小学英语创意写作讲义四小时课堂.doc
Words order in simple statementTo make a correct simple statement, remember the following golden rules:There are maximum six parts of a simple statement.Ø forms：6123456WhenWhoWhichWhatAction(verb)WhoWhichWhatHowWhereWhen Last weekIwentto the theatre.The playwasvery interesting.Idid not enjoyit.Scrambled sentencesa / fix / mechanic / carsat / the / cry / night / babyeast / the / rise / the / in / suher / children / worry / always / about / shebrush / breakfast / his / he / after / teethspeak / students / the / the / classroom / English / inthe / carry / MP3 / she / all / player / a / timeArrange the words to make affirmative sentences. Place time expressions at the end of the sentences.Positive Sentences in Simple futrurego / now / home / will / I give / the present / tomorrow / we / him / will her / met / last night / at / we / the station was / last week / he / in hospital in Greece / spend / I / will / next year / my holiday must / at five o'clock / leave / we / the house the library / take / I / the book / will / today / to my mum / breakfast / in the morning / made tonight / want / to the cinema / to go / we wrote / last week / they / at school / a test Positive Sentences in Present Progressivehe cat /to sleep on the chair -Jane and Emily / to do their homework -Bill / to wait at the bus stop -we / to listen to the radio -the children / to play a game -Laura / to walk the dog -Positive Sentences in Simple Pasthe / the question / answeryou / a question / askthe dog / barkthey / us / callwe / a mountain / climbJohn / stamps / collectwe / in London / liveI / hungry / bethey / a hamster / havehe / to school / goPositive Sentences in Past Progressiveyou / play / cardsAlice / walk / around the lakeCaron / listen / to the radiowe / read / a book about AustraliaLinda / look for / her ringFiona and Sam / visit / the castlePositive Sentences in Present Perfect SimpleBob / visit / his grandmaJimmy / play / on the computerSue and Walter / wash / their carAndrew / repair / his bikePhil / help / Anne with mathsRearrange the words to make a complete sentence. Begin each sentence with a capital letter and end it with a full stop or a question mark.1. were / hurt / the / seriously / in / accident. / Many people2. full / I had / a / I feel / lunch. / very / because / heavy3. My grandmother / during / was captured / the Japanese / by / the war.4. colourful / pretty. / The / flowers / make / the garden / look5. you / Disneyland? / enjoy / trip / to / Did / your6. showed / do / He / me / how / yesterday. / to / that7. every / Olympics / held / once / The / years. / four / are8. their / rode / instead / driving. / of / They / bikes9. the / in / the world. / is / animal / blue / largest / whale / The 翻译句子我经常做体育运动。我很擅长踢毽子。_他经常参加戏剧社。_你要收拾桌子。_你不应该吃太多肉。_去年我和家人去了昆明。_我们坐飞机去的。_我7岁的时候学会游泳的。_How to write a paragraph?Traffic Signal SystemGO = Topic Sentence: The sentence that tells what the paragraph will be about.CONTINUE = Supporting Sentences: These sentences add details to the topic sentence.STOP = Ending Sentence: This sentence closes the paragraph. It tells the reader that the paragraph is finished.School is very important.Teachers teach you how to add and subtract.You learn how to read books.You learn how to write and use computers.I think school is important for kids. Exercises: find the topic sentence! Look for the worksheet!Look at the following paragraphs. Translate the sentences and find the topic sentence of each paragraph. 1. 昨天我很忙，我7:00起床，然后在家做作业；午饭后，我洗碗碟；下午，我帮妈妈打扫房子；晚上我为家人煮晚饭，我很累，但我很开心。 Can you translate this paragraph into English？_2、 今年寒假，我和家人去了海南旅游，我们乘飞机去，在海南，我们游览了许多地方。我们还去了沙滩，那里的食物很美味，我们很开心。 Can you translate this paragraph into English？_3、 上个月，我和父母去了桂林，那里很漂亮，我不喜欢那里的食物，很辣。然后，我们去探望了祖父母，他们很高兴。我和我的表兄弟们玩，我们一起骑马，我们遇到了许多趣事，真是好玩！ Can you translate this paragraph into English？_4、 明天是星期六，我和我的弟弟们打算先去买衣服，然后打算去看望我的阿姨，我们打算和我们的表哥一起做模型，并且帮阿姨打扫房间。 Can you translate this paragraph into English？_5、 下周是一个假期，我不用上学，我打算和朋友一起玩，我们打算去公园野餐。这个星期六，我们打算到超市买一些水果和食物，我们打算在公园照一些相，我们会玩得很开心。 Can you translate this paragraph into English？_6、 我生病了，我不舒服，我感冒发烧，我没有上学，妈妈带我去看医生，医生说我应该吃一些药，好好休息，我希望我快点好起来。 Can you translate this paragraph into English？_Key1Yesterday I was very busy. I got up at 7:00 a.m. Then I did my homework at home. After lunch, I washed the dishes. In the afternoon, I helped my mom clean up the house. I cooked the dinner for my family in the evening. I was very tired, but I was very happy. 2This winter holiday, my family and I went on a trip to Hainan. We went there by airplane. In Hainan, we visited many places. We also went to the beach. The food was tasty there. We were very happy. 3 Last month, my parents and I went to Guilin. It was very beautiful there. I didnt like the food there. It was spicy. Then we went to visit my grandparents. They were very happy. I played with my cousins. We met many interesting things. It was funny. 4 Tomorrow is Saturday. My brothers and I are going to shop for some clothes first, and then we are going to visit our aunt. We are going to make models with our cousin and help aunt clean the room. 5Next week is a vacation, I dont need to go to school. Im going to play with my friends. Were going to have a picnic in the park. This Saturday, were going to buy some fruit and food in the supermarket. Were going to take some photos in the park. We will be very happy. 6 I was sick. I didnt feel well. I got a cold and a fever. I didnt go to school. Mother took me to see the doctor. The doctor said I should take some medicine and have a rest. I hope I will be better soon. Can you write about yourself?_Can you write about your favorite book or cartoon?_Which season do you like best?_How to organize your ideas?Sample Essay My HobbyMy favorite hobby is playing drums. I spend a lot of my free time playing drums. I started learning to play drums when I was 9 years old. I played in my schools band. When I was 12, I got a private drum teacher and started to really enjoy playing. My parents bought me a drum set and I started practicing every day after school. It was very loud, but my mother never complained. I improved a lot, and playing drums has been my favorite hobby ever since.Now, I play drums in a band with my friend Dan, who plays guitar. We write songs, perform, and practice twice a week. Its still as fun as it was when I first started playing!Prepare to Write! Write an essay about one of your hobbies.Look at the sample essay “My Hobby Playing Drums” if you need help.Answer these questions in your essay:ü What is your hobby?ü When did you start doing this hobby?ü Why do you like doing this hobby?ü How did you learn this hobby?ü When do you usually do this hobby?ü How often do you do this hobby?(every day, one a week, twice a month, on weekends, etc.)Use this sentence pattern in your essay:start/stop verb+ingè I started playing basketball when I was 5 years old.è I started reading novels when I was very young.*Remember to use the past tense when you talk about things that happened in the past!Essay My Hobby _
