for it? If you cannot find the similar one, I would send it back to you through a post office. And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.I am sorry again for my carelessness. Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Ming【试题分析和点评】从本年的题目要求来看，考生需要根据假设的语境，给加拿大的房东写一封致歉信，主要包括两方面的内容：1)对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意;2)提出解决的办法。以书面形式表达歉意应注意如下几点：1)明确、简要地陈述你感到抱歉的某件事。2)提出补救的办法，表明你的补救意图或方案。假如你不能确定哪种补救办法更合适，可提出多个可选办法。3)向对方保证此类事情不会再发生。4)态度真诚但不宜言过其实，避免使用过分夸张、自责的表达，如：I am very, very, very sorry;I wish I were dead after the way I behaved last night等;写信时要注意语境，选择合适的语域，言简意赅，避免使用勉强的语气，要用诚恳、请愿的语气表达歉意。5)信中不宜把自己的过错归咎于别人(如同事、邮局等)或设备(如计算机、传真等)。6)假如过错或过失不是因为个人所致，而是公司或团体，不宜贸然承认该过错是公司疏忽所致。最好征求公司律师意见后再书面表达歉意。所选的该篇范文很好地完成了试题规定的任务，既简明地陈述了自己的失误，又提出了两个解决的办法。内容要点完整，层次清晰，语气得体，语言流畅，格式恰当，符合语域要求。但也有少数的语法错误，如：Yesterday I have come back from Canada。得分9分。【道歉信开头常用句式和套话】I am writing to apologize forI am very sorry to say thatPlease accept my sincere apology for【道歉信结尾常用句式和套话】Please allow me to say sorry again.I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.I am sorry that I cantand trust that you will be able to understand.英语作文是典型的慢工出细活，日积月累，方能有成。祝各位考生能够按照自己的计划踏踏实实走好每一步，坚持不懈地到达理想的彼岸。 2016考研英语: “任性”作文之求职信求职信是写信人就某一职位向收信人提出请求。考生在写求职信时应当注意礼貌，同时也要注意信息的可信度。尤其是在强调自身经历和优点的时候，更应把握尺度。求职信的写作策略：表明对职位感兴趣自己素质的描述期望回复。【例题】Directions:You will graduate from university and are hunting for a job. After reading a job ad from China Daily, write a letter to the Personnel Department to1) state your reason to write the application,2) describe your relevant education background.You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address.【范文】Dear Sir or Madam,I am responding to your ad in the January 5th, 2011, the Sunday issue of the China Daily, for the position of the office clerk. It prompts me to offer you my qualifications because your requirements closely parallel my qualification and working experience.I graduated from the English Department of Beijing University. I once worked as an interpreter in a tourist agency for 3 years. I have been working as a manager assistant for one year in New Kevin Co. Ltd. Besides, I have got some editing experiences in a TV station.I wish you would give me an opportunity to be interviewed. I can be reached at my resume address or phoning 010-88888888 after 4 p.m. I would very much appreciate it if you are kind enough to tell me the time and place of a possible interview. Looking forward to hearing from you .Sincerely yours,Li Ming【译文】亲爱的女士或先生：我看到了你们在2011年1月5日周日版中国日报上刊登的招聘广告，你们需要一位办公室文员。我觉得我的个人素质和工作经历都很符合这份工作的要求。我毕业于北京大学英语系，曾在一家旅行社做过三年口译，还在新凯文公司做了一年总裁助理。我同时还有在电视台做编辑的经历。我希望能得到这个面试的机会。您可以通过简历上的地址联系我，或者也可以下午四点后打这个电话号码010-88888888.如果您能通知我面试的时间和地点我将不胜感激。希望早日得到您的回复。李明谨上【求职信开头常用句式和套话】I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of senior accountant you have advertised inI am writing in response to your advertisement in China Daily of June 8I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of senior accountant you have advertised in【求职信结尾常用句式和套话】Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to meeting you.Any favorable consideration of my application will be highly appreciated.If you need to know more about me, please contact me at英语作文是典型的慢工出细活，日积月累，方能有成。祝各位考生能够按照自己的计划踏踏实实走好每一步，坚持不懈地到达理想的彼岸。 2016考研英语：“任性”作文之推荐信推荐信与求职信的最终目标是一样的，都是要得到某个职位或某份工作。这两类信的写法也很相似，求职信是直接说明自己胜任某份工作，推荐信是说明他人胜任某份工作。因此在主体段落的写法上基本是相同的，事实上只要把求职信的第一人称换成第三人称就可以了。但是推荐信在开头和结尾与求职信略有不同。开头要说明写信人与被推荐人的关系，结尾要借推荐人之口说“雇用他将会是一个明智的选择”，并表示“如需要更多的信息可与我联系”。推荐信的写作策略：表明写作意图说明推荐原因感谢和期待。【相关真题】Directions:Write a letter to a friend of yours to1) recommend one of your favorite movies and2) give reasons for your recommendationYour should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. User “Li Ming” instead. Do not writer the address.(10 points)【范文】Dear Jack,I am writing to you to recommend one of my favorite movie, 2012. I have sufficient reasons to introduce this movie to you and I dare say this is the best disaster movie ever.This movie is the one about love and life from the perspective of a thrilling story of the end of the world. The fast-paced, exciting story line kept me on the edge of my seat all the way through. Whats more, the special effects are breathtaking. The directing is absolutely neat. Finally, this movie will definitely change our attitude toward this world and the people around us. We will learn well that we all have duty to counter environment deterioration and guard human health and well being, and even have to learn to love those we now hate.I bet you will love this movie and wish you enjoy this fantastic movie.Yours sincerely,Li Ming【译文】亲爱的杰克：我准备给你推荐一部电影2012。我有充分的理由推荐这部电影，并且我敢说这是我看过的最好的灾难片。这部电影从世界末日的角度讲述了爱和生命的故事。紧凑、精彩的故事情节让我一直不能自已。特效扣人心弦，导演也是非常出色。这部电影一定会改变我们对这个世界以及对周围人的看法。我们会意识到我们有责任去防止环境的恶化，捍卫人类的健康和幸福，我们甚至会学会去关爱我们现在还在恨的人。我相信你一定会喜欢这部电影。我也希望你能好好欣赏这部电影。李明谨上【推荐信开头常用句式和套话】I would like to presentfor your consideration in your search for a qualified manager.With reference to your requirements, I shall, without reservation, recommendas an ideal candidate.I am writing to you to recommend【推荐信结尾常用句式和套话】I would like to thank you for your attention to this letter and restate my support to Mr.I would like to lend my support tofor hisPlease do not hesitate to contact me if necessary.英语作文是典型的慢工出细活，日积月累，方能有成。祝各位考生能够按照自己的计划踏踏实实走好每一步，坚持不懈地到达理想的彼岸。 2016考研英语：“任性”作文之感谢信感谢信是对收信人的某一行为表示感谢。感谢信通常带有浓厚的感情色彩，具有比较浓的人情味。感谢信通常分为正式感谢信和非正式感谢信，前者行文得体、语气礼貌谦恭、用词正式正规;后者语气则更加亲切热情。感谢信的写作策略：表达感谢之情并说明原因提及自己曾受到对方的帮助再次感谢并表达回报愿望。【例题】Directions:You have just arrived in the city where your are going to spend 3 years for your masters degree. You have a lot of preparations to do before the new term starts, but you do not know how to go round the city. A friend, Kevin, you have newly acquainted offered you guidance and helped you through difficulties. Write a letter to express your thanks.Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. You do not need to write the address. (10 points)【范文】Dear Kevin,I am writing this letter to thank you for the guidance you have offered me during the past weeks. I was a perfect stranger when arriving this city, even not knowing the way to the downtown area. As you know this is the first time for me to come up to this big city.I bought a guidance book, but there were still difficulties in going around the city. The streets and shops puzzled me so much that I would rather stay indoors. It is your valuable guidance that has enabled me to go about the city without losing myself. I thank you very much for your kind help. Yesterday I went downtown alone to buy some stationery and other stuff.Lessons will begin in a few days. I will come over to see you some day next week and tell you everything that has happened to me.Yours sincerely,Li Ming【译文】亲爱的凯文：很感谢你在过去的几周中给我提供的指导和帮助。在刚来这个城市的时候我完全是一个陌生人。我甚至不知道怎么到市区。你知道的这是我第一次来这么大的城市。我买了一本城市指南，但是我依然发现在这个城市中有很多困难。街道和商店都让我很迷惑，于是我就只能待在家里。是你给我的宝贵向导让我能在这个城市中外出不会迷路。很感谢你的帮助。昨天我就独自一人到市中心购买了一些文具和其他用品。再过几天，我们就要开课了。下周的某个时间我再来看你，告诉你我这里发生的一切。李明谨上【感谢信开头常用句式和套话】I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you forThank you very much forI dont know how to thank you for your kindness to me.【感谢信结尾常用句式和套话】My thanks to you for your kindness and assistance when Iand my love for you, always!I must thank you again for your generous help.My true gratitude is beyond the words description.英语作文是典型的慢工出细活，日积月累，方能有成。祝各位考生能够按照自己的计划踏踏实实走好每一步，坚持不懈地到达理想的彼岸。2016考研英语：“任性”作文之祝贺信祝贺信是社交中的一种礼仪性信函，也是一种比较常见的信函，通常包括以下几个方面的内容：说明写作目的，表明祝贺事由，并表达热烈、诚挚的祝贺;围绕祝贺事件表述贺喜内容;表达美好祝福。祝贺信可以分为对公和对私，两者的语言表达有一定的区别。祝贺信的写作策略：说明事由并表达自己衷心的祝贺展开评论事件，赞扬收信人再次表达良好祝愿;在写作主要内容的时候，可以重点赞扬一下当事人的优秀能力和取得成就的原因，并展望他将来的美好发展前景等。【例题】Directions:你的合作公司的合作伙伴Smith先生最近晋升为了副主管，为他写一封祝贺信。You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET. Do not sign your own name at end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Dou not write the address.(10 points)【范文】Dear Mr. Smith,It is a pleasure to congratulate you on your recent promotion to Deputy Managing Director ABC Trading Company.Because of our close association with you over the past ten years, we know how well you are qualified for this important office. You earned the promotion through years of hard work and we are delighted to see your true ability win recognition.Again, congratulations and best wishes for continued success.Sincerely yours,Li Ming【译文】亲爱的史密斯先生：我衷心地祝愿你在最近被提升为ABC贸易公司的副主管。因为在过去的十年间我们一直合作，我很了解你非常胜任这一重要的职位。你通过自己多年的努力获得了提升的机会，并且凭自己的真正能力获得了认可。对此，我们甚感欣喜。再次祝贺并且祝愿你取得更大的成功。