高中优质公开课教学课件推选——如何在高考英语作文中增加细节.ppt

Howtoaddreasonabledetailstoyourarticle,假定你是李华。上周日在地铁站捡到了英国人Steven的护照。请你用英语给你市某英文报社编辑写一封信，内容包括：1.简述时间过程;2.交代护照相关信息;3.委托报社刊登招领启事.注意:1.词数100左右2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,广东一模书面表达,一个问题,主体信息写完往往只有60-70个字，不足100词，怎么弥补词数？,需要“适当增加细节，以使行文连贯”。,Deareditor,ImLiHua,ahighschoolstudentinourcity.Imwritingtotellyouapieceofurgentinformation.IpickedupapassportlastSundayinthesubwaystationwhenIwastakingaridehome.TherewasnobodyaroundwhenIfounditonawaitingbench.TheownerofitisStevenwhocomesfromEngland.Havinglostthepassport,hemustbeveryanxious,butIhavenoideahowtoreturnittohim.SoIneedyourhelp.Iwishyoucouldpostanoticeonyournewspapertotellhimaboutthemissingpassport,sothathecangetitback.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucoulddomethefavor.Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua,结果,交际语,心理感受,具体化,同位语,原因,如何适当增加细节,增加同位语补全前因后果或目的适当将写作内容具体化写出个人感受、评价或后果补充功能性（交际性）语言,Whatkindofinformationcanoftenbeaddedtoyourarticle?,1增加同位语,1IamLiHua,_(我们学校的学生会主席)./_(来自中国的一位交换生).2.Iwanttohaveapenfriend,_(希望是一位跟我有相同兴趣的女孩).,ChairmanoftheStudentsUnionofmyschool.,anexchangestudentfromChina.,hopefullyagirlwithinterestssimilartomine.,2.补充前因后果或目的,_(因为知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣），Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinthisactivity.,_(为了获得一些实践经验)Implanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncompany.,(1)KnowingthatyoushowgreatinterestinChinesetraditionalculture,(2)Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience,_(由于我有过丢身份证的经历），IcanfeelhowanxiousMrStevenwillbenow.,(3)SinceIhavetheexperienceoflosingmyIDcard,（1)Theactivitywillbeheld_(具体时间、地点）(2)IknowtheownerisSteven_(相关身份信息)3WhenIreceivedthedictionary,Ifoundthat_(具体存在问题如错印、缺页等),3.适当将写作内容具体化,from9a.m.to10a.m.onApril11inClassroom501.,fromEngland,aged38,married.,thereweresomemisprintsandpagesfrom23-45weremissing.,4增加结果或者是效果,(1)Ithinkitisagoodchancetoappreciatelocaloperas,_(这必将有助于你学到更多的中国文化）(2)Wecansetoutearly,_(以便我们有更多的时间阅读和挑选图书）(3)Therearequiteafewmissingpages,_(变得无法使用),sothatwecanhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks,whichwillsurelyhelpyoulearnmoreaboutChineseculture.,makingitimpossibletouse.,1_（如果你能帮我这个忙，我将不胜感激（2）_（期待着你的早日回复）,5.补充功能性（交际性）语言,(3)_(如果有什么能帮到你的，请不要犹豫告诉我）,Iwouldgreatlyappreciateitifyoucoulddomethefavour.,Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.,IfthereisanythingIcandoforyou,pleasedonthesitatetoletmeknow.,practice(addreasonabledetails）,1.ImLiHua,_.(同位语)2.Imwritingtoaskyoutohelpmefindtheownerofapassport,_.(具体来源等)3Withcaution,Iopenedtheplasticbag,_.（结果）4Lastweek,IboughtanEnglishdictionaryfromyouronlinebookstore_(目的/原因)5_(若你能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激).,假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写封回信。要点：1、参加中文学习班。2、看中文书刊、电视。3、学唱中文歌曲。4、交中国朋友。注意：1.词数：100左右。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语已为你写好.DearPeter,ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.,Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinese.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.,DearPeter,ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyoullbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyoulllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.BestwishesLiHua,(2016全国课标卷)假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教MsJenkins写信，请她修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,ImyourstudentLiHua.Imapplyingforapart-timejobataforeigncompanyinmycityduringthesummervacation.CouldyoucorrectthelanguageandtheformatoftheapplicationletterandresumeIhavewritten?Theyareintheattachment.,DearPeter,ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyoullbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyoulllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.BestwishesLiHua,并不是每篇文章都需要使用到这5种增加细节的方法根据实际，进行合理的、适当的增加,