高中英语写作课ppt课件.ppt

我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？ Content: everything needed included which is related to your view.(内容要完整内容要完整) Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾好的开头结尾)* Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理结构合理,行文流畅行文流畅) Language:* No Chinglish (避免中文式英文避免中文式英文)* No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误没有语法错误)* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Im very pleased to tell you the changes of my life since the reduction of learning load was brought in. Before that, I was often exhausted at weekends. I attended school and had classes the whole day. In the evening，I was often forced to do my boring homework and I could not go to bed until 11:30. Since the program of reducing learning load was introduced, my life, however, has become much more interesting. I frequently pay a visit to museums, drop in at computer rooms and draw pictures in my leisure time. After lunch, I watch TV, read stories and look through newspapers to enrich myself. No longer do I stay up; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 p.m. In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now. Enjoy the following paragraphs:我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. The reasons can be listed as follow. _, most families are too poor to send their children to school. _, they have no choice but to stay at home and make money. as a result; In addition ; To begin with ; HoweverTo begin withAs a result使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词 Use proper linking words我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 _, some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school. Therefore, they dont let them go to school. _, some children are not interested in their studies. _, some wouldnt like to go to school. In my opinion; Finally ; To make matters worse ; In additionIn additionFinallyTo make matters worse我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 As far as Im concerned, all the children including girls should be educated. _, the whole society should put great emphasis on childrens education _ theyll play an important part in the future of our country one day. besides; However ; because ; Therefore Besidesbecause我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Avoid Chinglish!1) Traffic in Shanghai is too crowded. 2) There has a highway connected with Beijing.3) Though the transport is good ，but it fades next to our natural resources.4) I forgot my dictionary at home. 5) It will cost us much money to buy one. heavy.leftistake我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物改错It built in the 1980s.In our city ,the public order is better than other places.Buy a cellphone is too expensive.The public order is very well.At the last ，I hope you can invest here.The government is like investors to come here.Let me introduce this city for you.Thank you for you come.I think you can happy.To my surprised, my father agreed to buy one.that ofgoodlikestoyour comingbewasBuyingsurprise我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物改错 A lot of families are much more poor. Im very happy I can write letter to you. Some are not interest in lessons. I think every child is equality. Because of their parents dont have enough money . I can keep touch with my family. Some parents think go to school is not good. Every child including girls should have the chance to accept education. There are many families are poor. Some parents in village think that girls are not important as well as boys.veryinterestedequalgoingreceivetheina我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Adopt a variety of sentence patterns 使用较丰富的句式使用较丰富的句式 When he arrived, he gave me an e-mail immediately. (使用使用V-ing形式形式) 2. Once it is seen, it can never be forgotten. (过去分词过去分词) _, he gave me an e-mail immediately.When arriving/On his arrival,_,it can never be forgotten.Once seen我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物3. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (使用名词性从句使用名词性从句)4. People suggest that the conference be put off. (改被动语态改被动语态)_the little girl knows so many things.What surprises him is that_the conference be put off.It is suggested that我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物5. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (使用强调句型使用强调句型)6. I passed the physics exam because of your help. (用虚拟语气）用虚拟语气）_he had read the news in the newspaper _ he knew what had happened. _the physics exam _your help. It was not until thatI couldnt have passed but for without 我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物7. I wont believe what he says. (使用状语使用状语 从句从句)8. The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (用定语从句用定语从句)_he says, I wont believe. The girl_is spoken highly of. No matter whatwhose composition was well writtenWhatever我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物9. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）（用并列句）10. He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句使用倒装句)_he come back from Beijing _he was sent abroad._make rapid progress.Study hard, and youllNo sooner had than Hardly . when.我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物Please learn to Your compositionwhen you finish it from now.我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物 书面表达评价表书面表达评价表 项目项目 自评自评 他评他评 1.书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划? 2.句子开头注意大小写了吗句子开头注意大小写了吗? 3.有没有注意标点符号有没有注意标点符号? 4将文章分段了吗将文章分段了吗?分成了几段分成了几段? 5有单词拼写错误吗有单词拼写错误吗?几个几个? 6.有时态错误吗有时态错误吗?误用了哪种时态误用了哪种时态? 7.注意主谓一致了吗注意主谓一致了吗? 8.有没有语态的错误有没有语态的错误? 9.有没有使用关联词有没有使用关联词?使用得当吗使用得当吗? 10.有没有词性的错误有没有词性的错误?哪一种哪一种? 11.简单句表达正确吗简单句表达正确吗? 12.是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构? 13.表达方式是否多样化表达方式是否多样化?注意长短句搭配了吗注意长短句搭配了吗? 14.有没有用好词好句有没有用好词好句?用了哪些用了哪些?我吓了一跳，蝎子是多么丑恶和恐怖的东西，为什么把它放在这样一个美丽的世界里呢？但是我也感到愉快，证实我的猜测没有错：表里边有一个活的生物