【高中英语写作指导】高中英语作文--道歉信解析ppt课件.ppt

A Letter of Apology道歉信文体概述（道歉信文体概述（Letter of apology) 道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事，道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后给对方赔给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后给对方赔礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。通常包括以礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。通常包括以下三部分内容：下三部分内容：1. 开门见山，表明写信目的，表示歉意。开门见山，表明写信目的，表示歉意。2. 说明出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施。说明出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施。3. 再次致歉，请求原谅，希望得到理解再次致歉，请求原谅，希望得到理解(语语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实)。常用语块常用语块1.因某事向某人道歉因某事向某人道歉 _2. 向向说对不起说对不起 _3. 接受我的道歉接受我的道歉 _4. 为某事原谅某人为某事原谅某人 _5. 并非故意做某事并非故意做某事 _ have no intention to do sth.apologize to sb. for sth. / make an apology to sb. for sth.say sorry toaccept my apologyforgive sb. for sth.6. 弥补；赔偿弥补；赔偿 _7. 赔偿；偿还赔偿；偿还 _8. 给你带来不便给你带来不便 _9. 给你带来许多麻烦给你带来许多麻烦 _10. 更加小心更加小心 _be more carefulmake up forpay for / compensate forcause you inconveniencecause you much trouble11. 犯这样愚蠢的错误犯这样愚蠢的错误 _12. 应当受到责备应当受到责备 _13. 承担责任承担责任 _14. 难以接受的后果难以接受的后果 _15. 下不为例下不为例 _never let it happen againmake such a stupid mistakebe to blamebe responsible for/shoulder /undertake the responsibilityan unacceptable result/consequence写作三步曲写作三步曲Step 1：审题：审题养成重视审题的习惯。养成重视审题的习惯。思考的问题思考的问题样题分析样题分析第几人称？（第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？文章的题材是什么？怎样安排信息点的顺序？怎样安排信息点的顺序？ (order)动作是什么时候发生的？动作是什么时候发生的？ (when)第一人称第一人称一封道歉信一封道歉信说理的逻辑性说理的逻辑性一般现在时一般现在时93.提出补救办法提出补救办法 2.说明具体原因说明具体原因道歉信写作4步走写信的一般要求写信的一般要求1.内容要简单内容要简单对于题中所给的内容：对于题中所给的内容：全面全面对于自己发挥的内容：对于自己发挥的内容：简单简单写熟悉的，会写的！写熟悉的，会写的！ 2.结构要清晰结构要清晰开头段：开头段：中间段：中间段： 结尾段结尾段: 3.语言要精彩语言要精彩：4.注意内容之间的连接注意内容之间的连接1.表示歉意表示歉意4.再次致歉望理解再次致歉望理解造句能力 +高分套话10lBasic structure and expressions第一段第一段:简明说明写信目的，为自己的过失表示歉意，简明说明写信目的，为自己的过失表示歉意，希望得到对方的谅解。希望得到对方的谅解。道歉的表达：1.I feel sorry for my failure to 2.I am awfully sorry that I cannot 3.I am very sorry for 4.I am writing to express my sincere apology for my 5. I regret to inform you that I am unable to 6. I feel guilty for what I have done to you.pick you up at the airportattend your party. my rudeness/thoughtlessness / bad manners.11l第二段：详细说明当时情况，解释原因，语气第二段：详细说明当时情况，解释原因，语气要诚恳。要诚恳。1. Now let me explain what happened to me that day.2. I had intended to 3. I am afraid what I have done has caused much inconvenience to you.4. I am to blame for this silly mistake.5.Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.6.I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.12l第三段：提出补救方法，具体提出自己的想法，第三段：提出补救方法，具体提出自己的想法，希望能弥补过失，消除误会。希望能弥补过失，消除误会。1. In order to remove our misunderstanding, I would like to invite .2. To make up for my fault, I will3. To compensate for your loss, I decide to .4. I wish you could give me a chance to make up for my fault.5. I hope the settlement of this matter can meet your wishes.13l第四段：再次表示歉意，愿意为此负责，希望以后不再出现类似不愉快事件。1. Please accept my most sincere apology again.2. I promise that I will never make such a stupid mistake again.3. I assure you that it will never happen again.4.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apologies.5.Once again, Im sorry for any inconvenience caused/you have sustained. Step 3：写作：写作15道歉信模板一Dear Bob, I am truly sorry that _（道歉的原（道歉的原因）因）. The reason is that_（介绍的原（介绍的原因）因）.Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 习作欣赏习作欣赏Dear Sir/Madam, I am awfully (很很;糟糕地糟糕地)sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrow from your library last week. The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.I read them every evening and intend to finish it the next week, but unfortunately yesterday until Icame back to my room, it was nowhere to be found. I promise to pay for the lost of the book. I know money cannot cover the loss and I am blame. I will go to your place in Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(赔偿赔偿) for the missed book. I apologize again for any inconveniences or trouble caused by my careless. I promise that such a thing will never happen again. 习作欣赏习作欣赏Dear Sir/Madam, I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrow from your library last week. The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.I read them every evening and intend to finish it the next week, but unfortunately yesterday until Icame back to my room, it was nowhere to be found. I promise to pay for the lost of the book. I know money cannot cover the loss and I am blame. I will go to your place in Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(赔偿赔偿) for the missed book. I apologize again for any inconveniences or trouble caused by my careless. I promise that such a thing will never happen again. 第一段：开门见山道歉并解释失误的过程第一段：开门见山道歉并解释失误的过程第二段：承诺弥补或赔偿及措施第二段：承诺弥补或赔偿及措施第三段：再次表示歉意并承诺不再犯类似错误第三段：再次表示歉意并承诺不再犯类似错误习作修改习作修改(做短文改错做短文改错)Dear Sir/Madam,I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrow from your library last week. The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.I read them every evening and intend to finish it the next week, but unfortunately yesterday until I came back to my room, it was nowhere to be found. I promise to pay for the lost of the book. borrowed it when loss I know money cannot cover the loss and I am blame. I will go to your place in Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(赔偿赔偿) for the missed book. I apologize again for any inconveniences or trouble caused by my careless. I promise that such a thing will never happen again.Yours sincerely,Li Mingto on missing inconvenience carelessness 诵读经典范文诵读经典范文Dear Sir/Madam, I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrowed from your library last week. The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.I read it every evening and intend to finish it next week, but unfortunately yesterday when Icame back to my room, it was nowhere to be found. I promise to pay for the loss of the book. I know money cannot cover the loss and I am to blame. I will go to your place on Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(赔偿赔偿) for the missing book. I apologize again for any inconvenience or trouble caused by my carelessness. I promise that such a thing will never happen again. 第一段：开门见山道歉并解释失误的过程第一段：开门见山道歉并解释失误的过程第二段：承诺弥补或赔偿及措施第二段：承诺弥补或赔偿及措施第三段：再次表示歉意并承诺不再犯类似错误第三段：再次表示歉意并承诺不再犯类似错误诵读经典范文诵读经典范文Dear Sir/Madam, I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrowed from your library last week. The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.I read it every evening and intend to finish it next week, but unfortunately yesterday when Icame back to my room, it was nowhere to be found. I promise to pay for the loss of the book. I know money cannot cover the loss and I am to blame. I will go to your place on Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation(赔偿赔偿) for the missing book. I apologize again for any inconvenience or trouble caused by my carelessness. I promise that such a thing will never happen again. Lets take actions!Write an a letter of apology in 15 minutes.课堂练习课堂练习 假定你是李华，寒假中作为交流生短期去英国假定你是李华，寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训，回国时因为匆忙，把房东培训，回国时因为匆忙，把房东Bob的音乐光盘的音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给Bob写一封道写一封道歉信，要点如下：歉信，要点如下：1. 对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意。对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意。2. 提出解决的办法。提出解决的办法。3. 再次请求原谅。再次请求原谅。 注意：注意：1. 词数词数100左右。左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。开头语和结束语已为你写好。 A good essay should be1. complete 2. coherent3. accurate4. various 5. neatDear Bob, I am writing to make an apology to you for the fact that I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week. Yesterday I came back from England and found it in my luggage. I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present. The CD which I borrowed from you is made in England, so I believe you can find another one in your local store. How about your buying another CD by yourself and I will pay for it? If you cannot find a similar one, I would send it back to you through a post office. And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know. I am terribly sorry again for my carelessness. Please forgive me for any inconvenience caused. I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li HuaHomework：课外作业课外作业 假定你是李华，你的美国老师假定你是李华，你的美国老师Mr. Evans要求要求你们明天下午去听一个英国历史的讲座。你因故你们明天下午去听一个英国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你写一封信向不能参加。请你写一封信向Mr. Evans道歉并说明道歉并说明情况。要点如下：情况。要点如下：1. 表示歉意。表示歉意。2. 理由：父亲去北京出差，母亲生病住院需要人理由：父亲去北京出差，母亲生病住院需要人照顾。照顾。3. 询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座。询问：是否有录音，以便补听讲座。注意：注意：1. 词数词数100左右。左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。开头语和结束语已为你写好。Dear Mr. Evans, I am indeed sorry to tell you that I wont be able to attend the lecture on English history tomorrow afternoon. My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to hospital last night and my father is on a business trip to Beijing now. I am afraid that I will have to take care of her these days. How about your buying another CD by yourself and I will pay for it? If you cannot find a similar one, I would send it back to you through a post office. And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know. However, I am actually very interested in English society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk. Please allow me to say sorry again. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.Yours sincerely,Li Hua套用句式套用句式1.我写这封信是因我写这封信是因向你致歉。向你致歉。2. 请接受我真诚的道歉。请接受我真诚的道歉。1. I am writing to apologize to you for /I am writing to say sorry to you for2. Please accept my sincere apology.3. 对于我说的话对于我说的话/做的事，我确实感到很抱歉。但做的事，我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信，我并非故意要请相信，我并非故意要4. 我真心希望你能理解我的处境我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地为我设身处地地为我考虑，并接受我的道歉。考虑，并接受我的道歉。5. 对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。3. I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did, but please believe I had no intention to5. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.4. I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apology.