2021_2021学年高中英语Unit3Ahealthylife第五学时Writing练习新人教版选修6.doc

第五学时Writing健康健康生活【写作素材】提示：黑体部分用本单元词汇表达。1吸烟是个坏习惯。首先，吸烟不仅危害吸烟者的健康，而且影响周围不吸烟者的健康。_答案：Smoking is a bad habit.Firstly, smoking not only does harm to the health of smokers, but also affects the health of non­smokers around them.2其次，香烟很贵。吸烟者不得不花很多钱购买香烟，很浪费钱。_答案：Secondly, cigarettes are very expensive.Smokers have to spend a lot of money buying them, which is a waste of money.3再次，因为吸烟者的粗心大意，可能会发生火灾，造成巨大的生命和财产损失。_答案：Thirdly, because of the smokers' carelessness, there can be fires which result in a great loss of life and property.4此外，我们青少年没有收入，没有吸烟的权利。如果染上这种坏习惯，事情将更加糟糕。_答案：Besides, we are teenagers and have no income.We have no right to smoke.It will be even worse if we get into the bad habit.【连句成篇】可选用first of all，定语从句，because of，besides等将以上句子连成一篇短文。_答案：Smoking is a bad habit.First of all，smoking not only does harm to the health of smokers，but also affects the health of non­smokers around them.Secondly，cigarettes are very expensive.Smokers have to spend a lot of money buying them，which is a waste of money.Thirdly，because of the smokers' carelessness，there can be fires which result in a great loss of life and property.Besides，we are teenagers and have no income.We have no right to smoke.It will be even worse if we get into the bad habit.【短文改错】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 HIV is spread through blood or fluid that the body make during sex. For an person to become infecting, blood or sexual fluid that carries the virus, has to get inside the body through broken skin or by injection. One days scientists will find the cure for HIV/AIDS. Until that happened, you need to protect you. Here is some things you can do to make sure you stay safety.答案：HIV is spread through blood or ,the) fluid that the body during sex.For person to become ， blood or sexual fluid that carries the virus, has to get inside the body through broken skin or by injection.One scientists will find cure for HIV/AIDS.Until that ， you need to protect .Here some things you can do to make sure you stay .如何回复建议信技巧点拨写回复建议信时，首先要分析问题，表明自己的观点；其次，针对问题提出建议，并说明原因；最后，提出期望，希望收信者积极行动，改进现状，并礼貌地结束全文。同时应注意以下几点。1要素要齐全。建议信的回信和建议信一样，通常由六部分构成：信头(发信人的地址和发信日期)；信内地址(收信人姓名、职位、地址等)；称呼；正文；结束语；签名。有时信头和信内地址可以省略。2态度要诚恳而有礼貌。不管对方提出的建议对自己是否可行，都应该认真对待并对对方表示感谢。3客观分析，表明态度。对对方提出的建议要准确理解、认真分析，然后结合自己的实际情况表明自己的态度是接受还是拒绝。4简明扼要，以理服人。在说明自己接受尤其是拒绝对方建议的原因时，一定要语气柔和，逻辑分明，重点突出，做到纳拒有理。常用表达1首段：引出问题。I am sorry you have had so much trouble in.You have asked for my advice on.and I will try to make some suggestions.I feel greatly honored to be trusted.2主体：提出提议。In my opinion，you would be wise to take the following action.First of all，.；Meanwhile，.；In addition.It's important for you to.3结尾：提出期望。Cheer up！Your troubles will soon be over.Where there is a will，there is a way.Don't lose heart，whatever happens.I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.Please let me know if I can help further.假如你是李华，你跟你的朋友Paul聊天，他表示学习压力很大，请你给他写封信，给他提一些建议。1将自己的问题告诉老师和同学，请求得到他们的帮助。2不要总想着考试成绩，要多想想自己在哪些方面进步了，这样就会给自己自信。3多做运动，运动可以帮助自己缓解压力，并且有助于睡眠。4你对他的祝福。注意：1.词数：100左右。2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3开头语和结束语已为你写好。Dear Paul，_Yours sincerely，Li Hua答案：Dear_Paul，I quite sympathize with you and understand the great trouble you are suffering from just because the problem you are facing is very common among us students.Here are some suggestions for you. Firstly, I suggest you communicate your trouble with your teachers and classmates so as to get help from them.Secondly, you are not supposed to think about your exams all the time, which only makes you more stressed out.Instead, you should think about the progress you have made in your study, which will surely increase your own confidence.In addition, it would be better for you to do more exercise in your spare time to relieve your stress because sports will also help you sleep better at night.I hope you will get out of your trouble sooner and live happily. Yours_sincerely，Li_Hua