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出国留学申请书_出国留学申请书出国留学申请书范文一从高一到高三毕业学习成果有了明显的提高，在这三年中多次获得学校颁发的三好生奖状，进步之星奖，优秀学员奖和多项运动会奖状等。在中学毕业以后，我想去日本留学深造。自小就在城市中生活的我非常憧憬去经济发达的大城市去学习。同时对于自己家乡落后有着深刻的责任感。日本是当今世界上世界上经济最发达的国家之一，电子产品在世界市场的占有率居于榜首。具有强大的海洋捕捞船队和水产品养殖业，渔业发达。留学条件良好，气候四季分明。环境美丽，有漂亮的樱花，北海道的樱花。去这些漂亮的地方是我小时侯幻想。有优秀的老师和先进的教学设备以及先进的教化理念。于是从上中学起先我就定下了将来去日本留学的想法。xxxx年2月底我向家里说明白我想去日本留学的意愿。在当时就得到了家人的许可。于是从xxxx年的3月份起先我到XX日语培训学校学习日语，平常的上课时间我正常到学校学习中学的课程到了，周末就上XX日语培训班去学习日语，到现在为止我的日语水平已达到运用最基本的日常用语和进行简洁的阅读的程度。日本以后，准备先到语言学校学习。为自己将来进一步的深造做好语言上的打算。在此基础上，依据本人的个人喜好和特长，想在日本的高校学习物流管理。日本是个经济文化旺盛发达的.国家，尤其改革开放以来，中日两国经济文化艺术的沟通更加深化。当我学有所成回国后，将致力于家乡的经济发展，用在日本所学的先进的管理方去经营自己家乡的企业。也情愿在日友好中日文化经济沟通方面贡献自己的聪慧才智。父母支持我的留学恳求，能够支付我在日本的一切费用。我到日本以后，保证遵守日本的法律遵守学校的规章制度。好好学习，增长本事，成为一个有用的人才真诚地希望我的留学申请会被批准。申请人：申请日期：出国留学申请书范文二(一)自我陈诉、开宗明义、直入主题型I am applying for admission to the Ph.D. program in Electrical and Computer Engineering, at the University of California, Berkeley. I present my research experience and study objectives in this statement of purpose. I would like to build on my solid education and experience as an engineer for a Ph. D. degree in computer science at a distinguished university. I wish in particular to be trained at an advanced level in software systems, database systems, applied-AI and knowledge-based systems. My ultimate goal is to become a professor teaching computer science at a Chinese university. I believe that advanced training in a quality graduate program will help me realize my goal.(二)叙述故事，说理型 1.叙述自己的家庭故事My father is a chartered accountant and my mother is a banker. During my days at Engineering College I used to go to my father's office and help him manage his portfolio of equities and other financial instruments. This was the time I learnt the first lesson of finance from my father i.e. risk and return are proportionate. In 1998 when I was in the second year the China stock market crashed. But fortunately, my father had a well-diversified portfolio because of which our returns were protected from the downside risk. This was when I learnt the second principle of finance from my father i.e. diversification reduces risk. While I understood these two principles intuitively, it produced in me a strong urge to learn and understand the complex theory behind the working of Finance. This, I believe, was a turning point in my career. I made up my mind to pursue a career in Finance and hence decided to do a Masters program in Business Administration.2. 叙述事务，引出自己的爱好、观点。As I was finishing college, my mother had both of her hips replaced with artificial ones because all of the cartilage in her hip joints had worn away and it was very painful for her to walk. I found it fascinating that engineers, orthopedic surgeons, and biologists had all worked together to design these artificial joints that completely transform. people's lives by giving them back pain-free mobility, and I knew at that moment that this was an area about which I wanted to learn more. In China these days, university graduates who have not been lucky enough to settle into their dream jobs often look to graduated studies as a way to kill the time that they cannot otherwise spend meaningfully. I am prepared to go against the social conventions by putting on hold a successful research career that promised to be even more successful. With eight years of productive and highly valued practical research behind me, I now would like to revert to a more intellectual life so that I can conduct more theoretical discourses.(三)引用谚语、名言等。When asked how to manage to mask remarkable statues, the French sculptor Auguste Rodin answered, “I choose a block of marble and chop off whatever I don't need.(法国雕塑家罗丹说：“给我一块大理石，把多余的去掉。”)” For me, life is just a block of marble-whether the marble can be turned into a remarkable statue depends on your natural talents, diligence and a sense of duty. During over four years my college life, I have been dreaming of being a perfect female researcher so that I can enhance more young girls confidence in scientific research and encourage them to promote the development of science as men do. For Knowledge Itself Is Power.This is one of my favorite precepts and at this point in my life when I am about to complete my graduation and my future spreads in front of me like a dream, this adage has never influenced my life more than this before.(四)对该学科的相识感受型For the past three years, my undergraduate education has exposed me to the various sub-fields of Computer Science (CS). However, our syllabus has focused mainly on traditional CS topics, such as Operating systems and single-CPU systems. We have had barely a glimpse of the newer technologies that are likely to change the way computing is done in not-so-distant future. The desire to examine such subjects in greater detail is what has prompted me to opt for graduate study. Due to the comprehensiveness of Chinas“reform. and open”policies, economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its global position. As a senior at Beijing University majoring in Economics, I feel that my field is fundamental to the progress of my country. Yet, at the same time, I realize only too well that what I have learned as an undergraduate is far from enough. Therefore, it is my desire to pursue a graduate degree I Economics at your university. If accepted, my intended concentration would be Economic Development and Public Economics出国留学申请书范文三1.回答了问题听起来似乎很简洁，但事实上许多同学的初稿都没有具体地回答问题。皇后高校的goals essay，问的其实很简洁“What are your goals at Queens and beyond”(对将来在皇后的学习生活有什么目标)，有的同学既没有明确说出自己的goals是做什么或者goals跟在不在皇后无关，对beyond也什么都没说。许多时候，同学们只顾着说明为什么自己适合所申请的专业，而没有干脆回答essay question。作为读者，招生官确定会刚起先充溢期盼、然后有点分神、心里不禁会想“什么时候才能回答问题啊!”。2.冗长句子/句型结构国内中学课程主要集中于书面考试这一块，似乎提高学生的写作实力是相对欠缺的。专业老师表示十个人中只有一个人的文章是清楚、简洁、有劝服力的，也就是3 Cs原则(clear, compelling, and concise)。啰嗦的长句是特别大的一个问题。要知道录用看的不光是你写了什么内容、写作风格当然也是很重要的一个考量因素。假如招生老师看到许多冗长不通的句子，那基本上就告辞录用机会了。有一部特别出名的喜剧电影叫做婚礼傲客里面曾经有个这样的场景，瑞秋·麦克亚当斯要做婚礼致辞的时候，上台之前把话题丢给欧文·威尔逊的角色，然后他讲了这么一段话“I think youre better off going with something from the heart youre going to hear crickets!”，她也用这样的句式开头“I never thought my sister would find someone who cared about what other people thought as much as she did until I met Craig.”还记得听众是什么反应吗?高校里处理申请的老师也是这样的表情，常常会摇摇头、然后重新读一遍这个句子，找出对方究竟想要表达什么，再读一遍，同样的程序再读下一个句子，这种状况要尽量避开。大家肯定要留意，冗长表述不清的句子肯定要避开，我敢打赌，你的文章里至少有一个!3.正确的语法跟上一条差不多，肯定要仔细检查essay中的语法运用是正确的，尤其是那些一遍一遍强调过的。其中最常见的一种就是句子的最末是介词，谁知道读你这篇essay的录用老师会不会介意啊，不过把风险降到最小还是好的，运用适当的语法。举个例子，BAD: “She is a person I cannot cope with”GOOD, 但是还不够有信服力: “She is a person with whom I cannot cope”BEST: “It is behaviour I will not tolerate”那个“最好”的句子表达的是相同的意思，就是换了一种方法，避开了运用介词。4.非正式写作大家都想自己的essay真实可信，甚至有点口语化，但是千万不要太随意。“My goal is to earn a good job”这种就不应当是18岁的人说出来的话了.小孩子才这么说。尽量让你的句子看起来很高级，但还是表达了你自己，换成“I am determined to obtain a challenging and rewarding career”就好多了。5.要有创新性Sir Ken Robinson最闻名的“学校谋杀了孩子们的创建性”这个理论被不少人接受。相同的的答案实在是太多太多了，肯定要有不同，有自己的特点，但读起来是让人觉得有道理的能接受的。招生官想看的不是一个“统一的答案”，而是“你的答案”。整理好自己的结构、有创新性、对自己和自己的目标相识更深刻，你最想从高校学到什么，这才是一篇好的文书该有的东西。